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1Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:00 pm

Yuzu Ren

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Jutsus
A-Rank
Suiton Shin Kirigakure:

Suiton Suishoha:

Raiton :

Raiton :

B-Rank
Suiton Suiryuudan:

Suiton Suijinheki:

Raiton Jibashi:

Raiton Ryu Misairu:

C-Rank
Suiton Mizu Bunshin:

Suiton Suirou:

D-rank
Kirigakure no jutsu:

Shunshin no jutsu:

Raition :

Raiton :

Tenkan Dan :

E-Rank
Ippo" :

Academy Jutsu
Bunshin:

Kawarimi:

Genjutsu Kai:

Shūgyō'shikachō:

Generic Sealing Technique:

Item Reinforcement Technique:

Clan Jutsu
Mizukiri:

Kiri Shiryoku:

Suikiri Endan:

Yuzu Jigoku:



Last edited by Yuzu Ren on Thu Apr 24, 2014 5:42 am; edited 7 times in total

2Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:24 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
First things first, remove any and all +1s you have in your jutsu; passive and maintainable +1s have been removed completely from the jutsu rules. The only technique I see with the +1 applied is True Hidden Mist, so change that technique to conform to the jutsu rules' guidelines for A-Rank (especially in terms of radius range).

All library jutsu are fine for now, but make sure you update them when the Suiton, Raiton, and Ninjutsu libraries are updated.

Water Shockwave is fine as is.

Renzoku - How did this even get approved? It is way too powerful for a D-Rank. Denied, change its effect and make it fitting for a D-Rank technique.

Tenkan Dan - Change the speed of this from 15 m/s to 5 m/s.

Academy jutsu are fine.

Your clan jutsu will be dealt with in your clan update, if/when necessary.

Bump when you've made the edits.

3Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:48 am

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True Hidden Mist = The +1 only really made it defend against slightly stronger Katon but yeah the +1 was a clan +1 but i never put in effect for it so just removing that so that should be fine. Before i try editting the rest want to make a few requests since for one if i nerf tenkan dan's speed it makes it rather weak so...

Renzoku - How did this even get approved? It is way too powerful for a D-Rank. Denied, change its effect and make it fitting for a D-Rank technique.
Originally this was meant to be a scaling technique since the cheapest chakra cost was 10 if i made it A-rank i would have to start with a full cost straight away but the technique attacks in phases. But i been reading up on the new scaling rules so would i be able to make a D-Rank version thats nerfed but later add scaled up versions and train them into this jutsu. The new scaling rules seem a bit confusing so just wanted to ask you rather than just do things myself.

Tenkan Dan - Change the speed of this from 15 m/s to 5 m/s
Could i by any chance have the moves rank raised to D-Rank in order to keep the speed and maybe extend the range slightly as well?

I made the True Hidden Mist edit as for the other two will wait on your reply before working on them straight away. Would like your input for tenkan dan and i will think of a way to work on Renzoku cause it should have scaling to prevent it from draining too little or too much chakra. Hope this did not give you too much work cause i know you busy with everyone's jutsu lists

4Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Tue Apr 22, 2014 10:01 am

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
True Hidden Mist - Lower the range to a 30 meter radius rather than 50.

Renzoku - You may make this scaling from the bat, just change the rank from D to D-A and then put in specific damage/duration/cooldown per rank. You already will have the D-Rank version and to train subsequent ranks, you simply pay the ryo cost for its highest rank and do the word count for its highest rank + 1,000. (In this case, it would have A-Rank ryo cost of 250 ryo, with A-Rank word count of 2,000 + 1,000 more words.)

Tenkan Dan - You already have it in your jutsu list, so if you want to make it D-Rank, you'll have to retrain it and buy it over again. If you're fine with that, go ahead and do so. I'm maxing out its range at 15, though, since you're already going to have 15 m/s speed on it.

5Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Wed Apr 23, 2014 5:59 am

Yuzu Ren

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I converted Tenkan to D-rank and will work on training it

Renzoku will need some degree of revamp with the change so will work on that today while i also work on my other posts

oh forgot to lower the range will do that when i do my next edit with the updated Renzoku since i will need to add scaling effects the primary focus of the technique was continuous slashes in order to damage items or weapons, but with the nerf on the number of hits an armor or weapon can take i will actually need to revamp this technique to some degree in which case will make a D-rank version and apply for the scaling versions later since i do not want to be trapped in approvals section

The revamps actually did a lot and have made some jutsu worthless now and there has been something that has been bothering me about the new jutsu rules but not sure whether i should discuss it here or via pm so will wait for your next reply

6Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:34 am

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Go ahead and post it here instead of PMing me, it's no problem. Bump when you've made the edits and don't forget to lower the range on True Hidden Mist.

7Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Wed Apr 23, 2014 10:32 am

Yuzu Ren

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I fixed the True Hidden Mist

Dropped the renzoku to E-rank but made it work at 5 chakra per two hits after the initial 2 hits resulting in maximum 10 hits i might need to have the technique clarified better but with new jutsu rules weapons 2 ranks lower would break from one hit and a scratch in this case the 10th hit is slightly more powerful in that it can destroy something one rank below the weapon used. 10th hit results in having used up to 25 chakra similar to an A-rank technique so might have to add a scaling affecting how many hits you can use perhaps

By switching them i think that counters the whole having switch step rank up to D by having renzoku rank down to E

The radius effects might effect a lot but i was wondering if the D-rank radius will not be 5m rather than 4m why the strange number? it just bothers me a little bit

8Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:55 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
True Hidden Mist is fine.

Renzoku - This really isn't an E-Rank technique, as it allows you to break weapons after enough hits and slash at a rate twice as fast as usual (as well as slash multiple times) for extra chakra, and it allows you to block E-Rank projectiles in the process. E-Rank techniques are meant to perform weak, academy-level effects to provide a basis for other advanced techniques or produce a simple function. Either make this a higher rank, make it scaling, or make its effects much less complex.

Tenkan Endan is fine.

9Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:44 am

Yuzu Ren

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Replaced Renzoku with Akanbo hope this is okay, please look at it and say if this is allowed. Since looks like Renzoku would require a complete rework which would mean changing how it originally works as well as adjusting costs and so on.

10Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:59 am

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
E-Ranks can't have an element, sorry man.

11Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 1:21 am

Yuzu Ren

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i renamed it and changed it from a ninjutsu to just a simple dash for used by bukijutsu users to close in or back away... might think of scaling it in the future but for now i just want to get approved

12Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:12 am

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
First Step - Increase the cooldown to 3 posts.

13Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 5:42 am

Yuzu Ren

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and done

14Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren [Jutsu List Update] Thu Apr 24, 2014 9:56 am

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Ippo is fine.

Your jutsu list update is approved.

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