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1Fōn Clan Empty Fōn Clan Wed Nov 07, 2018 8:42 pm

Gengyo

Gengyo


D-rank
Symbol:Fōn Clan Symbol


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Clan Name: Fōn
Location: Scattered.
Specialization: Ninjutsu.
Elements: -


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Clan History: The Fōn’s are a nomadic clan well known for their circus acts that originated in the Land of Fire decades ago. Everyday was an adventure and every night somewhere in the world a story of their feats was being told. They lived an exciting lifestyle very much like their performances. The act that children were especially drawn to was levitating objects.

Members:


  • Fōn, Gengyo

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Kekkei Genkai Name: Shuuhasuu Seigyo - Frequency Control
Kekkei Genkai Description: Frequency Control allows the user to manipulate the frequency at which sound waves pass through tangible objects with chakra. The human ear can perceive these waves as long as there frequency is between 20 Hz - 20,000 Hz. Anything above or below cannot be heard, but they’re still there because these waves contain energy. With enough din, the user can make these waves do interesting things. Ex: Reflecting the energy waves back and forth so quickly that it forms a standing wave, a specific point where the energy from the sound can hold an object in midair.

A Fōn can create frequency-based sound techniques that use maximum damage values for their rank without having to balance them. Additionally, a Fōn is in tune with their surroundings giving them a +1 in perception.

Drawbacks: Cacophony is a Fōn's greatest weakness. Volume-based sound jutsu are treated 1 rank higher and have their effects extended by 1 post if applicable. Unfortunately, a Fōn's chakra capacity is smaller than your average shinobi; as a result, they suffer a permanent -10 to their chakra.



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2Fōn Clan Empty Re: Fōn Clan Wed Nov 07, 2018 8:44 pm

Gengyo

Gengyo


D-rank
Bump.

3Fōn Clan Empty Re: Fōn Clan Thu Nov 15, 2018 8:23 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Hey there! Kisei the umbrella boy will be checking out this positively vibrating clan.

So this clan is supposed to be specialists in sound manipulation or more specifically 'frequency manipulation', however this doesn't require a clan to do and the way you have it written with no technical advantages or extra mechainics I'm not really seeing a reason to have this as a clan. Though feel free to add something more to this, just don't forget to post in the clan requests when you need this checked. <3

4Fōn Clan Empty Re: Fōn Clan Mon Nov 19, 2018 10:49 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank

Drawbacks:

  • So for your drawback, please change it to be more clear, such as, "Vibration based jutsu are treated 1 rank higher against a Fōn and have their effects extended by 1 post if such an effect is applicable." Because it makes it seem like you choose between either a one rank enhancement against Fōn clansmen or a longer duration of its effects on them. Also one minor active drawback should even things out here.

5Fōn Clan Empty Re: Fōn Clan Wed Nov 21, 2018 12:19 am

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
Unless anyone has anything to say, consider this clan APPROVED~

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