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Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
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Name: Water Release: Void  Margin | 水遁・端空 - Suiton: Tankū
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Description: After weaving the sign dog the user releases a bit of water out of their mouth which envelops around their head. This ‘helmet’ of water allows for the user to continue breathing while submerged.



Name: Water Release: Void  Margin | 水遁・端空 - Suiton: Tankū
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog)
Description: After weaving the sign dog the user releases a bit of water out of their mouth which envelops around their head. This ‘helmet’ of water allows for the user to continue breathing while submerged for 3 posts.

Name: Water Release: Sealing Net (シーリングネット - Suiton: Shīringunetto)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton
Range: 20m
Specialty: Ninjutsu/Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: The user molds suiton chakra and releases this from their mouth in a bubble shape with a radius of 4m. The jutsu travels at 15m/s and when it has traveled 1m the bubble unfolds into a ‘solid’ net ( dimensions: 8m wide x 4m height x 0.5m thick(deep)). Any jutsu of C-rank or lower that comes in touch with this technique is sealed inside of it. Once the jutsu is sealed the net vanishes. Doton jutsu’s used against this count as if they are a rank higher.



Name: Water Release: Sealing Net (シーリングネット - Suiton: Shīringunetto)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: Suiton
Range: 10m
Specialty: Ninjutsu/Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog)
Description: The user molds suiton chakra in their stomach and exhale a bubble from their mouths. The jutsu travels at 10m/s and when it has traveled 1m the bubble unfolds into a ‘solid’ net 3-meters in radius. One jutsu of up to C-rank that comes in touch with this technique is sealed inside of it. Once the jutsu is sealed the net vanishes.

Name: Limb Restriction (四肢 制限 ~ Shishi Seigen)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Specialty: Fuinjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts after the mark is removed or the duration ran out
Description: After weaving the signs Boar > Serpant > Hare > Ox > Serpant writings will appear in the palm of the dominant hand. These markings will stay in the users hand until the end of the next post or if they get used. The user will than attempt to touch one of the 4 limbs of the opponent. Upon hitting the opponent the markings will expand around the touched limb and hinders the movement from the touched place down. Meaning if you get touched just above your wrist, it hampers only your hand movement, while getting touched just under the shoulder would hamper your entire arms movement. The amount hampered is a full paralysis for the affected area.



Name: Limb Restriction (四肢 制限 ~ Shishi Seigen)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Contact
Specialty: Fuinjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Activation: Hand Seals (Boar → Serpent → Hare → Ox)
Description: After completing the necessary hand seals, seal formulae will appear in the palm of the user's dominant hand. These markings will stay in the users hand until the end of the next post or if they get used. The user will then attempt to touch one of their target's limbs. Upon making contact with the opponent the markings will expand around the touched limb and hinders movement of that limb and the adjacent limb (i.e If an arm is touched, both arms will be paralyzed). Both limbs are inflicted complete paralysis for the duration of the technique.

Name: Minor jutsu sealing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 meter radii
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: This jutsu seals a single jutsu of one rank higher, two of equal rank or three of one rank lower away in a prepared scroll holding the kanji for "Seal", as soon as the jutsu enters the seal's radius. The user must have these scrolls in possession, and requires one scroll for each jutsu sealed by this technique if he wishes to use them at a later date.



Name: Minor jutsu sealing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 10m Radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Activation: Hand Seal (Dog → Hare)
Description: This technique seals a single technique of up to one rank higher into a prepared scroll holding the kanji for "Seal", as soon as said jutsu enters the seal's radius. The user must have these scrolls in possession, and requires one scroll for each jutsu sealed by this technique if he wishes to use them at a later date.

Name: Minor Counter Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 4m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu / Ninjutsu / Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: Maintained (-5 per post)
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: After performing the seals Monkey, Snake, Rat the user places their hands on a surface and a seal appears. The seal itself only has diameter of a meter. The seal triggers upon registering chakra, which is not of the user, coming in the range of the seal (only counts for projectile jutsu). Upon activation the seal will create a chakra column of 4 meter tall (same diameter as the seal) and soak up the first hostile jutsu of equal rank or lower. When the jutsu is being soaked up, it is done in a condensed form, shrinking it massively to be merely the size of a ball with a diameter of half a meter, the damage, range and speed are however reduced to the max value of a rank lower. Further it curves around the user at the speed of the original justu, leaving only 20 cm between the jutsu and the user. It is then send back in the direction it came from after 1 second (not taking the curving into consideration or the user) at it's shrunken size until it clears the jutsu's radius at which point it will return to its original size. When the jutsu is released from the seal it disappears together with the chakra column.

