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1Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Empty Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Fri Jul 12, 2013 5:04 am

Akai

Akai


D-rank
Name: Zenbu
Rank: C-rank with possibilieties go higher
Species: an owl

Appearance: His feathers are white, but shines in blue in the sun, because of his colour he is hard to spot in the sky. His eyes are of the color of amber. As being the C-ranked, he looks really tiny, his wings being  the size enough just to cover human eyes. As he is getting higher rank, he is growing bigger due to increasing chakra.
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Personality: Zenbu is very shy, doesn't like to reveal himself to unknown people, he likes to lurk around and to do investigation first. Besides that, he's really brave and never leaves his master no matter what the situation would be. Even beeing told to leave, he would fly away, but still watch and protect the master secrectly. Zenbu is very loyal at that point,he stays with the master till the end. As Zenbu's likes are concerned, he likes to squat onto master's head or hide himself into maste's hair cuddling to the neck.

Techniques: His name means “all” and is a shorter version of zenbu ga miru (jap. ぜんぶがみる, meaning „the one seeing all“). The name is related to his main ability to see chakra even of a small moving creatures, so this kind of pet is very suitable for a kind Hyuuga. He has a perfect seeing at night as well. Besides that, Zenbu can travel a long way very fast and deliver messages to people, his orientation is perfect as he is a wind lover. Those two abilities are determined by his species of an owl. Being a C-rank combat pet, Zenbu can use two jutsu:

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Last edited by Akai Hyuuga on Mon Jul 15, 2013 10:45 am; edited 1 time in total

2Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Empty Re: Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Mon Jul 15, 2013 9:49 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
Unfortunately your owl can not passively see chakra. That would have to be a jutsu and have a chakra cost, just as the Byakugan is. Which is something you could switch out the eye borrowing jutsu for, or just add it once you rank the pet up. I would just make that a jutsu and take out the eye borrowing thing for now because it is more useful.

The wing thing is too powerful for a C-rank jutsu. At C-rank it should be able to stop a single B rank attack at most, and 2 C-ranks. And weapon breaking, I don't really like that, especially not ANY weapon. Blocking attacks is enough.

3Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Empty Re: Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Mon Jul 15, 2013 10:45 am

Akai

Akai


D-rank
Oh my, that just killed my imagination, I thought the idea was good, loved him that way ^^ Then if it is possible, I would like to leave him Work In Progress for a while, I will remake him when I could own a higher rank pet with higher rank jutsus Thanks for the looking up though ^^

4Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Empty Re: Zenbu [ C-ranked combat pet] [WIP] Mon Jul 15, 2013 11:50 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
No problem, just pm me when you are done and I'll review it.

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