Clan: Kyudoka Clan

Kekkei Genkai: Takamegan

Elements: No Set Elements

Specialization: Bukijutsu {Kyujutsu}

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The Kyudoka clan history spans back not too far ago, only about 250 years ago did this Doujutsu start readily appearing. The clan started popping up, in every village known to the world. There would be a handful in every village, yet they never had a settlement or any place of permanent residence to their selves. Since their teaching weren't passed down in any specific way, the Kyudoka could be raised by people who weren't even Kyudoka themselves, and since the clan became so known throughout the lands that eventually they were taught how to use the Takamegan they possessed from someone who owned it before them. The teachers would often find the students, knowing if they were able to unlock the Takamegan, and then training to to actually acquire it and study how it works. The pains in their mind have always been there, even when the first Kyudoka was here. He was known only to the Kyudoka at the time, and the sole possessor of the Takamegan, as he lived so did his story. It lived to become a tall tale through history, as the Kyudoka had spanned across the continent and had seen the world. Only a few have unlocked the Takamegan in the last 100 years, and even now, only a handful of shinobi have even been born to the Kyudoka in the last 25.

During their prime the Kyudoka clan thrived, but one in particular had a Doujutsu far beyond what any previous Kyudoka had. His name was Mishito Kyudoka, and he was born with the gift of the Takamegan, just like every other person who had been born into the clan. Even though the clan was scattered, tale far and wide was heard of Mishito and his legendary Takamegan. He had received the highest known release of the Doujutsu anyone had heard of, and he was merely a child. His skills with a bow were remarkable, he was the first one to unlock the true secrets of the Takamegan. His ability grew, and all it does was grow. It kept growing, his eye power was far beyond any other Takamegan user at this point. He turned fifteen and he began feeling lightheaded at points, his eyes were hurting most of the time, he started to talk to people who weren't there, the slow and reasonably noticeable signs of schizophrenia set in. He started having fits, and they took away his title of a shinobi. He then became worse. He would never speak to anyone, and he would only speak to his imaginary other half. Until he began to get quiet. It seemed that all of his ticks and his troubles had passed. Until he left, and no word from him ever since. This is what the Kyudoka call, the Year of Shi. Slowly, one by one Takamegan users started falling. Falling from an unknown source, it seemed as if they had been naturally killed, as if they died too soon. It was too clean. The few that knew Mishito knew he had to have a part in it. With his Genjutsu usage he learned how to manipulate people's minds, make them see things that weren't there, and make them do things they normally wouldn't. All across, they started to be slaughtered. One by one they fell, and they got sloppier as it went. More brutal, vicious deaths. Hung by there rib cage, tied to trees by their own skin, all of it gruesome. Mishito then made an actual appearance, before the council of the Kyudoka he came. Told them all of the process, the plan. The plan that his "god" had given him. He said that he was the cure, the cure for the disease of this eye, that it was a vile and evil consequence. The council saw that his eyes were of the fourth release, but they were, different in a way. They looked strained, like they hadn't been closed in a long time. As he spoke, dread filled the air. He told the council he had unlocked the true sight. He called it the Purity Release, and that he was the one to end the impure Takamegan from this land. After he had his speech, the clan council fought with him. Taking him down in the end, but only at the cost of their own lives.

Slowly, the Takamegan made a reappearance. Ten years ago the first user was thought to have been a child, recently no one knew of this eye in the small village that he or she lived in, but the child had the eye. And, ever since more Kyudoka have been born. Yet, none had unlocked the Doujutsu ever to the extent that Mishito had. And, everyone hoped that no one ever did again, they still did not know what had happened to make Mishito go against the ways of the clan, and we may never know. No one has reached the "Purity" release he spoke of, except himself of course.

With the clan being recently renewed, there are a few that the Takamegan came easily to. Some, not so easy. With this clan still being scattered across the world, and the villages, they go wherever destiny takes them. Holding on to the secrets of their eye, and the secrets of their bow style, they thrive once more in the land of ninja.

Kekkei Genkai Description: Takamegan is a Doujutsu which predominantly effects ones abilities of perception. One with this Doujutsu will find that they have far greater accuracy, visual acquisition and visual range than normal. At every stage of this Kekkei Genkai, the wielder of the Doujutsu can enhance, or in better terms, 'zoom' their vision to a greater distance. At higher stages of the Doujutsu, it will affect their visual scope, as well as gain added abilities that they can utilize to their advantage, further aiding them. Aesthetically, when this Doujutsu is released, the yellow surrounding their irises grows, taking up more of the iris. Further outward along the eye, the sclera becomes darker. The Doujutsu also grows with rank and the iris and pupil take up a great deal of the eye and eventually fully consumes the entire eye in a golden yellow design, with the pupil of the eye growing twice the size of it's normal counterpart, remaining pure black. Those members of the clan born with the capacity to use this jutsu later in life are also born with a unique ability, their visual prowess is far greater than normal, and their powers of perception are thusly boosted as well. However, utilizing the eye of Takamegan also comes with drawbacks. Their field of perception is greatly reduced to visual, mostly. Other types of perception come slower to them other than visual cues. They are also a clan that specializes in long range fighting, because of this their capacity to learn and fight against Taijutsu is simply almost nonexistent.

