Mission name: Force of Nature
Mission rank: S
Objective: Apprehend the rogue ninja
Location: Konoha
Reward: 650 (+350 alive)
Mission description: A ninja, Sata Aiko, has recently gone rogue. It is unclear why she did so; the only known information is that she murdered her husband and disappeared. This seems absurdly out of character for Aiko, which is why this mission must be done alone as to find the rogue ninja and possibly reason with her (she will be more likely to speak to a single person than a squad). She was a model citizen before and while it is unlikely she will be welcomed back with open arms, the village still would like to understand what is at play here.
Mission details: Aiko can be found in a nearby village at the local inn. She is under a false name however will be seen wondering around the town at night. The reason Aiko went rogue was that her husband was plotting to murder the Hokage, however there wasn't any evidence of this and as such she knew that she would appear guilty. She is now attempting to piece together information in a desperate attempt to prove her innocence. When apprehended, she will become defensive yet not hostile. When told you are there to bring her in, she will then attempt to escape and, if escape seems unlikely, try to kill you. She is (ex) anbu and therefore extremely skilled. She also possesses the anbu's signature Body Elimination Technique, which will make bringing her back alive nearly impossible (at the sight of any technique that could possibly incapacitate her, she will not hesitate to use it; she has no value of her own life). The mission taker will be pointed in the direction of the village by the missions office, who has received word that a similar looking woman was spotted around there.

Name: Sata Aiko
Age: 24
General Appearance: Long, straight, black hair runs down her back. She wears a black cloak that covers her entire body and appears to be able to move without walking (as if gliding along the ground).
Personality: Very calm and cooperative, an all around good person really. She will get defensive and try to explain her side of things with all her might when she finds out your intentions. In combat she will continue to try to persuade you, remaining calm as she fights.
Motivations: To prove her innocence
Other: Aiko is an S-rank (former Anbu Captain) shinobi, and as such possesses all Anbu techniques as well as a multitude of her own. She is known as an elementalist, capable of controlling 4 elements; Wind, Water, Lightning, and Earth, Wind and Lightning are S rank, while Earth is A rank and water is B rank. She has S rank Ninjutsu and Bukijutsu as well as B rank Senjutsu. Her Sage Mode gives her +1 speed and causes her to resemble a chimera (the lion being her head while the snake/goat being composed entirely of chakra). She owns one S rank sword with the capability of channeling any type of elemental chakra Sato can. She wears S rank armor that fully protects against any A rank or lower Bukijutsu/Taijutsu strike (augmented or not) as well as increases the size (physical size, not strength) of her Ninjutsu by 2 ranks (at the cost of 15 chakra per jutsu). Because of this, her Ninjutsu techniques range anywhere from ten story stone walls, vortexes of water, streams of lightning from the sky, tornadoes, etc. She's earned the nickname "Force of Nature" for good reason.

You can't change the ryo reward limits set in the guidelines, especially when it is something you could easily just write in. Remove the +500 ryo.

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it's still there

Binsu wrote:it's still there

Before it was 1000 (+500), so I reduced it to 500 (+500) to adhere to the ryo limit for S rank missions :)

S-Rank rewards can not be below 650 ryo which this would in the event that the target would killed. I'd prefer this be made a static reward. No one is going to willingly cost themselves 500 ryo by killing the target anyway.

And you should nerf the enemy unless you plan on requiring this mission to be taken in groups. She is too strong for a solo S-Rank mission. Realistically Ukiyo would have zero chance against that shinobi in a one on one fight.

Bokuden wrote:S-Rank rewards can not be below 650 ryo which this would in the event that the target would killed. I'd prefer this be made a static reward. No one is going to willingly cost themselves 500 ryo by killing the target anyway.

And you should nerf the enemy unless you plan on requiring this mission to be taken in groups. She is too strong for a solo S-Rank mission. Realistically Ukiyo would have zero chance against that shinobi in a one on one fight.

Love how everyone says battles are based on RP skills and then someone posts something like this; not really encouraging for RPers -.-. I nerfed her a little so she is appropriate for S rank. I increased the reward to 650 (+350), which is perfectly within the bounds and the whole point is that if they want the full amount they need to figure a way to take her in alive. It's an S rank, it's not meant to be easy.

Battles aren't based on rp skills when you are fighting an NPC. People too often take missions and have them go off without a hitch while fighting enemies and performing operations that are out of their league to begin with. This is part of the reason why SS-Rank missions are forced to have a member of staff play the villain, otherwise people would just make them and magically defeat an enemy that outclasses them and farm ryo like they do with lower ranked missions. And any mission below SS-Rank is easy because you have full creative control over what goes on in the story. Come back and tell me S-Ranks are difficult when you can't premeditate every scenario that happens within the mission.

Nice work on typing up the mission, but there are just a few things wrong with it.

• Even though Sata Aiko is a npc, she is still subjected to the rules. So unless she has a KKG she can't have control over the five element. And even if she did this wouldn't be possible. Another thing.  . . All her elements can't be S rank, the two sure but the others much follow the guideline for Third and Fourth elements.
  
• And you say her armor increases the size of her jutsus. Do you mean actually size and not power? Just need that to be clarified.
  

Fix those things and I will give it my approve.

On a side note, she sounds more like a Captain Anbu or even Sannin-ish. . .but eh

Taigen Kichirou wrote:Nice work on typing up the mission, but there are just a few things wrong with it.

• Even though Sata Aiko is a npc, she is still subjected to the rules. So unless she has a KKG she can't have control over the five element. And even if she did this wouldn't be possible. Another thing.  . . All her elements can't be S rank, the two sure but the others much follow the guideline for Third and Fourth elements.
  
• And you say her armor increases the size of her jutsus. Do you mean actually size and not power? Just need that to be clarified.
  

Fix those things and I will give it my approve.

On a side note, she sounds more like a Captain Anbu or even Sannin-ish. . .but eh

edited ^^