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26Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:35 pm

Raishi Kanetsu

Raishi Kanetsu


A-rank
Rai watched as the two ninja quickly realised about the presence of his two clones. For their ninja level, they had reacted quite well and this let him learn a thing or two about the two people he was about to spar with. The kid that had the claw, was quick with his hands, as his first reaction was to bring out a kunai and deploy it at the clone. Typical taijutsu based ninja. The other kid however, waited, analysing the two clones to see if they were real or not. This was either very smart or very stupid but Rai couldn't be bothered. He was dealing with a kid that was quick with his feet, and another a liked to study his opponent amidst the battle, taking time to calculate his next move...This was more than enough information for Raishi. The claw kid yelled something to the other dud then Rai knew that it was time

"Dispel!" Raishi watched as the two clones burst in flames. The kunai that was aimed at the first clone went straight through the flames and Rai smiled. Drips of sweat suddenly appeared at his temples as he psyched himself up for the spar.
" Doton : Shinjuu Zanshu!"
Jutsu:
With a wicked smile, Rai started sinking slowly into the side of the mountain.This was his favourite doton jutsu and this was going to be fun indeed.
Chakra out of 120:

27Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:22 pm

Toushi

Toushi


D-rank
What the hell had just happened? He was just attacked and then they were dismissed just like that? Whoever it was controlling these and fighting these two, was up to something...and Toushi had needed to be prepared. He was still dripping wet, creating more and more puddles around him so it was time to prepare himself. He walked back into a puddle which he had already created, it expanding as he walked into it and the water from his clothes and hair now dripping into the puddle below. He nodded to the other genin and hoped he knew what he was doing cause they were gonna have to work as a team...Arashi seemed kind of slow of this whole picking things up so maybe he didn't know that there was something about to happen but then again, Toushi could be wrong. He might have picked up on it.

He concentrated his chakra, readying himself for an attack and/or a counter just in case. They were up against someone strange, someone who knew what they were doing and one slip might cost them the game and Toushi wasn't one to lose.

28Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:44 am

Arashi1

Arashi1

Dead
While Arashi was expecting to see the result of the kunai he deployed, he noticed something. A drop of sweat was running down his forehead. Sweat? Hell, he made me sweat! At least, now I remembered that I don't have infinite chakra... I should watch a bit. Both white guys suddenly bursted into flames, and Arashi realized that they were both just clones. The kunai went straight through the flames. Arashi looked over toward Toushi. He was looking at Ara as well, and nodded. Okay, but I should recover that kunai. It's my only one. There's no telling what is ahead of us.

He jumped towards the kunai, that was already falling down, and caught it. The jump was about 10 meters long. As soon as he caught the kunai, Arashi put it back in his pouch, and made a frontflip landing on his feet. With that jump, he got even further from the other genin, and possibly further from the mysterious attacker as well. Hmm... I'm not sure why I didn't think this through. Now I'm even further away from the new guy, and my strength is at close range! God, I'm such an idiot. Arashi often doesn't think things through, but at least he realizes his mistake on time. Ara then ran back to the place the clone was before.

Chakra -> 55/89



Last edited by Arashi Nekomotze on Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:45 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Forgot to put chakra. Silly me.)

29Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Fri Nov 23, 2012 2:22 pm

Raishi Kanetsu

Raishi Kanetsu


A-rank
Dirt, dirt and oh wow! More dirt. Rai loved this feeling, travelling underground. It made him feel safe and at the advantage of his opponent, unless his opponent was extremely talented in chakra flow and sensory. As a matter of fact, even if they were talented, by the time Rai's chakra would have been sensed from all the dirt, his opponent’s whole body except shoulders and head, would already be stuck in the ground.
Rai was already directly under the suiton type ninja as he could feel excess moisture directly above him. He couldn't immobilise this target as he would just use his suiton puddles that he had produced earlier to escape. Besides, it wouldn't be strategically wise to immobilise the suiton use because he would then have to take on the clawed kid who seemed to specialise in taijutsu. Rai, being above average in taijutsu, knew that he wouldn't be able to take on a ninja who specialises in taijutsu. So HE, was definitely going to be the one to be stuck in mud.
This brought a chuckle to his face. Boy, did he love this jutsu.
Although he wasn't aware of what was going on above ground, he knew his bearings, and could tell that so far he had moved 10 meters away from the suiton kid before he started to feel the bodyweight of the taijutsu kid above him. This was going to be easy. All he had to do to do was take out his hands, then lightly pull the kid into the ground, with him coming out of it at the same time. In a matter of 5 seconds, the kid would sink to the ground, up to his shoulders.
So that he would take his opponent by surprise, he had to be fast. In a flash, his hands would quickly emerged from the ground. He could feel the rays of the sun, shine on his hands as he swiftly made to grab the ankles of the taijutsu kid, one ankle in each hand...he hoped the kid wouldnt notice. If not, then this jutsu would have been a complete waste of time.