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Active Benefits: (These occur only when the Doujutsu is active.)

• The user gains the ability to enhance/zoom their sight in up to 2x their normal vision. (Gaining +1 Perception to visual cues while active/does not stack)
  

Passive Benefits: (These occur whether or not the Doujutsu is active.)

• Kinesthetic Awareness: Members of this family have an enhanced sense of their own body. Because of this word count for training and/or learning anything Bukijutsu based is reduced by 20%. This passive skill is a permanent buff, and is gained as soon as the first stage is unlocked.
  
• The user receives a +1 Reaction Speed when reacting to visual cues. (These do not stack.)
  

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Active Benefits: (These occur only when the Doujutsu is active.)

• The user gains the ability to enhance/zoom their sight in up to 5x their normal vision. (Gaining +1 Perception to visual cues while active/does not stack)
  
• The user gains the ability Hunting Sight.
                                         
  
  
  
  • Hunting Sight: While activated, the user's visual spectrum is darkened, however allies are painted blue, enemies and combatants are painted red, and mission specific targets are painted gold. This ability utilizes the knowledge of the shinobi using the techniques. Thus if a member of their team is a double agent, he will still be painted blue because the shinobi is under the impression that they are an ally. This ability uses visually ready body language cues, which the Kyudoka clan member's Doujutsu picks up on, in order to decipher the intent of others. Those who appear to have a negative intent, or violent intent towards the user are painted red. Those who appear to have a positive intent, or passive/helpful intent towards the user are painted blue. People and Items which are mission objectives are painted gold. Hunting Sight and Life Sight are unable to be used in unison. Chakra Cost is an extra -5 per turn every turn this ability is active.
    
  
  
  

Passive Benefits: (These occur whether or not the Doujutsu is active.)

• Any previous benefits except for Reaction Speed bonus.
  
• The user receives a +1 Reaction Speed when reacting to visual cues. (These do not stack.)
  

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Active Benefits: (These occur only when the Doujutsu is active.)

• The user gains the ability to enhance/zoom their sight in up to 10x their normal vision. (Gaining +2 Perception to visual cues while active/does not stack)
  
• The user gains the ability Life Sight.
  
  
  
  
  • Life Sight: When activated this ability allows the Shinobi to see all chakra sources within their field of vision, and for as far as they can see. The chakra sources are seen as masses of fiery white. The rest of their visual field is darkened similarly to Hunting Sight. The chakra masses take the shape of their source. So a human's chakra mass would take the general shape of a human. A deer's chakra mass would take the general shape of a deer, so on and so forth. Just because they can see all the chakra sources, doesn't mean that they can differentiate between friend and foe using this ability. On the contrary, they cannot. Please note that this sees the chakra pool. So beings that can reduce their chakra pool in order to avoid being sensed will also mask themselves from Life Sight. Hunting Sight and Life Sight are unable to be used in unison. Chakra Cost is an extra -5 per turn every turn this ability is active.
    
  
  
  

Passive Benefits: (These occur whether or not the Doujutsu is active.)

• Any previous benefits except for Reaction Speed bonus.
  
• The user receives a +1 Reaction Speed when reacting to visual cues. (These do not stack.)
  

                                                   

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Active Benefits: (These occur only when the Doujutsu is active.)

• The user gains the ability to enhance/zoom their sight in up to 20x their normal vision. (Gaining +2 Perception to visual cues while active/does not stack)
  
• The user gains the ability Purity Sight.
  
  
  
  
  • Purity Sight: This is the combined ability of Life Sight and Hunting Sight. Chakra Masses of Life Sight are painted as with Hunting Sight. As an additional effect, this changes the color of people who are prepared to and are about to act aggressively toward a blue target, reading subtle signatures and subconscious chemistry, which would be needed to be hidden by a technique of at least A ranking to avoid. The darkness is also lifted whenever Purity Sight is obtained, and no longer costs additional chakra to activate.
    
  
  
  

Passive Benefits: (These occur whether or not the Doujutsu is active.)

• Any previous benefits except for Reaction Speed bonus.
  
• The user receives a +2 Reaction Speed when reacting to visual cues. (These do not stack.)
  

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Active Benefits: (These occur only when the Doujutsu is active.)

• The user gains the ability to enhance/zoom their sight in up to 40x their normal vision. (Gaining +2 Perception to visual cues while active/does not stack)
  
• The user gains the ability Predator Sight.
  
