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1Yōsei Empty Yōsei Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:42 am

Jet

Jet


D-rank
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Clan Emblem:

Clan: Yōsei

Kekkei Genkai: Fae’s Waltz

Elements: Futon

Specialization: Medical Ninjutsu [Primary] Summoning [Secondary]

Location: Iwagakure

Clan History:

Considered cousins to the Aburame and Kamizuru clans, the Yōsei were a more peaceful clan of nomads. They were renowned healers but endured many malicious rumors for they always hid underneath purple cloaks and refused to take part in the shinobi world, never taking a aside and avoiding conflict the best they can. However one day the Kamizuru grew vicious and attacked Konohagakure, aiming to finally defeat the Aburame once and for all. They were defeated however and faced extinction however they were saved by the Yōsei. The Yōsei felt pity for their cousins and healed them to the best of their abilities. Grateful the First Tsuchikage offered them a place in Iwa as sanctuary for their efforts but they politely refused. Yet they maintained a peaceful relationship with Iwa from that day forth with the Kamizuru clan who always came to their aide and kept the spotlight off them.

During the Seven Bells Wars, many of the Yōsei were recruited as healers for the injured and thus the spotlight was cast on them once more however to those they wish hadn’t. The dreadful Seven Bell’s interest was piqued by the clan and he demanded they join him in his conquest of Kiri but they Yōsei refused. Enraged, Seven Bell’s killed off ¼ of the clan until they finally decided to strike back or else they would face extinction. They took off their robes to reveal a pair of lepidopetra wings which they used expertly to survive the monstrous man’s attacks and successfully get away, running to Iwa for sanctuary. They tried to hide under their cloaks but it was no use, their secret was out and various factions would be after them for their abilities. Seeing that they lost another fourth of their clan from Seven Bell’s attacks, the Yōsei took up the offer to become a clan of Iwa and has been allies with the Kamizuru ever since.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The Yōsei are infamous for their genetic mutation, called Fae’s Waltz. Fae’s Waltz is a genetic mutation that gives the user a pair of lepidopetra wings (butterfly or moth) with a wingspan ⅔ their overall height. The Yōsei also have a summoning contract with lepidopetra.

Altitude Caps:
D: 10m
C: 15m
B: 20m
A: 25m
S: 30m

Maintenance Cost: Wings are completely anatomical to user however they cannot support the user's flight indefinitely thus they must rest for a period of time after flying the maximum their wings could take.

D: Two posts of flight before rest
C: Four posts of flight before rest
B: Six posts of flight before rest
A: Seven posts of flight before rest
S: Nine posts of flight before rest

However the human body was not built for flying and while a kkg is completely natural to the user, blood flow to the wing's isn't the best as the clan has spent years not putting them in use until the last decade thus they require to use medical chakra to strengthened the wings' integrity during flight after it weakens after a few posts. Chakra costs are as follows:

D: -5 per post
C: -5 per post after one post of flight
B: -10 per post after two posts of flight
A: -10 per post after three posts of flight
S: -15 per post after four posts of flight

After a maximum posts are reach the user must rest for a cool down equivalent to their max posts. For example if the user flies for six posts at B-rank the cool down is six posts. However if the B-rank user flies for only two posts out of six they only have to wait two posts before flying again. This means the user's flight time is restart if the rest before the max is reach for the amount of posts they flew.

Flight Speed:
D: 10mp/s
C: 20mp/s
B: 30mp/s
A: 40mp/s
S: 55mp/s

Lepidoptera Contract:

*Lepidoptera Contract must be trained as normal for user to user higher ranking summons

Drawbacks:

  • Cannot take Raiton, Katon

The clan is a clan of healers, pacifist really. They were no meant to destroy but heal and help others grow. Raito and Katon go against the very essence of the clan thus they cannot be learn nor taken.

  • Lepidoptera wings are always -2 END

Although the wings are enhanced with medical chakra to keep them flying the wings are still somewhat fragile just like their natural counterparts

  • If the clans member kills they will go into shock

As aforementioned, the clan is not made of ruthless killers but healers. They are so attuned to nature and preserving life that taking it is like striking a fatal blow to them. They can still kill however if they do they will go into shock for one post. If they continue to kill after the one shock post, their STR and SPD will go -1 for two post, -2 for three posts and -3 for the rest of the thread


  • Suiton Jutsu gain +1 in power against the clansmember


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Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

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Last edited by Jet on Tue Mar 08, 2016 5:24 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Yōsei Empty Re: Yōsei Sun Feb 28, 2016 4:39 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
What do you mean by max when it comes to the wings? and the wings cost chakra to maintain flight? Does that mean they're not completely anatomical?


Your ranges are fine though.

I'd like you to give reasons for your disadvantages.

As for Jutsu:

1/ is fine.

2/ does it fill an area to create an AOE heal? What do you mean it has to be stated? speed you send the particles at? also, it's always better to describe the heal, cos not every jutsu is the kind of damage that can simply be healed.

3Yōsei Empty Re: Yōsei Mon Feb 29, 2016 4:44 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
I'd like to see one more drawback and this clan is good to go.

I would suggest a weakness to suiton, as, moths and butterflies can't fly with wet wings.

A thought.

After that, this clan is 100% approved.

4Yōsei Empty Re: Yōsei Sat Mar 05, 2016 1:51 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Remove D being equal to speed stat for being free scaling,

5Yōsei Empty Re: Yōsei Fri Mar 11, 2016 8:05 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
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