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1Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:30 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
Academy Jutsu

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Ouroboros Clan Jutsu
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Rank D Jutsu:
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Rank C Jutsu
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Rank B jutsu:
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Last edited by Lamya on Sat Dec 06, 2014 6:27 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Mon Apr 21, 2014 2:21 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
The Ouroboros Clan Jutsu are fine for now, it will eventually be worked on in the Clan Updates section...

Temporary Healing, Seafoam, and Hidden Mist are fine for now, just make sure you update them when the Medical Ninjutsu and Suiton libraries are updated.

Water Whip is fine as is.

Soaring Water Snake - D-Rank techniques can't cause debuffs. Edit that; you may add damage to the water snake in order to compensate.

Starch Syrup Capturing Field - Fine until Suiton library is updated.

Mud Bullet and Mud Clone are fine as is.

Water Slash - Lower the speed to 25 meters per second.

Mud Wall is fine.

Water Clone Technique - Fine until Suiton library is updated.

Snake Senses and Mud Torrent are fine.

Water Slash Barrage - Lower the speed to 35 meters per second.

White Snake Style: Bloody Teeth Jutsu - Lower snake's max speed to 35 meters per second and put in that opponents with A-Rank or higher Strength may break free of the jutsu after one post.

Chakra Reverse Pulse - Fine until Medical Ninjutsu library is updated.

Bump this when you've made the edits.

3Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Mon Apr 21, 2014 4:59 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


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Edited the jutsus:

-speed changes as recommended
-white snake style-bloody teeth: added strength related break out
-edited soaring snake to minor bruising and minor knock back (still maintaining it as a distraction technique)

Clan jutsu will be edited/replaced when I can start my clan revamp.

4Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Mon Apr 21, 2014 5:09 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
I'm actually not sure when Clan Updates can begin, but you can message an admin; I'm sure they'll tell you. In the meantime, your jutsu list update is approved.

5Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Mon Sep 08, 2014 1:36 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


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need re-approval, since I actually never changed any of these to the new ranges and speeds of jutsu.

all custom-selfmade jutsu's ranges and speeds have been changed according to the new rules and are ready for review.

6Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Tue Oct 28, 2014 4:13 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
bump

7Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:12 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
bump

8Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:58 pm

Tame

Tame


D-rank
Mud Clone: I don't like a non-Shadow clone that gets full stat capabilities. It can be rather devastating at later ranks for a rather low cost. A -1 in rank to your stats should suffice to make this passable. (I will be sure to find others like this. <.< I know they're out there)

Mud Wall can actually block 2 C and 3 D if you so wish. It may also have an advantage vs. Suiton since it's weak to Raiton.

Every other jutsu is fine.

9Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Sat Dec 06, 2014 4:00 pm

Orochi Risu

Orochi Risu


S-rank
actually, I think the mud clone does state that it has C rank stats, if not, I will add it in there, because they're meant more like a distraction, not as a shadow clone and for the mud wall...ok

gave mud wall a higher defense rate, added suiton advantage, edited the raiton disadvantage to new capacity

edited mud clone's description to C rank stats for clones

10Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Empty Re: Orochi Risu [jutsu list update] Sat Dec 06, 2014 4:52 pm

Tame

Tame


D-rank
Bam-bam! Approved!

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