Clan: Akumasureiyā

Kekkei Genkai: Paradoxical Oath

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Location: Kumogakure

Clan History: Long ago, when demons ran rampant, a sole tree existed that would sap the power of said demons so much so that the demons avoided it. This tree was the main reason why Kumogakure was built, so that they can build a village where they were safe from demons. It is this tree that this clan’s history is based upon. The name of this tree is The Durian Tree of Demonic Knowledge that sits atop the same mountain as the Administration Building.

This clan was once a clan of demon slayers who combated against the demons that plagued the land. It is said that long ago, a man that was a member of this clan made a deal with the king of demons, Balor, to seal their soul within an object so that their spirit could live on forever within the object; and in exchange the man would allow Balor the Demon King to possess his body so he may enter Kumogakure freely. As with all diabolical pacts, the clansman was fooled and instead Balor poisoned the clansman's chakra with demonic energy. Balor sneered and decided that he would kill the man and take the man's dead carcass so he can travel in it. In desperation the clansmen used an advanced sealing technique that separated his whole chakra system from his body and into an object in his possession so the chakra poison wouldn't destroy his body completely.

The process left it so that part of his body could no longer do genjutsu since it took precise chakra control in his brain. Ninjutsu became difficult for him to effectively utilize. Because of fear that his tainted demonic chakra might infect his body and kill him, the clansmen only released about half of his chakra's full potential. Of course, since it became a clan, it is obvious that he made do with what he could with the separate chakra system., having the pact passed down within the families of Kumogakure. However, a family line is not what determines when one is a Demon Slayer such as he. He had gotten married and she bore a child, wondering if the deal with the demon was still in effect. He was confused, to say the least.

His child did not bear the same fate that the founder did, but instead another, random, child in the village did. When the child reached the age of 5, the child had an extremely high fever and looked as though it would die. And so the clansmen talked to the 1st Raikage to have it mandatory that all children who exhibit signs of demonic presence in their bodies should have their chakra sealed into an object to avoid death. The child was treated and lived a happy life.


Kekkei Genkai Description: The term Akumasureiyā is not a family name, its the terminology associated with those who have the fate of having their life altered so drastically; and as such it's quite rare for members of the clan to be related to one another. Members of this clan do not have the typical chakra system that other ninja have. In place of the regular chakra system is a container of sorts that houses the majority of his or her chakra, leaving them with only a minuscule amount of chakra on their body that is so small that it can't be used for anything. The clansman’s chakra system is instead placed inside a weapon or piece of clothing that must never leave the clansman’s person, this item is called a crux. Due to the fact that genjutsu works because of the chakra system that is sprawled across the human brain and the chakra system of the clanmember is in their crux and no longer in their body, they recieve -2 against all genjutsu attacks. The crux may be a ring, medallion, cape or other regular item; given freely at the time of character creation. If one wants something like a weapon or armor to be their crux, then it must be purchased first.

Members of this clan also have the ability to change one of their eyes to show the symbol of their clan at will. Which eye it is is up to the user, and does not change. Using this ability, one is capable of enhancing their strength.

Drawbacks: Cannot have genjutsu as a specialization. Puppeteers’ chakra strings must come from their crux. Medical Ninjutsu users must channel chakra through their crux to their target before activating the medical jutsu’s effect. Attacks that use ninjutsu, medical ninjutsu, fuuinjutsu, and Kuchiyose now demand double the chakra that they normally cost. If the clan member is hit with an element that primary element of the clan member is weak against, then the connection between the clan member and their crux is temporarily disconnected and as such for one post the clan member cannot use any jutsu whatsoever. If they try to use a jutsu when this happens, then they will have to force the connection again and that will lead to the clan member to faint, incapacitated for 3 posts.

Without the crux in their possession, the clan member cannot use any chakra whatsoever. If they try to use a jutsu then the clan member to faint, incapacitated for 5 posts due to the fact of them using their own life energy as fuel for a jutsu. Whenever a clan member is farther than 200 meters away from his crux, they would pass out until the object was within their range again. When the crux of a clansmember is destroyed, this will lead to the member of the clan to pass out immediately because of the connection between his chakra and the demonic chakra. When reawaken, the clansmember will find that the demonic chakra has already to start growing within their chakra in an attempt to kill them. If they don't transfer the demonic chakra into a new crux, then the clansmember will surely die from symptoms that are similar to congestive heart failure. In order to create a new crux to store this demonic chakra they must simply touch an object and focus chakra into the object. The object will then act like a vacuum and drain the demonic chakra out of the user once this happens.

Members: Midnight,Sunset Akumasureiyā, Sanosuke Flynt, Kita Akumasureiyā, Akita Akumasureiyā

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

-cracks knuckles-

One of, if not THE oldest clan on Saga...you're going to have a tough time getting everything the old version had.

First off. Make a Special Characteristic for the separate chakra item using this code.

Code:

[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Type:[/b] Clan
[b]Description[/b]

In your KKG description, explain the mechanics behind the genjutsu immunity. Also, why does it say "Elemental chakra flows freely throughout their body, making it easier to utilize, but may only be used as such."

No. It's all your chakra in the item or none of it.

Drawbacks: You're going to need a hella lot more for a complete immunity to Genjutsu. Double chakra cost is quite the drawback; include Puppetry as well. Since few to no Akumasureiyā even have those specs (and would more than likely avoid them because of this drawback), I think I would like to see a weakness to...something.

Seal Reveal: give it a cooldown equal to the number of posts used, +2. Also, there's no such thing as a rankless jutsu; fix this and give it an appropriate chakra cost.

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Looks better. However, I clearly stated that I wanted the Crux itself to be a Special Characteristic. List it as Clan, so as not to detract from any Positive or Negative ones.

Balor's Blessing...that's a history thing. That has little to no effect on general RP, unless some enemy decides to try and torture you via Demonic Durian force-feeding.

Clear up drawbacks. I think you meant 'the element that the clan member's primary element is weak against'. There aren't opposites.

Otherwise, this is actually looking kinda solid. I'd recommend having another staff take a look at this.

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Looking good, add a sentence in the Crux SC as follows: "This individual's Crux is located in their [insertitemnamehere]

Edited Reika

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Due to the fact that genjutsu works because of the chakra system that is sprawled across the human brain and the chakra system of the clanmember is in their crux and no longer in their body, they are unaffected by genjutsu entirely.

No. You can have any -2 to genjutsu, but you cannot have complete immunity regardless of how many drawbacks you put. So fix that.

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Edited. Added in versions of Seal Reveal

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Your Drawbacks don't actually explicitly say that you can't use chakra if your crux isn't by you. It's implied by everything else, but still.
Also, how does one transfer their chakra into a new crux? Isn't much of a drawback, as is. Put in what gradually happens if you don't transfer, and how one exactly accomplishes the transfer.

Armory: This is chakra flow.

Geass: This is fine, but clarify 'powering up attacks'. Supplementary jutsu? Or offensive ones?

Barricade: Duration isn't specified. You say that it only protects against equal rank jutsu of the element that the user's primary element is weak to. One, this doesn't make sense, as you don't give any explanation as to why this happens. Non-elemental chakra doesn't magically cancel out just one element.

Edited, I remove Barricade.

Finally....Your jutsu. Are they activation cost + per post chakra cost? Or is it just -5 or -10 per post you want to do this? You need to specify. The Seal Reveal - Balor can't have -10 per post, basic maintanence costs cannot be modified. Rank it up.

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