26 Re: Two different persons[noel/closed] Mon Nov 17, 2014 5:21 am
Noel
D-rank
Although not a complete surprise the man headbutted towards his kick, the headband protecting him from a possible whiplash or worse however this was just the first part of his combination as he reached back for his weapon. As he turned his back towards the man following with a followed up right kick in the same location knocking the headband off as the man raised his head to attack again. Had the man's eyes not been closed he may have foreseen this, but the kick was actually meant for the chin but was hard to judge with the metsubishi preventing a more accurate attack.
As expected his windmill shuriken was uplift as he gripped it tightly with a side flip landing as the man backed away to exactly where the boy wanted him to be, the fact that he would have his eyes recently opening would make it difficult to deal with the follow up attack, but making no attempt to even dodge his last normal shuriken as it missed its intended target of the eyes and left half of an inch scar on the face of the man who was probably too filled with adrenalin to even notice this minor attack.
The man seemed to stop for a moment before he made his way around in an arc, he heard the ping as it came faster and faster. As he waited as if he did not know anything and as he was reached he circled around to what fortunately ended up being the man's back as he used his speed to get around so that the man would not have a chance to hit him as he watched the man miss with an impressive upward slash. He felt deep down inside that the man had underestimated his abilities as he would perform the same attack to the man's back as he kept a close eye on him. While this attack was not full proof with the current position of the man's arms raised with the slash there would be no time to turn around for a counter attack, at least not a useful one and a dash would not help as he would not be able to turn around once he started running away. The man had to do something, but was the man able to do what needed to be done in order to fight back, was he willing to make a sacrifice for victory.
The boy was not holding back and would use every ounce of chakra he had left to defeat this man.
Words = 5958 + 431 = 6389
Chakra = 70/150 Maintaining Scan
As expected his windmill shuriken was uplift as he gripped it tightly with a side flip landing as the man backed away to exactly where the boy wanted him to be, the fact that he would have his eyes recently opening would make it difficult to deal with the follow up attack, but making no attempt to even dodge his last normal shuriken as it missed its intended target of the eyes and left half of an inch scar on the face of the man who was probably too filled with adrenalin to even notice this minor attack.
The man seemed to stop for a moment before he made his way around in an arc, he heard the ping as it came faster and faster. As he waited as if he did not know anything and as he was reached he circled around to what fortunately ended up being the man's back as he used his speed to get around so that the man would not have a chance to hit him as he watched the man miss with an impressive upward slash. He felt deep down inside that the man had underestimated his abilities as he would perform the same attack to the man's back as he kept a close eye on him. While this attack was not full proof with the current position of the man's arms raised with the slash there would be no time to turn around for a counter attack, at least not a useful one and a dash would not help as he would not be able to turn around once he started running away. The man had to do something, but was the man able to do what needed to be done in order to fight back, was he willing to make a sacrifice for victory.
The boy was not holding back and would use every ounce of chakra he had left to defeat this man.
Words = 5958 + 431 = 6389
Chakra = 70/150 Maintaining Scan
- OOC Comments:
- Been a while anyways just clarifying a few things
Auto Hit : As we discussed in chat box i could not land a hit on your eyes directly with the ping
But you did not respond to the shuriken either so i just let it cut your face, you can decide where it cuts your face since its minor and you did ignore it in your edit, but it also good for you read next part
Ability : For some reason your character normally only does good after taking a scratch, cuts or stabs. Not sure if its your character being serious when he is hurt or you going all out to return the damage
Speed : You need to seriously get faster for our rematch one day, your stats are too weak to match your abilities, rather than ranking up anything else get speed and endurance maxed out to match your style
Items : Like Katsu said the metsubishi is very very hard to spot, in most cases people will throw it point blank in your face and its mainly there to irritate the Sharingan and Byakugan users. Work on getting some basic items so you do not waste too much chakra doing things that can be done without chakra.
Trump Card : The one attack that can end the fight if it hits. Metsubishi can be a trump card since one post of blindness is OP until you get high perception and can use heaaring adn so on better
Take your time : Do not rush your post too much, work on post step by step and make sure you answer everything someone has done first. Also maybe get your reaction time up too so you can deal with other fast people. Anyways good luck in your reply, my next post will be more powerful than this one and will keep raising the bar so keep up the good work