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1Vesyos clan Empty Vesyos clan Sat Jan 11, 2014 3:41 pm

Stone

Stone


D-rank
Symbol: Vesyos clan NF01928.03


Clan: Vesyos

Kekkei Genkai: Electrostatic Manipulation

Elements: Raiton

Specialization: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu

Location: Scattered

Clan History: The history of this clan is quite a simple one. A clan renowned for their ability to use ration techniques slowly began to dabble in the art of storing electricity within their bodies. Techniques using this stored electricity were extremely effective in battle, and as a result caused the majority of the clan to continue their use for multiple generations. Due to the influence of the static electricity being in the bodies of mothers for such a long period of time, the children born to them begun to have the same sort of abilities as though they were latent. And thus the clan’s kekkai genkai was formed and is continued among the wandering members of the clan.

Kekkei Genkai Description: The individuals born into this clan are given the innate ability to store static electricity created within the area around them inside of their bodies. This static electricity can be used for a variety of jutsu and to bolster the power of ration based techniques. The static electricity is equal in power to ration techniques of the same rank, but members of the clan are limited to storing five times as much as their current rank within their body. I.e. a genin may only have five d ranks of static within their body while a chuunin could have up to five c ranks, etc. Members of the clan automatically store one d rank of static electricity if they are not doing any vigorous activity, though one stores an amount of static electricity equal to that of the speed they are moving.

Techniques that make use of latent static electricity gathered within the body require the normal amount of chakra to make use of it, but one does not have to pay extra chakra to bolster a ration technique with their latent static energies. Thus a ration jutsu may be given a bonus to its power, but one must create a technique to do so. Members of this clan have an influence of power that depends upon their current rank. This influence of power is akin to a sphere in which the center is always where the clan member is. The clan member’s influence allows for the clan member to transfer electrostatic energy to anything within the influence, though it would be more effective should the things in question be closer to the clan member. The influence is equal to that of the maximum range of a jutsu of the same rank as the user. I.e. a genin’s sphere of influence would be the range of a d rank jutsu, and so on.
Given their affinity for Raiton, all users take -1 from all ration based techniques and gain a +1 to all ration based jutsu.


Drawbacks: Given their extreme affinity for ration, members of the clan take +1 damage from fuuton techniques. The users are unable to learn futon, and must take the Hesitant (Element) negative SC. The members of the clan are required to begin with both Ninjutsu and Fuuinjutsu as specialties. Raiton must be their primary element.

Members: Stone Vesyos

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Name: Passive Static Gathering Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton/Electrostatic Manipulation
Range: Self/ Fifteen meters
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: Unlimited until unsealed
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user may place this seal upon any location that is not protected by some sort of ability that prevents fuinjutsu from taking place. This technique’s main purpose is to store the extra static electricity created within the vicinity of the seal’s influence. For every post the technique is in place, it stores a D rank amount of static electricity should there be no extraneous movement or actions within its influence, though should there be high-speed or rigorous movement, the seal stores a C rank amount of static electricity within it. The maximum amount of static electricity within the seal may only equal to five times the rank of the technique. Stored electricity is stored until used in another technique, which may draw upon the stored electricity as long as they are within the vicinity of the seal’s influence. The static electricity within the seal may be used to bolster the power of other ration jutsu the user performs. The user may only use the same amount of static electricity as is equal to the technique’s rank. The technique can be placed upon the flesh with no repercussions occurring as long as the individual whom the seal is place upon has static mastery. If they do not have static mastery, then any techniques used through the seal may injure said individual. Only 5 seals may be placed at any time, and only one may be placed upon a static mastery user’s flesh, less he be overloaded by too much electricity. The user must still pay chakra equal to that of which is being taken from the seal, using it as a medium for other techniques. Those who take this technique can only use it up to whatever their maximum level of usage for a jutsu is.

Name: Static Transfer
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Element: Raiton/Electrostatic Manipulation
Range: Clan Member’s Influence
Specialty: Ninjutsu/Fuinjutsu
Duration: Two Posts
Cooldown: Three Posts
Description: Using either static chakra gathered inside the body naturally, or that of which is contained within the Passive Static Gathering Seal, the user may transfer the static electricity into anyone within the radius of the user’s, or the Passive Static Gathering Seal’s influence, either building up the amount of static electricity coursing through the air and within the bodies of those within the technique’s radius. Should the user will it, the static electricity in the air and within the bodies that are within the technique’s influence will be set off all at once, stunning all of the muscles contained within the influence for one post. The technique transfers one D rank of static electricity per post, up to a maximum of two D ranks transferred. It requires one D rank of static electricity to be transferred before one may stun any muscles within their technique’s radius, and one must use one D rank of static electricity for every different individual they wish to effect. If one adds chakra to the technique then its power is increased by one rank, causing the technique to stun muscles for two posts instead of the normal one. If an individual has static release, then they are not affected by the technique, being that they are most likely the originator of the technique in the first place. The technique simply stuns all those within the user’s influence for a short period of time.