Last edited by Raishi Kanetsu on Sun Nov 25, 2012 1:55 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Soorrry! was getting ahead of myself!!)

30Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Fri Nov 23, 2012 4:01 pm

Arashi1

Arashi1

Dead
(Toushi, please do not post. I'm reviewing this thread with Shaw- Kenta.)

31Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Fri Nov 23, 2012 5:11 pm

Kenta Inuzuka

Kenta Inuzuka


D-rank
Admin review result:

1 count: improper jutsu usage
1 count: improper player control

Raishi, you must rewrite the post and count this as a verbal warning. Next offense is a character warning and ryo deduction.

Anyone else have anything to bring up; before I close the review?

32Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Fri Nov 23, 2012 5:12 pm

Toushi

Toushi


D-rank
OOC: Course not. I actually just noticed this myself. Sorry for not noticing and wasting your time with this Shawn <3

33Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Sat Nov 24, 2012 4:41 am

Arashi1

Arashi1

Dead
(OOC: I don't have anything to add either. Ready to close if you ask me.)

34Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Tue Nov 27, 2012 12:48 pm

Lisza Nekomotze

Lisza Nekomotze


D-rank
My oh my, it's a wonderful day. I just wish it wasn't so boring. I'm been out of the academy for two weeks or so, and I still don't have a team to do missions with... Lisza was just walking around the streets of Iwa, around and around. She probably circled around the town a couple of times, but she just kept walking with her eyes looking at the sky and her arms behind her head. I'm getting really bored. I've been walking around for hours... Maybe I should visit the old waterfall point. The sound of water hitting the rocks always seems to cheer me up.

She turned around, but as she turned around she didn't stop the swirling motion. In fact, she continued to just spin on the spot for at least five minutes, until that got pretty boring to. Great. Now I'm feeling sick. She stopped, and headed for the waterfalls. She got up there in a few minutes, and saw a strange scene; Arashi, her half-cousin, was there with another boy. It looked like they were... fighting. Kind of cute, that guy... I always fall for the brown haired ones... I guess it's maybe because I like brownies. I have an idea... I'll call the guy Browny! Lisa chuckled, and continued to observe.

Two other figures appeared and attacked Arashi and Browny. They were exactly the same, white-haired. Must be clones. It seemed that the original white dude dispelled the clones, as they burst into flames for absolutely no reason. Arashi jumped to retrieve his kunai. At that time, Lisza walked a little closer, and shouted to Arashi.
"Yo, Arashi! Having fun without me, huh! Can I join?"

35Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Tue Nov 27, 2012 4:55 pm

Toushi

Toushi


D-rank
Heh, so this was it. The assailant finally showed himself then. This was a doton jutsu that this person was using and Ara had slim to no chance in dodging or countering this jutsu...well seeing as though Toushi had made puddles all over the battlefield, perfect timing it seemed to reveal this jutsu! Toushi slipped down through the puddle that he had made, his face with a smile at all times before vanishing and re-appearing behind Arata, shooting out of the water and reach for Ara to get him to safety, away from this person. He was going to fly off into the air and land on the wall behind them, making sure to get out of reach from this person when all of a sudden some random woman showed up out of nowhere, like seriously, where did she even come from?

60/80:

36Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Tue Nov 27, 2012 6:36 pm

Arashi1

Arashi1

Dead
[OOC: Raishi, just thought I should tell you what I think. After getting under Tushy, you picked a random direction and accidentally it was just where I was? There was no way you could know in which direction I was when you were below Tushy, I find the coincidence... Unfair. But okay, I accept it. Anything is possible. Just wanted to tell you this.]

