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1N'Jobu Aburame [Post Clan Swap Revamp] Empty N'Jobu Aburame [Post Clan Swap Revamp] Sun Jan 13, 2019 5:03 pm

N'Jobu Aburame

N'Jobu Aburame


C-rank
Approved:



Last edited by N'Jobu on Sat Jan 19, 2019 11:51 pm; edited 10 times in total

Takao

Takao


S-rank
N'Jobu wrote:
Old Jutsu:

New Jutsu:

Wood Insect Style: Dragon Headed Catepillar Tracking Technique is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Tether Arrow is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Twin Stag Beetle Burial:
- Full-body paralysis and paralysis-like effects start at B-Rank. Partial paralysis can be done for 1 post at C-Rank.

Wood Insect Syle: Dodder Horn Tracking Technique is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Projectile Return is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Scale Pollen is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Larva:
- Too many techniques for an E-Rank. Can be limited to 1.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Bullet:
- Damage needs a degree of severity.
- Projectile needs a size.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Arrow:
- Damage needs a degree of severity.
- Projectile needs a size.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Horn Spear:
- Projectile needs a size.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Bullet:
- Projectile needs a size.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Arrow:
- Arrow needs a size.

Wood Insect Style: Body Flicker Technique is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Periderm is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Arrow:
- Complete blindness on a C-Rank can be accomplished through specific location damage but not through general application of a poison or venom.

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Insect Prison:
- Duration needs to be reduced to 3 or made maintainable.

Wood Insect Style: Engulfing Defense Arrow:
- Projectile needs a size.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Wall is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Clone Technique is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Jamming:
- Duration needs to be reduced to 3 or made maintainable.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Deception:
- Does way too much. Restraining 2 targets, draining chakra, requiring more chakra from techniques or giving them a -1 rank debuff, having a max-value strength check, and increasing by 2 posts for every tier.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Tether Arrow:
"increasing by 1 post per tier below C-3 up to a maximum of 5 posts."
- Needs to be removed. One stat check, not varying. Also, limit to 3 posts or make it maintainable.

Hika

Hika


D-rank
You have got to reformat this, man. It is murder to try and reference both lists at once. Go like this:

Spoiler:

- So that we can see what's being replaced with what, exactly, as well as so that we don't have to scroll a ton or tab constantly to reference both versions.

4N'Jobu Aburame [Post Clan Swap Revamp] Empty Re: N'Jobu Aburame [Post Clan Swap Revamp] Thu Jan 17, 2019 11:10 pm

Takao

Takao


S-rank
N'Jobu wrote:
For Review:

Approved:

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Tether Arrow:
- Too many max values. Stat check of one rank higher and speed.

Wood Insect Style: Twin Stag Beetle Deception is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Larva is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Bullet:
- Damage is too high.
- 2 max values, damage and speed. Pick one, lower the other.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Arrow:
- Damage is too high.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Horn Spear:
- 2 max values, max drain and speed. Pick one, lower the other.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Bullet:
- 2 max values, max drain and speed. Pick one, lower the other.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Arrow is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Arrow:
- Permanent blindness is still not an effect you can achieve with a C-Rank without doing damage directly to the eyes.
- 2 max values, blindness and stat debuff.

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Insect Prison:
- 4 max values, speed, stat check of one rank above, stat debuff, and blindness.

Wood Insect Style: Engulfing Defense Arrow is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Jamming is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Deception:
- 2 max values, persistent chakra drain and stat check of one rank above.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Tether Arrow:
- Damage is too high.
- 3 max values, speed, damage, and stat check of one rank above.

Takao

Takao


S-rank
N'Jobu wrote:
For Review:

Approved:

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Tether Arrow is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Bullet is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Arrow is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Horn Spear is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Bullet:
- Is this meant to say '10 chakra' and not '1 chakra'?

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Arrow is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Insect Prison:
- Again, permanent blindness is not an effect you can produce through poison at C-Rank. You can do actual, physical damage to the eyes, i.e hitting them with fire or cutting them, but you cannot produce it through poison.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Deception:
- 'draining them of 15'. Needs to be more clear on what's happening here. This is incomplete information.

Wood Insect Style: Necrotic Tether Arrow is Approved.

6N'Jobu Aburame [Post Clan Swap Revamp] Empty Re: N'Jobu Aburame [Post Clan Swap Revamp] Sat Jan 19, 2019 11:49 pm

Takao

Takao


S-rank
N'Jobu wrote:
For Review:

Approved:

Wood Insect Style: Parasitic Bullet is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Blinding Venom Insect Prison is Approved.

Wood Insect Style: Insect Deception is Approved.

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