However at creation of the seal at the cost of spending 5 extra chakra (must be made clear upon creation) the user is able to hold the justu till the end of the post it was soaked up. During this time the user has free reign on when to send it back and in which direction. If the user fails to send it back it will just disappear along with the seal and column at the end of the post.

If this jutsu is used while in Sage Mode, it’s capable of capturing a jutsu from a rank higher.



Name: Minor Counter Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu | Ninjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: 2 posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Monkey → Snake → Rat)
Description: After performing the hand seals and expending (20) chakra, the user places their hands on a surface, creating a seal ten-meters in radius. The seal triggers upon registering chakra, which is not of the user, coming in the range of the seal. Upon activation the seal will create a chakra column 10-meters tall and soak up the first hostile jutsu of equal rank or lower. When the jutsu is being soaked up, it is done in a condensed form, shrinking it to be the size of half-meter radius sphere. Additionally, the damage, range, and speed are reduced to the max value of a rank lower. It is then sent back in the direction it came from at it's shrunken size until it clears the jutsu's radius at which point it will return to its original size, maintaining the aforementioned reduced values. (Non projectile jutsu merely get soaked up and not returned.)

If this jutsu is used while in Sage Mode, it’s capable of capturing a jutsu from a rank higher.

Name: Lightning Release: Spider web (雷遁・網蜘蛛 – Raiton: Amigumo)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 5m radii
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: After kneading chakra in the body, whilst weaving the signs Dog – Dragon – Rat – Ram, and converting it to lightning the user places their hands on the ground. Releasing a surge of electricity around them, which travels at 10m/s, in the shape of a web, this will electrocute anyone caught in its vicinity. Opponents caught in the jutsu that have an endurance of C3-Rank or lower have their movement haltered and make them lose their grip on any object held in their hand. Further this causes major first degree burns to anyone caught within the trap.



Name: Lightning Release: Spider web (雷遁・網蜘蛛 – Raiton: Amigumo)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog → Dragon → Rat → Ram)
Description: After the user weaves the necessary hand seals and convert chakra to lightning, the user places their hands on the ground. Releasing a surge of electricity around them, which travels at 25m/s, in the shape of a web with a radius of 10 meters, this will electrocute anyone caught in its vicinity. The first two opponents caught in the jutsu have their ability to move their legs halted and make them lose their grip on any object held in their hand. Further, this causes moderate first degree burns to anyone caught within the trap.

Name: Lightning Release: Electric net (雷遁・電気ネット – Raiton: Denki netto)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 25m radii
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintainable (-5 chakra per post)
Cooldown: Maintained + 3 posts
Description: The user keeps emitting a large quantity of small electrical charges. These charges form a large electrical net on which the information is carried on. This net expands at a speed of 10 m/s. If a person comes into the range of the jutsu they feel a small shock, this is harmless but noticeable, this shock is only felt upon the initial entry within the range of the jutsu (leaving and entering again will give a small shock again). Further a person with a perception of C+ will be able to hear the small crackling noises the net makes. At B+ perception one is able to tell where the web is visually.



Name: Lightning Release: Electric net (雷遁・電気ネット – Raiton: Denki netto)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Raiton
Range: 40m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog → Ram)
Description: The user keeps emitting a large quantity of small electrical charges. These charges form a large electrical net on which the information is carried on. This net expands at a speed of 25 m/s. If a person comes into the range of the jutsu they feel a small shock, this is harmless but noticeable, this shock is only felt upon the initial entry within the range of the jutsu. This allows the user to roughly sense where someone is with a 5 meter deviation.

Name: Lightning Release: Static Armor (静的防具 – Raiton: Seiteki bōgu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive / Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user channels some lightning chakra before making it cover the user in a sort of aura. It makes no noise nor is the armor visible, however the users hairs will slightly raise as if they had goose bumps. When the user is struck while the jutsu is active the attacker is shocked back stopping them in their current tracks if they don't have an Endurance of B0 or higher (The move that makes contact will still deal damage). Which causes the attacker to do 1 rank less damage (this is only if there is physical contact (even through a conductor)). Eg. 1-11/2 cuts become 1/4 – 3/4  cuts. Furthermore the attacker receives minor 1st degree burns on the point of impact.