Arashi was standing there, just about 10 meters from Tushy, observing the situation. Alright, he could pop up at any moment, from any direction. I can't let my guard down. Arashi crouched down a bit, and got in a defensive position. He was also constantly looking around himself, and noticed that his half-cousin, Lisza, suddenly appeared. But he didn't say anything. Hm... This could be a good diversion. If I talk to Lisa, the enemy would probably think I let my guard down;and attack. But I'll be ready. So he stood up; and talked. He was just about to open his mouth, but Lisa already started talking. Arashi noticed that Tushy just... slipped down in the puddle he was standing.
"Yo, Arashi! Having fun without me, huh! Can I join?"
"Well, if you really want, sure! Just hop in, it 'oughta help my odds by a lit-"
Arashi felt a disturbance, as a pair of hands tried to grab him by the ankles. It worked. Arashi though that his plan had gone right, but actually, Raishi's timing had nothing to do with Arashi talking. Funny.

As Arashi had his guard fully on, even if not having extreme reflexes; he was just about to cast a Kawarimi as the man grabbed his ankles. At that time, Arashi felt a hard grip, that got him out of the enemy's grip; he looked around and saw that it was Tushy. How'd he get behind me? Is he really that fast? I doubt it... Arashi got out of Toushi's grip, he was around five meters from the attacker, in mid-air. Toushi continued and didn't stop until he reached a wall close to them.
"Thanks. But I could handle it, you know."
Arashi was still in the air, as he threw a kunai at the attacker. The white-haired male was now already nearly completely out of the ground, back pointing towards Arashi. Arashi originally aimed for the guy's head, but he missed a little and the kunai was going straight for the guy's back. I'm losing my touch. I guess I'm getting sorta tired. Arashi landed straight beneath himself, and started charging at the guy.

55/80

37Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:41 am

Raishi Kanetsu

Raishi Kanetsu


A-rank
OOC:

Rai had felt the hard ankles of his opponent in his hand for only a millisecond, then somehow he had flown out of his grip. This guy was certainly the opponent but Raishi still didn't understand how exactly this kid had escaped from the Rai's grip. This saddened Rai... Oh well ,he thought, At least its going to be a bit more challenging now..
He was coming out of the ground and he realised that the suiton guy should have been right in front of him. Taken aback by this, he swiftly surveyed the area. Nothing. They had gone. All he could see was....A girl?? Where had she..... His thoughts stopped abruptly as he heard a voice then the movement of a kunai. Shit, he said to himself So much for a grand entrance... Quickly, he maneuvered to the right and he scolded himself for being so careless. This always happened, he always underestimated people. Never again. He winced in pain as the kunai scratched his back just slightly, as he was trying to get out of the way. As soon as he got his footing, he changed position, facing the direction that the kunai had come from.
By the time he had turned round, the taijutsu kid was only seconds away from him, charging. This kid was something else..a true powerhouse. As he wove hand seals, Rai asked "Kunai a bit dangerous don't you think??"
As soon as he had finished this remark, he yelled "Lava Style: Lava Armour!"
He knew that this jutsu took about two seconds to completely cover his body, so as soon as he had casted the jutsu, he jumped back about two meters, giving him more time for his armour to completely cover his body. As the taijutsu kid closed the distance, he started picking little detail on his face....nothing really above average apart from the fact that he was a red head. Although looking at his face, there seemed to be a very very faint resemblance between him and the girl from earlier..maybe a cousin? Sister? Raishi didn’t really know. He quickly realized that the suiton jutsu user was still on the battle field. If he was to take any action against him at all, he would have to do it whilst the jutsu was still on, but he had to be careful because if he had a strong suiton jutsu, then the armour would be destroyed...
And what about the girl??
Too many thoughts were running through Rai’s head that he didn’t have answer to, all he could do now was wait for the taijutsu kid to show Rai what he really got.
Chakra out of 120 and Jutsu Used:

38Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Wed Nov 28, 2012 2:18 pm

Naota

Naota


S-rank
This thread is now on hold for admin review.

39Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] - Page 2 Empty Re: Toushi is a bad boy! [Open][No Kill] Wed Nov 28, 2012 4:42 pm

Naota

Naota


S-rank
Right. So. We have... several issues that need to be discussed. However, for the thread itself:

1 count improper jutsu usage
1 count using a non approved jutsu

Due to circumstances that will be discussed via PM with the offender; this thread is being closed. We're going to allow you to keep all ryo gained via this thread so don't worry about that.

Once again, this thread is being closed; via admin order.

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