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1Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Empty Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Sun Jun 23, 2019 4:26 am

Ruvaak

Ruvaak


C-rank
Brief note to the mods:

  • Jutsu have free Max Range per Clan bonus which can be found Here

  • The first 2 techs are freebies from the time when clans had starting jutsu's. The original clan page that showcases the first 2 techs which I am repurposing can be found Here

  • As for the other techs I cannot find my jutsu registration, however Here is a link to my jutsu list which has been locked since my participation in the chuunin exams of 2015.

  • If you have any questions @Raphael#7563 on Discord


Repurposing/Breaking down:


Repurposing:


Breath Weapon:


Begone:


Rupture:


Reflection:


Armored Skin:


Defend:


Demon Claw:


Ninja Art:



Last edited by Ruvaak on Fri Jun 28, 2019 4:27 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Empty Re: Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Fri Jun 28, 2019 3:39 pm

Eishun




C-rank
Ruvaak wrote:Brief note to the mods:

  • Jutsu have free Max Range per Clan bonus which can be found Here

  • The first 2 techs are freebies from the time when clans had starting jutsu's. The original clan page that showcases the first 2 techs which I am repurposing can be found Here

  • As for the other techs I cannot find my jutsu registration, however Here is a link to my jutsu list which has been locked since my participation in the chuunin exams of 2015.

  • If you have any questions @Raphael#7563 on Discord


Repurposing/Breaking down:


Repurposing:


Breath Weapon:


Begone:


Rupture:


Reflection:


Armored Skin:


Defend:


Demon Claw:


Ninja Art:



Chakra Arrow
-Include the range on how far the arrow can travel in the description

Devouring Arrow:
-Include the range on how far the arrow can travel in the description
-If this does damage over time, then the duration needs to be 3
-Remove ‘until healed’

Begone
-Include the radius of the wall in the description

Reflection:
-You have two max effects, assuming the catalysts is in replace for hand seals, this need an extra max drawback or lower the speed and range to min values

Armored Skin
-This is approved, but, you could make this defend against jutsus(following the defensive guidelines) for defending against basic strikes, non-chakra aligned, is something all defensive techniques can do. You will just need a drawback, if you decide to add the suggest, or lower the duration to min.

Everything else is 1/2 approved

3Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Empty Re: Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Fri Jun 28, 2019 4:31 pm

Ruvaak

Ruvaak


C-rank
Chakra Arrows, Devouring Arrows, Begone: Edited

Reflection: Speed is minimum for it's rank already and as I said in the note at beginner of post my clan gives free max range.

Armored skin: I made it this way because the duration is the max effect.

4Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Empty Re: Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Fri Jun 28, 2019 9:46 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Eishun wrote:
Ruvaak wrote:Brief note to the mods:

  • Jutsu have free Max Range per Clan bonus which can be found Here

  • The first 2 techs are freebies from the time when clans had starting jutsu's. The original clan page that showcases the first 2 techs which I am repurposing can be found Here

  • As for the other techs I cannot find my jutsu registration, however Here is a link to my jutsu list which has been locked since my participation in the chuunin exams of 2015.

  • If you have any questions @Raphael#7563 on Discord


Repurposing/Breaking down:


Repurposing:


Breath Weapon:


Begone:


Rupture:


Reflection:


Armored Skin:


Defend:


Demon Claw:


Ninja Art:



Chakra Arrow
-Include the range on how far the arrow can travel in the description

Devouring Arrow:
-Include the range on how far the arrow can travel in the description
-If this does damage over time, then the duration needs to be 3
-Remove ‘until healed’

Begone
-Include the radius of the wall in the description

Reflection:
-You have two max effects, assuming the catalysts is in replace for hand seals, this need an extra max drawback or lower the speed and range to min values

Armored Skin
-This is approved, but, you could make this defend against jutsus(following the defensive guidelines) for defending against basic strikes, non-chakra aligned, is something all defensive techniques can do. You will just need a drawback, if you decide to add the suggest, or lower the duration to min.  

Everything else is 1/2 approved

Everything that was 1/2 approved is full approved.

5Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Empty Re: Ruvaak {Jutsu Revamp} Fri Jun 28, 2019 9:53 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Ruvaak wrote:Brief note to the mods:

  • Jutsu have free Max Range per Clan bonus which can be found Here

  • The first 2 techs are freebies from the time when clans had starting jutsu's. The original clan page that showcases the first 2 techs which I am repurposing can be found Here

  • As for the other techs I cannot find my jutsu registration, however Here is a link to my jutsu list which has been locked since my participation in the chuunin exams of 2015.

  • If you have any questions @Raphael#7563 on Discord


Repurposing/Breaking down:


Repurposing:


Breath Weapon:


Begone:


Rupture:


Reflection:


Armored Skin:


Defend:


Demon Claw:


Ninja Art:





Chakra Arrow
Devouring Arrow
Begone
Reflection
Armored Skin

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