Name: Lightning Release: Static Armor (静的防具 – Raiton: Seiteki bōgu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog → Ram)
Description: The user channels some lightning chakra before making it cover the user in a sort of aura. It makes no noise nor is the armour visible, however, the users hairs will slightly raise as if they had goosebumps. When the user is struck while the jutsu is active the attacker is shocked. Upon contact via basic strikes, the target is inflicted major first-degree electrical burns throughout the limb making contact with the user while simultaneously dampening the basic strike's damage to be negligible.

Name: Identity Crisis | 危機身元 Kiki Mimo
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Hand Seals: Horse > Dragon > Ox > Snake > Bird
Description: At the start of the technique the user is able to alter their chakra signature. They can alter where they appear to be from, their clan and elements. This can only be done once when the jutsu is cast and above the jutsu must be stated what’s altered and to what it is altered.



Name: Identity Crisis | 危機身元 Kiki Mimo
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Horse → Dragon → Ox → Snake → Bird)
Description: At the start of the technique the user is able to alter their chakra signature. They can alter the appearance of their clan, elements and origin. This can only be done once when the jutsu is cast and above the jutsu must be stated what’s altered and to what it is altered.

Name: Moderate Restriction dome – (Naka-teido no seigen dōmu - 中程度の制限ドーム)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 10m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: Maintained
Cooldown: Maintained + 5 Posts
Description: After weaving the signs Bird, Horse, Rat, Snake the user places their hands on the ground creating a seal that’s half a meter in diameter. When a person, that doesn’t have the creators chakra signature attached to them, enters the 10 meter radius (taken from the middle of the technique) of the technique it starts to rapidly expand. The expansion happens at a rate of 30 m/s. When the expansion is completed anyone (that doesn’t have the users chakra signature) that’s within the 10 meter radius dome will have a seal appear on their neck. This seal acts as a full paralysis and lasts for a single post. The effects can be stopped early by inflicting an inch deep cut across the seal. A minimum of 2 people can be caught within this trap. The user can opt to put in more chakra to catch more people at a rate of 5 chakra per 2 people (Example: 3 people would be B-cost +5, 4 people would be B-cost +5, 5 people would be B-cost + 10, etc.)
If this jutsu is used while in sage mode, instead of interacting as a rank higher, the paralysis lasts two posts instead of one.



Name: Moderate Restriction dome – (Naka-teido no seigen dōmu - 中程度の制限ドーム)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 20m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: 1 post
Activation: Hand Seals (Bird → Horse → Rat → Snake)
Description: After weaving hand seals the user places their hands on the ground creating a seal that’s half a meter in diameter. When a person, that doesn’t have the creators chakra signature attached to them, enters the 20 meter radius (taken from the middle of the technique) of the technique it starts to rapidly expand. The expansion happens at a rate of 50 m/s. When the expansion is completed anyone (that doesn’t have the users chakra signature) that’s within the 20 meter radius dome will have a seal appear on their neck. This seal acts as a full paralysis and lasts for a single post. The effects can be stopped early by inflicting an inch deep cut across the seal. A maximum of 2 people can be caught within this trap.

If the user chooses, they may spend an additional 5 or 10 chakra when casting the technique to effect more people (3 for 5 chakra and 4+ for 10 chakra).

If this jutsu is used while in sage mode the paralysis lasts three posts instead of one.

Name: Moderate Counter Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 6m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu / Ninjutsu / Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: Maintained (-5 per post)
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Description: After performing the seals Monkey, Snake, Rat, Dog the user places their hands on a surface and a seal appears. The seal itself only has diameter of a meter. The seal triggers upon registering chakra, which is not of the user, coming in the range of the seal (only counts for projectile jutsu). Upon activation the seal will create a chakra column of 4 meter tall (same diameter as the seal) and soak up the first hostile jutsu of equal rank or lower. When the jutsu is being soaked up, it is done in a condensed form, shrinking it massively to be merely the size of a ball with a diameter of half a meter, the damage, range and speed are however reduced to the max value of a rank lower. Further it curves around the user at the speed of the original justu, leaving only 20 cm between the jutsu and the user. It is then send back in the direction it came from after 1 second (not taking the curving into consideration or the user) at it's shrunken size until it clears the jutsu's radius at which point it will return to its original size. When the jutsu is released from the seal it disappears together with the chakra column. The damage of the rank is lowered to maximum values of a rank lower than the soaked up technique.