  
  
  
  • Predator's Sight: When activated this visual ability projects the user's intention onto their visual field. If the user of this ability wanted to hit a water drop falling from the wing of an eagle with a senbon needle, while a gust of wind blew past, a golden visual line would be projected onto their field of vision showing where to throw the senbon, and the real time trajectory that needle would take once thrown. This ability uses common knowledge and readily perceivable information in order to operate. It also works in reverse, to track attacks by using the trajectory of the attack along with readily available information to tell the user where the attack will land before it does. This characteristic is most effective outside of a 4 meter area, and makes most basic projectiles almost entirely useless against the Kyudoka who wield this ability. This ability reads the users outward intent, using readily perceivable information to project the outward intent. The user can only analyse 1 second forward at any point. Reaction Time for visual cues is also increased by +1 tier while active. The Chakra cost is an extra -5 per turn it is active. This cannot be used in unison with any sight, for the power needed to concentrate on this sight exceeds the limits of the others.
    
  
  
  

Passive Benefits: (These occur whether or not the Doujutsu is active.)

• Any previous benefits except for Reaction Speed bonus.
  
• The user receives a +2 Reaction Speed when reacting to visual cues. (These do not stack.)
  

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Drawbacks:

• Unable to take/learn Taijutsu.
  
• They receive +1 against Taijutsu attacks.
  
• They must take Bukijutsu (Kyujutsu) as their primary specialization.
  
• They are unable to learn any sub-spec of Bukijutsu except for Onojutsu or Kyujutsu. (As they already start with Kyujutsu.)
  
• They are unable to learn a fourth specialization or a fourth element, also unable to take either Hesitant SC.
  
• They react -1 tier slower for any non-visual cues.
  
• They must take the Focused SC and the One Track Mind SC.
  

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu:

Art of the Kyudoka:

Arrow Arts:

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eye level:
0- fine
1- make the zoom x2 and work from there. Passive benefit is way too high, any reduction MAX 25%
2- need to specify throughout app which things are passive and which are not. bring zoom to x5 here.
3- this one can be x10 you see the pattern here, and please specify what stats are passive and which aren't cos you specify things when active but they get other +1s, so are they passive? i dont know.

Fix these throughout. Its really late, so if you get those done i will come back and continue tomorrow.

as for the jutsu, limit how many arrows per turn you can make out of chakra if maintained, no more than 3 at C rank with the bow jutsu, but, as you have an arrow making jutsu, clarify as to whether the jutsu that makes a bow also makes arrows, its rather confusing.

I did forget to add, but the bow jutsu itself spawns 6 of the chakra arrows to use, and may not create more unless using the arrow creating jutsu. I can lower it if needed, but I figured if they didn't use the arrow jutsu that they'd need a way to attack. Since a bow by itself is useless.

I added in the arrows per turn for the arrow creating jutsu itself.

Changed active and passive areas for clarification. Edited zoom length.

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1st stage: With all perception buffs from the eyes, please specify to visual cues.
Reaction speed is point to point movement, not actually reacting, you perceive visual cues, its worded rather oddly. Why would your eyes speed your body up? If you get me.

2nd stage: love how they get a HUD xD

3rd stage: "However it is impossible to completely reduce your pool to nothing, thus Life Sight could potentially still see someone masking themselves but to a much less degree." Nope, a stealth jutsu of high rank should be able to hide from you, you can't just say that 'i always see you.'

4th / final stage: switch purity sight's ability with preditor sights ability, one is WAY stronger than the other, and i want you to limit how far preditor sight can analyse ahead, as it's bordering future sight. No more than 2 seconds, I would prefer 1 second and you increase its additional chakra cost by 5. and you should 'not' be able to pair it with anything else. It's just SO much.

jutsu:

1, lower all your numbers within the jutsu ranges properly please, not max on any either other than maybe range.
2, "The user uses either their own chakra to create arrows made of pure chakra." - you make it sound like there is an alternative. Remove the armour thing, because that depends on the armours defense not your attack. Also, bring down your numbers again, you're past max damage. please check them with the jutsu rules.

Edited per specifications. Bump.

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-reword to: +1 to reaction speed when reacting to visual cues on all the eyes :).

"Chakra Masses of Life Sight are painted as with Hunting Sight. As an additional effect, this measures intent on a seemingly psychic level. Double Agents and Traitors, will be painted red as though they were enemies when using this technique. " - I don't like this, it's borderline meta. I would let you get away with that it changes the colour of people who are prepared to and are about to act aggressively toward a blue target, so it would kind of read subtle signatures and subconscious chemistry which would be needed to be hidden by a technique of equal rank to avoid. But not just 'i read your mind to know you're a traitor or bad guy.'

"and makes most projectiles pretty much useless against the Kyudoka who wield this ability" - say basic projectiles, there are more than one way to trick this ability and you and i both know it. :P

" This ability is purely intent driven, and whatever the user's intention is will be projected onto their field of vision, and nothing more." - change to their outward intent. Ie. 'whatever the subjects outward intent will be projected.' meaning it only goes by what you see, and that there is observable data for.

Drawbacks

Are fine

Jutsu:

1/ is fine

2/ seems ok

Edited, bump.