Name: Discharge
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: Static Release
Range: Self/ Clan Member’s Influence
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: This technique allows for the user to discharge a specific amount of static electricity throughout their body, providing a painful shock, in which the pain is equal to that of a jutsu of the same rank as the technique. The user takes no damage from this, and merely feels the pain, thus making this technique a very effective way to escape a genjutsu. One may only use this technique up to the maximum level at which they can learn, so a genin may only learn up to the C rank version of this technique.

This technique also allows the user to discharge the static electricity to an area around, nullifying techniques of the same rank as the static electricity being used, or causing a great deal of electricity to flow through those who are within the technique’s radius. This is very ineffective against futon jutsu of course.

2Vesyos clan Empty Re: Vesyos clan Sun Jan 12, 2014 8:57 pm

Gikimaru

Gikimaru


D-rank
From what I can see, your clan constantly gathers static electricity. That's quite a boost as it's used to power up all Raiton techniques. Hence, either remove it as you already have usage of the Passive Static Gathering Seal, or add a drawback or two.

Regarding your Passive Static Gathering Seal, how can you store D rank charges if the minimum rank is C? Also, how much does it increase a Raiton jutsu's level by? Is it all charges used up to bolster it by one rank, or just one charge, and so on.

Clear up what you mean by "same amount of static electricity as is equal to the user's rank".

Make the seal disappear if it is unsealed for a certain number of posts.

What do you mean by "pay chakra equal to that of which is being taken from the seal".

For the Static Transfer, if you have C rank charges, how can you use it as it utilises D rank charges? Also, something like this is at least C ranked, maybe B rank. It's so because of its many uses and hence its versatility.

For Discharge, add that it paralyses your character or gives him the Numb SC for ome turn as he might not be used to the lack of electrostatics in his body following the discharge.

When Discharge is used, does an unsealed Passive Gathering Seal get used up and hence disappear?

You cannot nullify all jutsu in the vicinity. Jutsus can nullify four jutsus of one rank below, two of the same rank, and one of a rank above.

When "a great deal of electricity" is injected into the opponent, clear up the effects. State how long they are paralysed, how painful it is, etc.

Make these edits to your post and bump for further approval.

3Vesyos clan Empty Re: Vesyos clan Wed Jan 15, 2014 7:21 pm

Stone

Stone


D-rank
Gikimaru wrote:From what I can see, your clan constantly gathers static electricity. That's quite a boost as it's used to power up all Raiton techniques. Hence, either remove it as you already have usage of the Passive Static Gathering Seal, or add a drawback or two.

Will edit

Regarding your Passive Static Gathering Seal, how can you store D rank charges if the minimum rank is C? Also, how much does it increase a Raiton jutsu's level by? Is it all charges used up to bolster it by one rank, or just one charge, and so on.

Will Edit

Clear up what you mean by "same amount of static electricity as is equal to the user's rank".

I do believe it was "same amount of static electricity as is equal to the technique’s rank. " I.e., if one used the technique  at a C rank level, then they may draw upon the maximum of a C rank amount of static electricity that is stored.

Make the seal disappear if it is unsealed for a certain number of posts.

What do you mean by "pay chakra equal to that of which is being taken from the seal".

This means that one must pay an equal amount of chakra to that of the static electricity being taken from the seal. I.e., If I withdraw a C rank amount of static electricity from the seal, then it would require me to use a C rank amount of chakra

For the Static Transfer, if you have C rank charges, how can you use it as it utilises D rank charges? Also, something like this is at least C ranked, maybe B rank. It's so because of its many uses and hence its versatility.

I believe that was a misunderstanding of mine. I will edit the way it is stored accordingly.

For Discharge, add that it paralyses your character or gives him the Numb SC for ome turn as he might not be used to the lack of electrostatics in his body following the discharge.

When Discharge is used, does an unsealed Passive Gathering Seal get used up and hence disappear?

Discharge does not remove all of the charge within their body. It removes a specified amount equal to the amount of chakra they are spending to use the technique. Also the Passive Gathering Seal would not be used up unless one decides to use all of it's stored electricity, though I will edit that in shortly.

You cannot nullify all jutsu in the vicinity. Jutsus can nullify four jutsus of one rank below, two of the same rank, and one of a rank above.

It does not say it nullifies all jutsu within the vicinity.

"This technique also allows the user to discharge the static electricity to an area around, nullifying techniques of the same rank as the static electricity being used, or causing a great deal of electricity to flow through those who are within the technique’s radius. "

It provides nullification effects equal to the rank of the chakra used to perform the technique.


When "a great deal of electricity" is injected into the opponent, clear up the effects. State how long they are paralysed, how painful it is, etc.

Will edit shortly

Make these edits to your post and bump for further approval.

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