However at creation of the seal at the cost of spending 5 extra chakra (must be made clear upon creation) the user is able to hold the justu till the end of the post it was soaked up. During this time the user has free reign on when to send it back and in which direction. If the user fails to send it back it will just disappear along with the seal and column at the end of the post.

If this jutsu is used while in Sage Mode, it’s capable of capturing a jutsu from a rank higher.



Name: Moderate Counter Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 20m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu | Ninjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: 2 posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Monkey → Snake → Rat)
Description: After performing the hand seals and expending (25) chakra, the user places their hands on a surface, creating a seal ten-meters in radius. The seal triggers upon registering chakra, which is not of the user, coming in the range of the seal. Upon activation the seal will create a chakra column 10-meters tall and soak up the first hostile jutsu of equal rank or lower. When the jutsu is being soaked up, it is done in a condensed form, shrinking it to be the size of half-meter radius sphere. Additionally, the damage, range, and speed are reduced to the max value of a rank lower. It is then sent back in the direction it came from at it's shrunken size until it clears the jutsu's radius at which point it will return to its original size, maintaining the aforementioned reduced values. (Non projectile jutsu merely get soaked up and not returned.)

If this jutsu is used while in Sage Mode, it’s capable of capturing a jutsu from a rank higher.

Name: Moderate jutsu sealing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 10 meter radii
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: This jutsu seals a single jutsu of one rank higher, two of equal rank or three of one rank lower away in a prepared scroll holding the kanji for "Seal", as soon as the jutsu enters the seal's radius. The user must have these scrolls in possession, and requires one scroll for each jutsu sealed by this technique if he wishes to use them at a later date.



Name: Moderate jutsu sealing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 20 meter radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Activation: Hand Seal (Dog → Hare)
Description: This technique seals a single technique of up to one rank higher into a prepared scroll holding the kanji for "Seal", as soon as said jutsu enters the seal's radius. The user must have these scrolls in possession, and requires one scroll for each jutsu sealed by this technique if he wishes to use them at a later date.

Name: : Chakra Signature Attachment - ( チャクラ粘記 - Chakura-Nebaki)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 3 posts (of the receiver)
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: After weaving the signs Hare, Ox, Hare, Rat, Bird, Tiger the user than places their hand on another willing person. The receiving person than receives a bit of the giving person’s chakra (this is not added to their chakra pool). Whenever the receiver uses a jutsu now a bit of the added chakra latches onto it and giving it the chakra signature of the giver on top of their own chakra signature. This also works if the receiver would walk through a jutsu from the giver that has an activation zone, and not triggering it because of the added chakra signature. This effect lasts for 3 interactions.



Name: Chakra Signature Attachment - ( チャクラ粘記 - Chakura-Nebaki)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 3 posts (of the receiver)
Activation: Hand Seal (Hare → Ox → Hare → Rat → Bird → Tiger)
Description: After weaving the signs Hare, Ox, Hare, Rat, Bird, Tiger the user than places their hand on another willing person. The receiving person than receives a bit of the giving person’s chakra (this is not added to their chakra pool). Whenever the receiver uses a jutsu now a bit of the added chakra latches onto it and giving it the chakra signature of the giver on top of their own chakra signature. This also works if the receiver would walk through a jutsu from the giver that has an activation zone, and not triggering it because of the added chakra signature. This effect lasts for 3 interactions.

Name: Lightning Release: Shock (雷遁・ショック – Raiton: Shokku)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Touch / 60 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant / 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: After forming the snake seal the users hand starts to emit slight charges of lightning. This can then either be shot from the hand up to 60 meters away at a speed of 30 meters per second, causing major 2nd degree burns upon the impacted area. Or if it’s used to touch someone the damage caused are minor 3rd degree burns.



Name: Lightning Release: Shock (雷遁・ショック – Raiton: Shokku)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Touch / 40 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant / 1 post
Activation: Hand Seals (Snake)
Description: After forming the snake seal the users hand starts to emit slight charges of lightning. This can then either be shot from the hand up to 40 meters away at a speed of 85 meters per second, causing moderate 2nd degree burns upon the impacted area. If it’s used to touch someone the damage caused are minor 3rd degree burns.

Name: Lightning Barrier | 雷バリア - Kaminari baria
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defense
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: After weaving the signs snake > tiger > hare the user laces themselves in a coat raiton chakra. This coat defends the user from 1 technique of a rank higher, 2 of equal rank or 3 of a rank lower.



