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1Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Empty Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Sun Jun 30, 2013 1:53 pm

Owydelu

Owydelu


D-rank
Name:Growth
Rank:C-Rank
Species:Rabbit
Appearance:
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Personality:He's a happy Bunny all day. When it comes to serious things, he is ready to fight by Owydelu's side.
Techniques:
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Last edited by Owydelu on Mon Jul 01, 2013 12:32 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Empty Re: Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Mon Jul 01, 2013 3:16 am

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1/2 Approved,

3Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Empty Re: Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Mon Jul 01, 2013 12:29 pm

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Duration is too long for the cooldown on your sensory technique (needs to be 1.5-2x the duration). Also, it doesn't mention a chakra drain per post.

4Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Empty Re: Growth[C-Ranked Pet] Mon Jul 01, 2013 12:35 pm

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Approved for 500 Ryo.

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