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Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Black ANBU Mask - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Mask - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Supplementary Helmet
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Negates basic attacks up to C rank, lowers any basic attacks of B to S rank with one ranks.

[b]Obscuris[/b]
Like any ANBU mask this mask is able to distort the user's voice to such a point that it is made unrecognisable to all but those most well known to them. [This is a standard attribute to masks, not a passive.]

[b]Veritas[/b]
This mask raises the spatial awareness and passive sage sensory by an additional 10m due to its mystical weaving.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img(400px,1000px)]https://i.imgur.com/JfupqIk.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
A specialized mask created for her induction into the Black ANBU, which has further been tinkered with by Risu herself after her revival.

Black ANBU armor - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Armor - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive Light Armour Torso
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b]1
[b]Primary function:[/b] This armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are C-rank. Basic attacks of B to S rank do 1 rank less in damage. The armor only covers the shoulders, back, chest and torso of the user.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Silence is golden[/b]
At the cost of 30 chakra, the wearer of this armor can effectively hide herself from S-0 or lower perception and doujutsu of up to A rank and any sensory tech of up to S rank by completely nullifying the user's chakra signature and thus erasing their presence for 3 posts. However, this ability does NOT extend to her jutsu.

[b]Ghost mode:[/b]
If the wearer's speed stat in battle is higher than the enemy's perception stat, it will make her appear hazy and blurry as long as she's moving, making it so that the opponent's dexterity will suffer from a -2 tiers drop.

[b]Appearance:[/b][spoiler][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/343/f/5/female_leather_armor_by_lagueuse-d4ilh80.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
A specialized version of the ANBU armor granted to Risu when she was inducted into the organization, further tinkered with by Risu herself upon her revival.

Black ANBU Gloves - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Gauntlets - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive, Light armor, arms
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] Doton
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1 pair
[b]Primary function:[/b]
Basic attacks up to C rank are negated, Basic attacks of B to S rank are one rank lower.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Brutal Pulse:[/b]
At the cost of 25 chakra, the user can snap their fingers resulting in a spherical field of chakra expanding at a speed of up to 80m/s to a radius 60m letting out an extremely amplified sound of said snap which can be heard up to several hundreds of meters away. However, it can effectively completely paralyze a target and forcefully cut off their chakra and thus ending all active jutsu for a single post.

[b]Poison Ivy[/b]
As these gloves have many sharp and jagged edges and sharpened fingertips which can cause cuts of up to 0.5cm on their own, any wound caused by these gauntlets will result in a mild neurotoxin entering the opponent's bloodstream, which after a one post delay will activate and lower the victim's perception stat by -1 tier for 3 posts, this effect can be stacked, but is capped at maximum 3 tiers of perception reduction.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/263/2/1/witchblade_gauntlet_by_nebezial-d2z4k3w.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Uprated Specialized Black ANBU gauntlets, which have been tinkered with when Risu had been revived.

Kōketsu scalpel:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Kōketsu (Purity)
[b]Classification:[/b] Offensive
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
This weapon is exactly 15 cm long, with a blade of 6 cm long, with a width of up to 1 cm

It can cut up to 5 cm deep and pierce into flesh to the full length of the blade, but it can not pierce or slice bone.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Due to the precise nature of this scalpel, it is best used for stabbing rather than cutting when used in combat, though as it is able to cleanly cut through any and all bloodvessels, whenever stabbed with this weapon in a vital place, the bleeding effect will proceed at double the usual rate. [IE 1 post will be counted as 2]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://nicnac.net/contents/media/l_rainy%20vallotton%20auto%20knife%20bolide%20spike.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Made for Orochi Naoto, the Ouroboros head of three generations ago, who had the nickname 'Master of the surprise death'. The weapon was forged by Suna craftsmen to the highest possible standards and quality, even still trumping many a craftsmen's finest work to this very day.

After the death of Orochi Naoto, it was placed in the care of the clan-elders of the Hebi family, who have deemed Orochi Risu; the next Ouroboros clan head, worthy to wield this small, but efficient weapon.



Last edited by Orochi Risu on Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:26 pm; edited 3 times in total

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
If you're updating things, you also need to have the old version there, otherwise, I have no reference point.

