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1Fumiska Clan  Empty Fumiska Clan Sat Sep 28, 2013 3:10 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


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Clan: Fumiska

Kekkei Genkai: Shuriken Mastery

Elements: Any

Specialization: Ninjutsu, Bukijutsu

Location: Konohagakure

Clan History: Ever since the founding of the Clan 350 years ago all of their members have specialized in all kinds of shuriken related jutsu and fighting styles until the clan near extinction 50 years ago when 20 of the clans 25 members were murdered in the middle of the night and the clan locked their doors to anyone from the outside and eventually faded into obscurity.

Kekkei Genkai Description: This clan specilzes in Shuriken no jutsu and Have made a jutsu that lets them make shuriken when they run out. Each member of this clan Get a custom C rank Fuma Shuriken for free as an inheritance.
Clan members also have +1 tier to reaction time, due to their long hours of hand eye coordination training with their shurikens.
Drawbacks: Due to clan members long range to mid range style they get -1 tier to their strength for Taijutsu damage and take +1 tier of damagenwhen its used against them.
Members of this clan cannot take senjutsu.


Members: None at the moment

Kekkei genkai jutsu:



Last edited by Kikisu on Thu May 29, 2014 10:52 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Sat Sep 28, 2013 11:14 pm

Nagare

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You're missing your coding, you'll need that to get approved.

As for the clan itself, it's fine.

Buzzsaw Shuriken - rather than giving a +1 in rank, just say how much deeper it cuts. C-Ranks can't give +1s.

3Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Sun Sep 29, 2013 12:15 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


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Fixed it

4Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Sun Sep 29, 2013 8:31 pm

Yōsei

Yōsei


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remove the RPS from the buzz-saw and we're probably good to go.

and state that it cant cut through bone with a c-rank fuma shurieken.

5Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Sun Sep 29, 2013 8:37 pm

Yōsei

Yōsei


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approved~

6Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Wed May 21, 2014 12:44 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Up for review~

What exactly does a +1 in projectile proficiency entail? o.o

7Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Wed May 21, 2014 4:57 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


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Meaning that they recieve plus one to damage to any shuriken based jutsu

8Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Thu May 22, 2014 10:19 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Passive +1 to jutsu damage of any kind no longer exist. That will have to be replaced or edited out.

9Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Sat May 24, 2014 12:57 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Bump, I don't actually know what you want to do with this clan. You could replace the +1 to strength with the ability to use projectiles one rank higher than normal. If not I can archive this clan. It's up to you.

10Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Thu May 29, 2014 1:05 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Warning: Failure to act upon this update within 72 hours will result in the archiving of the clan.

11Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Thu May 29, 2014 3:19 pm

Wolfgang

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I thnik ill edit it up tnoight, i didnt have time lately XD so ill get to it tonight sorry XD

12Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Thu May 29, 2014 10:53 pm

Kikisu

Kikisu


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Edited

13Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Mon Jun 02, 2014 12:47 am

Noriko

Noriko


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Chakra shuriken and Shuriken Return are fine, but Buzzsaw Shuriken seems like bukijutsu (due to you imbuing your chakra). Find a different way to word it (probably just spinning it at very, very high speed) and you'll be fine as Ninjutsu.

14Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:28 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Buzzsaw and shuriken return need to be bukijutsu.

15Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Thu Jul 10, 2014 3:13 pm

Mikage

Mikage


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72 hours for editing are now up. This will be locked for staff edits or archived. Message Mikage with any concerns.

16Fumiska Clan  Empty Re: Fumiska Clan Wed Jun 03, 2015 9:48 pm

Tame

Tame


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Jutsu changed to Bukijutsu as requested, and jutsu tweaked to fit guidelines. Approved.

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