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N'Jobu Aburame

N'Jobu Aburame


C-rank
Approved:

Review:

WIP:



Last edited by N'Jobu Aburame on Fri May 03, 2019 6:18 pm; edited 10 times in total

Hika

Hika


D-rank
N'Jobu Aburame wrote:
Review:

WIP:


Scent Tracking and Chakra Tracking are approved.

Projectile Return is approved.

Scale Pollen is approved.

Insect Wall is approved.

Insect Deception has a max value (chakra drain) and a ~mid value (paralysis of 2 limbs). You need to reduce range, damage, or speed below rank values to count as a drawback. The radius is already considered additional to the regular range, and thus couldn't be reduced as a drawback.

Leeching Bullet and Leeching Spear are approved.

Blurred Vision Prison is approved.

Necrotic Bullet is approved.

Hika

Hika


D-rank
N'Jobu Aburame wrote:
Review:

Insect Deception has (max value) chakra drain, minimum speed of 1 rank lower (mid drawback) and 2 limb paralysis (which can be mid value). The stat check could be C-2 here with a mid value. It's approvable as-is, though.

Periderm is approved.

Botanical Insect Body Flicker is approved.

Wood Release: Seed needs to specify that it can't be used to activate jutsu if it's taken beyond a certain distance of the user.

Engulfing Defense Arrow is approved.

Leeching Arrow is approved.

Necrotic Arrow is approved.

Blurred Vision Arrow should be referencing Dexterity.

Leeching Tether Arrow is essentially the same thing as Insect Deception. You're free to increase your stat check according to the extra value you have. Ditto for Necrotic Tether Arrow.

Any approved jutsu as above may have a catalyst that does not qualify for the drawback. Please change them (to Archer's Grasps, as that's what's approved) and then the above jutsu are also approved.

Hika

Hika


D-rank
N'Jobu Aburame wrote:
Approved:

Review:

WIP:

All jutsu up for review are approved.

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