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
the old ones are the spoilered ones, the new ones are the coded ones...lol, sorry if that was confusing

Chiaki

Chiaki


A-rank
Orochi Risu wrote:
Black ANBU Mask - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wraith Armor - Mask
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive, Light armour Helm
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
Negates basic attacks up to C rank, lowers any basic attacks of B to S rank with one ranks.

[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Like any ANBU mask this mask is able to distort the user's voice to such a point that it is made unrecognizable to all but those most well known to them. [This is a standard attribute to masks, not a passive.]

[b]Veritas[/b]
This mask allows the user to see through visual genjutsu of up to A rank with little effort thanks to the fact that it heightens the senses with it's strange nature.

[b]Obscuris[/b]
This mask raises the spatial awareness and passive sage sensory by an additional 20m due to its mystical weaving.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img(400px,1000px)]https://i.imgur.com/JfupqIk.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Created by the Mystics among the Ryujin, in collaboration with the finest and wises of the masters from the Ryuji Caves, this strange mask was forged and weaved from the most unholy and mystic materials, forming a mask which covers both the face and a large swath of the head with the spiky top actually flowing over one's hair.




Black ANBU armor - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wraith Armour
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive Light Armour Torso
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b]1
[b]Primary function:[/b] This armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are C-rank. Basic attacks of B to S rank do 1 rank less in damage. The armor only covers the legs, shoulders, back, chest and torso of the user.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Silence is golden[/b]
As Long as the wearer is out of view and not using any chakra, This passive is active. The armor allows the user to hide from any base perception up to S-3 and any (non-senjutsu) sensory or doujutsu of up to A rank.

[b]Ghost mode:[/b]
If the wearer's speed in battle is higher than the enemy's perception, it will make her appear hazy and blurry as long as she's moving, making it so that the opponent's dexterity will suffer from a -2 tiers drop.

[b]Appearance:[/b][spoiler][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/343/f/5/female_leather_armor_by_lagueuse-d4ilh80.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
This is Lamya's Black ANBU armor, now altered into a more fitting combat armor with ornate design, called the Wraith Armor, with the reason of using her enemies strengths against them, she also strengthened her armor and changed the composition to the strongest and sturdiest kind of leather available.

Black ANBU Gloves - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wraith Gauntlets
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive, Light armor arms
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1 pair
[b]Primary function:[/b]
Basic attacks up to C rank are negated, Basic attacks of B to S rank are one rank lower.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Infection:[/b]
Should the user manage to land a succesful hit an opponent succesfully while wearing these gauntlets, the victim will feel it harder to control their chakra, resulting in every jutsu over the span of three posts to cost 5 more chakra. This effect can be stacked up to three times, with a cap of +15c per jutsu.

[b]Corruption:[/b]
At the cost of -1 tier Endurance, the user can raise strength by +2 tiers for three consecutive posts in a single thread or the user can lower their Endurance by a full rank and reach Legendary strength for one post in a single thread.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/263/2/1/witchblade_gauntlet_by_nebezial-d2z4k3w.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
After having been resurected by Laïs, Lamya reforged her old gauntlets and added a mysterious metallic bio-engineered substance to them, allowing for their more cruel and self-destructing powers.

Kōketsu scalpel:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Kōketsu (Purity)
[b]Classification:[/b] Offensive
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
It can cut up to 5 cm deep and pierce into flesh to the full length of the blade, but it can not pierce or slice bone.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Due to the extreme thinness of this scalpel, it's cuts will not be hurting an enemy, nor will they be detected if not seen by the victim. Due to this, victims ignore wounds caused by this scalpel and the bleeding countdown will be go at double the rate.
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://nicnac.net/contents/media/l_rainy%20vallotton%20auto%20knife%20bolide%20spike.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Made for Orochi Naoto, the Ouroboros head of three generations ago, who had the nickname 'Master of the surprise death'. The weapon was forged by Suna craftsmen to the highest possible standards and quality, even still trumping many a craftsmen's finest work to this very day.

After the death of Orochi Naoto, it was placed in the care of the clan-elders of the Hebi family, who have deemed Orochi Risu; the next Ouroboros clan head, worthy to wield this small, but efficient weapon.




Black ANBU Mask - Shade

Veritas: This ability from your anbu mask cannot affect jutsu without some limiter because it is not an active ability (meaning that it's not the primary ability of the item) Nor is it paid for in chakra as an ability on the item. It also cannot defend against a jutsu per the rules of items now. You will have to change this in some way for this item to be approved.

Obscuris: This increases the range by 10 meters already, and that's a 40% increase, I am not sure that it is legal as is, much less with an 80% increase to the passives of the senjutsu Sage mode. With the above Veritas and the Obscuris being outside of the bounds of an item I cannot approve this item.

Wraith Armour

Remove the legs, this is a torso armor, armors can only cover one of the following: arms, legs, torso, head.

Silence is golden: This cannot function as a 'free' jutsu that is always on. Needs a chakra activation and to be the primary function if it is to act like a jutsu of the same rank.

Ghost mode: This should not affect the user if they're not targetting you. It should say something along the lines of, "when attacking or tartetting the wearer: (state the effect)." Also there is no range to this ability slot.

Wraith Gauntlets

Infection and corruption: I don't think that you're allowed to change the effects of an item when you're ranking it up or revamping it, since it would change the way your character's story happened up to this point. I think this would need a reforge to do this, which would take Ryo and training.
Also:

Infection: This does not meet the requirements of the rules of jutsu, this actually directly affects the jutsu that others can use and therefore is an illegal ability. The rules state:
Rules:

Koketsu:

You forgot to transfer the dimensions of the weapon over to the new version. Also, I am not sure that any foreign object that enters the body can go undetected by the pain receptors, so I am going to say no on this one until a senior mod says otherwise, the fact that they are unable to detect it without some sort of a numbing agent in as the ability is not within the limits of an A ranked ability.

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
try 2 xD

Chiaki

Chiaki


A-rank
I am a bit confused on a couple items, I am going to let Fuyuko handle the 1/2 modding I did before as well as the changes that I posted last night.

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Orochi Risu wrote:
Black ANBU Mask - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wraith Armor - Mask
[b]Classification:[/b] Supplementary Helmet
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Like any ANBU mask this mask is able to distort the user's voice to such a point that it is made unrecognisable to all but those most well known to them. [This is a standard attribute to masks, not a passive.]

[b]Veritas[/b]
This mask allows the user to see through external visual genjutsu of up to S rank with little effort thanks to the fact that it hightens the senses with it's strange nature.

[b]Obscuris[/b]
This mask raises the spatial awareness and passive sage sensory by an additional 10m due to its mystical weaving.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img(400px,1000px)]https://i.imgur.com/JfupqIk.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
using her Black Anbu mask as a basis, the Mystics among the Ryujin created this, in collaboration with the finest and wisest of the masters from the Ryuji Caves, this strange mask was forged and weaved from the most unholy and mystic materials, forming a mask which covers both the face and a large swath of the head with the spikey top actually flowing over one's hair.

Black ANBU armor - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wraith Armour
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive Light Armour Torso
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b]1
[b]Primary function:[/b] This armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are C-rank. Basic attacks of B to S rank do 1 rank less in damage. The armor only covers the legs, shoulders, back, chest and torso of the user.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Silence is golden[/b]
As Long as the wearer is out of view and not using any chakra, This passive is active. The armor allows the user to hide from any base perception up to S-3 and any (non-senjutsu) sensory or doujutsu of up to A rank when not using chakra themselves and in a hiding position.

[b]Ghost mode:[/b]
If the wearer's speed in battle is higher than the enemy's perception, it will make her appear hazy and blurry as long as she's moving, making it so that the opponent's dexterity will suffer from a -2 tiers drop.

[b]Appearance:[/b][spoiler][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/343/f/5/female_leather_armor_by_lagueuse-d4ilh80.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
This is Lamya's Black ANBU armor, now altered into a more fitting combat armor with ornate design, called the Wraith Armor, with the reason of using her enemies strengths against them, she also strengthened her armor and changed the composition to the strongest and sturdiest kind of leather available.

Black ANBU Gloves - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wraith Gauntlets
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive, Light armor arms
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1 pair
[b]Primary function:[/b]
Basic attacks up to C rank are negated, Basic attacks of B to S rank are one rank lower.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Infection:[/b]
The tips of these gloves can be covered with a poison contained in the emerald gems, which when scratched by those aforementioned tips will inject a strong liquid hemotoxin which will be able to drop a person's endurance by -4 tiers for the rest of the thread it is used in and cause excrutiatingly painful cramps in the entire musculatory system. This poison can be removed with an A rank or higher healing jutsu and only starts taking effect one post after having entered the victim's body.

[b]Corruption:[/b]
Any projectile based weapon wielded by the wearer of these gloves will be coated by a smidge of the poison which can be found on the fingertips, but due to the dilluted state, the poison on these projectiles [kunai, senbon, etc] will only be able to lower someone's endurance by 1 tier and only for two posts. Just like the undilluted form it only starts taking effect one post after having entered the victim's body.


[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/263/2/1/witchblade_gauntlet_by_nebezial-d2z4k3w.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
After having been resurected by Laïs, Lamya remodelled her old Black ANBU gloves and added a mysterious metallic bio-engineered substance to them, allowing for their more cruel and self-destructing powers.

Kōketsu scalpel:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Kōketsu (Purity)
[b]Classification:[/b] Offensive
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
This weapon is exactly 15 cm long, with a blade of 6 cm long, with a width of up to 1 cm

It can cut up to 5 cm deep and pierce into flesh to the full length of the blade, but it can not pierce or slice bone.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Due to the precise nature of this scalpel, it is best used for stabbing rather than cutting when used in combat, though as it is able to cleanly cut through any and all bloodvessels, whenever stabbed with this weapon in a vital place, the bleeding effect will proceed at double the usual rate. [IE 1 post will be counted as 2]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://nicnac.net/contents/media/l_rainy%20vallotton%20auto%20knife%20bolide%20spike.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Made for Orochi Naoto, the Ouroboros head of three generations ago, who had the nickname 'Master of the surprise death'. The weapon was forged by Suna craftsmen to the highest possible standards and quality, even still trumping many a craftsmen's finest work to this very day.

After the death of Orochi Naoto, it was placed in the care of the clan-elders of the Hebi family, who have deemed Orochi Risu; the next Ouroboros clan head, worthy to wield this small, but efficient weapon.

Mask | Veritas - Like stated before, you can't directly interact with jutsu.

Armor | Silence is golden - Like stated above, you can't directly interact with jutsu.

Armor | Ghost Mode - make it clearly state it's referring to the users speed stat. Also I'd like to see the effect rephrased to "making it so that the opponent's dexterity interacts at -2 tiers".

Wraith Gauntlets | Infection - While it doesn't need to follow the poison template listed in the item guideline rules, it shouldn't be able to exceed what they can do. In this case the strength (4 tiers) of the poison and it's duration are not aligned with the guideline.

Koketsu - Approved.

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
I hope this will be the final try

Chiaki

Chiaki


A-rank
Orochi Risu wrote:
Black ANBU Mask - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Mask - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Supplementary Helmet
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Negates basic attacks up to C rank, lowers any basic attacks of B to S rank with one ranks.

[b]Obscuris[/b]
Like any ANBU mask this mask is able to distort the user's voice to such a point that it is made unrecognisable to all but those most well known to them. [This is a standard attribute to masks, not a passive.]

[b]Veritas[/b]
This mask raises the spatial awareness and passive sage sensory by an additional 10m due to its mystical weaving.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img(400px,1000px)]https://i.imgur.com/JfupqIk.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
A specialized mask created for her induction into the Black ANBU, which has further been tinkered with by Risu herself after her revival.

Black ANBU armor - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Armor - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive Light Armour Torso
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b]1
[b]Primary function:[/b] This armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are C-rank. Basic attacks of B to S rank do 1 rank less in damage. The armor only covers the shoulders, back, chest and torso of the user.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Silence is golden[/b]
At the cost of 30 chakra, the wearer of this armor can effectively hide herself from S-0 or lower perception and doujutsu of up to A rank and any sensory tech of up to S rank by completely nullifying the user's chakra signature and thus erasing their presence for 3 posts. However, this ability does NOT extend to her jutsu.

[b]Ghost mode:[/b]
If the wearer's speed stat in battle is higher than the enemy's perception stat, it will make her appear hazy and blurry as long as she's moving, making it so that the opponent's dexterity will suffer from a -2 tiers drop.

[b]Appearance:[/b][spoiler][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/343/f/5/female_leather_armor_by_lagueuse-d4ilh80.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
A specialized version of the ANBU armor granted to Risu when she was inducted into the organization, further tinkered with by Risu herself upon her revival.

Black ANBU Gloves - Shade:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Gauntlets - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive, Light armor, arms
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] Doton
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1 pair
[b]Primary function:[/b]
Basic attacks up to C rank are negated, Basic attacks of B to S rank are one rank lower.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Brutal Pulse:[/b]
At the cost of 25 chakra, the user can snap their fingers resulting in a spherical field of chakra expanding at a speed of up to 80m/s to a radius 60m letting out an extremely amplified sound of said snap which can be heard up to several hundreds of meters away. However, it can effectively completely paralyze a target and forcefully cut off their chakra and thus ending all active jutsu for a single post.

[b]Poison Ivy[/b]
As these gloves have many sharp and jagged edges and sharpened fingertips which can cause cuts of up to 0.5cm on their own, any wound caused by these gauntlets will result in a mild neurotoxin entering the opponent's bloodstream, which after a one post delay will activate and lower the victim's perception stat by -1 tier for 3 posts, this effect can be stacked, but is capped at maximum 3 tiers of perception reduction.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/263/2/1/witchblade_gauntlet_by_nebezial-d2z4k3w.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Uprated Specialized Black ANBU gauntlets, which have been tinkered with when Risu had been revived.

Kōketsu scalpel:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Kōketsu (Purity)
[b]Classification:[/b] Offensive
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
This weapon is exactly 15 cm long, with a blade of 6 cm long, with a width of up to 1 cm

It can cut up to 5 cm deep and pierce into flesh to the full length of the blade, but it can not pierce or slice bone.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Due to the precise nature of this scalpel, it is best used for stabbing rather than cutting when used in combat, though as it is able to cleanly cut through any and all bloodvessels, whenever stabbed with this weapon in a vital place, the bleeding effect will proceed at double the usual rate. [IE 1 post will be counted as 2]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://nicnac.net/contents/media/l_rainy%20vallotton%20auto%20knife%20bolide%20spike.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Made for Orochi Naoto, the Ouroboros head of three generations ago, who had the nickname 'Master of the surprise death'. The weapon was forged by Suna craftsmen to the highest possible standards and quality, even still trumping many a craftsmen's finest work to this very day.

After the death of Orochi Naoto, it was placed in the care of the clan-elders of the Hebi family, who have deemed Orochi Risu; the next Ouroboros clan head, worthy to wield this small, but efficient weapon.

Black ANBU Mask - Shade 1/2 approved.

Black ANBU armor - Shade: Even with the chakra, if I am reading Fuyuko's post right this still cannot affect jutsu.
This armor still includes legs, please delete that word in the description.

Black ANBU gloves - Shade: 1/2 approved

Kotetsu: 1/2 approved (and it was previously by Fuyuko.)

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
do note that Fuyuko did not include the dm discord talk which explained that the shade armor is essentially my old ANBU armor having been upgraded through time. Also the no interaction, far as I know, only applies to 'passive' abilities, abilities that cost chakra follow jutsu rules and are thus able to interact with other jutsu.

Chiaki

Chiaki


A-rank
Right, I submitted this to a senior mod, I am not clear on whether an item can interact with a jutsu when it costs Chakra.

12Orochi Risu | Lamya Locker update [wip] Empty Re: Orochi Risu | Lamya Locker update [wip] Tue Aug 06, 2019 12:10 pm

Chiaki

Chiaki


A-rank
Orochi Risu wrote:
Black ANBU Mask - Shade:

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[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Mask - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Supplementary Helmet
[b]Rank:[/b] S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Negates basic attacks up to C rank, lowers any basic attacks of B to S rank with one ranks.

[b]Obscuris[/b]
Like any ANBU mask this mask is able to distort the user's voice to such a point that it is made unrecognisable to all but those most well known to them. [This is a standard attribute to masks, not a passive.]

[b]Veritas[/b]
This mask raises the spatial awareness and passive sage sensory by an additional 10m due to its mystical weaving.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img(400px,1000px)]https://i.imgur.com/JfupqIk.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
A specialized mask created for her induction into the Black ANBU, which has further been tinkered with by Risu herself after her revival.

Black ANBU armor - Shade:

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[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Armor - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive Light Armour Torso
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b]-
[b]Quantity:[/b]1
[b]Primary function:[/b] This armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are C-rank. Basic attacks of B to S rank do 1 rank less in damage. The armor only covers the shoulders, back, chest and torso of the user.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Silence is golden[/b]
At the cost of 30 chakra, the wearer of this armor can effectively hide herself from S-0 or lower perception and doujutsu of up to A rank and any sensory tech of up to S rank by completely nullifying the user's chakra signature and thus erasing their presence for 3 posts. However, this ability does NOT extend to her jutsu.

[b]Ghost mode:[/b]
If the wearer's speed stat in battle is higher than the enemy's perception stat, it will make her appear hazy and blurry as long as she's moving, making it so that the opponent's dexterity will suffer from a -2 tiers drop.

[b]Appearance:[/b][spoiler][img]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/343/f/5/female_leather_armor_by_lagueuse-d4ilh80.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
A specialized version of the ANBU armor granted to Risu when she was inducted into the organization, further tinkered with by Risu herself upon her revival.

Black ANBU Gloves - Shade:

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[b]Name:[/b] Black ANBU Gauntlets - Shade
[b]Classification:[/b] Defensive, Light armor, arms
[b]Rank:[/b]S
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] Doton
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1 pair
[b]Primary function:[/b]
Basic attacks up to C rank are negated, Basic attacks of B to S rank are one rank lower.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]

[b]Brutal Pulse:[/b]
At the cost of 25 chakra, the user can snap their fingers resulting in a spherical field of chakra expanding at a speed of up to 80m/s to a radius 60m letting out an extremely amplified sound of said snap which can be heard up to several hundreds of meters away. However, it can effectively completely paralyze a target and forcefully cut off their chakra and thus ending all active jutsu for a single post.

[b]Poison Ivy[/b]
As these gloves have many sharp and jagged edges and sharpened fingertips which can cause cuts of up to 0.5cm on their own, any wound caused by these gauntlets will result in a mild neurotoxin entering the opponent's bloodstream, which after a one post delay will activate and lower the victim's perception stat by -1 tier for 3 posts, this effect can be stacked, but is capped at maximum 3 tiers of perception reduction.

[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2010/263/2/1/witchblade_gauntlet_by_nebezial-d2z4k3w.jpg[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Uprated Specialized Black ANBU gauntlets, which have been tinkered with when Risu had been revived.

Kōketsu scalpel:

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[b]Name:[/b] Kōketsu (Purity)
[b]Classification:[/b] Offensive
[b]Rank:[/b] A
[b]Elemental Alignment:[/b] -
[b]Quantity:[/b] 1
[b]Primary function:[/b]
This weapon is exactly 15 cm long, with a blade of 6 cm long, with a width of up to 1 cm

It can cut up to 5 cm deep and pierce into flesh to the full length of the blade, but it can not pierce or slice bone.
[b]Ability slot:[/b]
Due to the precise nature of this scalpel, it is best used for stabbing rather than cutting when used in combat, though as it is able to cleanly cut through any and all bloodvessels, whenever stabbed with this weapon in a vital place, the bleeding effect will proceed at double the usual rate. [IE 1 post will be counted as 2]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[spoiler][img]http://nicnac.net/contents/media/l_rainy%20vallotton%20auto%20knife%20bolide%20spike.png[/img][/spoiler]
[b]History:[/b]
Made for Orochi Naoto, the Ouroboros head of three generations ago, who had the nickname 'Master of the surprise death'. The weapon was forged by Suna craftsmen to the highest possible standards and quality, even still trumping many a craftsmen's finest work to this very day.

After the death of Orochi Naoto, it was placed in the care of the clan-elders of the Hebi family, who have deemed Orochi Risu; the next Ouroboros clan head, worthy to wield this small, but efficient weapon.

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