Name: Lightning Barrier | 雷バリア - Kaminari baria
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defense
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 Posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Snake → Tiger → Hare)
Description: After weaving the hand seals, the user expends (25) chakra and laces themselves in a coat raiton chakra. This coat defends the user from 1 technique up to a rank higher.


Name: Water Release: Bubble Beam | 水遁・バブルビーム – Suiton: Baburubīmu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: 40m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seals: Ox > Monkey > Hare > Rat > Boar
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: While weaving the required seals the user gathers suiton chakra in their mouth. When the seals are finished the user opens their mouth and lets out a stream of bubbles which travels at a speed of 25 m/s. They’re initially released in a cone shape and after having traveled 10m it reaches its maximum width of a 6m radius, from which point it continues traveling in a cylinder shape until it reaches its maximum range. The stream of bubbles is able to deal a considerate amount of concussive force which can break bones.



Name: Water Release: Bubble Beam | 水遁・バブルビーム – Suiton: Baburubīmu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Suiton
Range: 40m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals: (Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar)
Description: While weaving the required seals the user gathers suiton chakra in their mouth. When the seals are finished the user opens their mouth and lets out a stream of bubbles which travels at a speed of 50 m/s. They’re initially released in a cone shape and after having travelled 10m it reaches its maximum width of a 20m radius, from which point it continues travelling in a cylinder shape until it reaches its maximum range. The stream of bubbles are able to deal a considerate amount of concussive force which can inflict open fractures onto targets.

Name: Water Release: Sweating Bullets | 水遁・弾汗 - Suiton: Dakkan
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 15m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Hand Seals: Dog > Boar > Ox > Dog
Description: After weaving the signs water starts to protrude out of the users and laying on top of the skin before being send flying in a dome shape with a speed of 25 m/s. Knocking everyone back that isn’t grounded or unenhanced items to the maximum radius.



Name: Water Release: Sweating Bullets | 水遁・弾汗 - Suiton: Dakkan
Origin: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 60m radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Hand Seals: (Dog → Boar → Ox → Dog)
Description: After weaving the signs water starts to protrude out of the users and laying on top of the skin before being send flying in a dome shape with a speed of 50 m/s. On contact, up to 3 targets that aren't grounded or unenhanced items are sent flying up to 40-meters away.

Name: Water Barrier | 水バリア - Mizu baria
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defense
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: After weaving the signs dog > ox > hare the user laces themselves in a coat suiton chakra. This coat defends the user from 1 technique of a rank higher, 2 of equal rank or 3 of a rank lower.



Name: Water Barrier | 水バリア - Mizu baria
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B-rank
Type: Defense
Element: Suiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 2 Posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog → Ox → Hare)
Description: After weaving the hand seals, the user expends (25) chakra and laces themselves in a coat suiton chakra. This coat defends the user from 1 technique of up to a rank higher.

Name: Greater jutsu sealing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 15 meter radii
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description:  This jutsu seals a single jutsu of one rank higher, two of equal rank or three of one rank lower away in a prepared scroll holding the kanji for "Seal", as soon as the jutsu enters the seal's radius. The user must have these scrolls in possession, and requires one scroll for each jutsu sealed by this technique if he wishes to use them at a later date.



Name: Greater jutsu sealing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 40 meter radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Activation: Hand Seal (Dog → Hare)
Description: This technique seals a single technique of up to one rank higher into a prepared scroll holding the kanji for "Seal", as soon as said jutsu enters the seal's radius. The user must have these scrolls in possession, and requires one scroll for each jutsu sealed by this technique if he wishes to use them at a later date.

Name: Major Counter Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 15m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu / Ninjutsu / Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: Maintained (-10 per post)
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description: After performing the seals Monkey, Snake, Rat, Dog, Ram the user places their hands on a surface and a seal appears. The seal itself only has diameter of a meter. The seal triggers upon registering chakra, which is not of the user, coming in the range of the seal (only counts for projectile jutsu). Upon activation the seal will create a chakra column of 4 meter tall (same diameter as the seal) and soak up the first hostile jutsu of equal rank or lower. When the jutsu is being soaked up, it is done in a condensed form, shrinking it massively to be merely the size of a ball with a diameter of half a meter, the damage, range and speed are however reduced to the max value of a rank lower. Further it curves around the user at the speed of the original justu, leaving only 20 cm between the jutsu and the user. It is then send back in the direction it came from after 1 second (not taking the curving into consideration or the user) at it's shrunken size until it clears the jutsu's radius at which point it will return to its original size. When the jutsu is released from the seal it disappears together with the chakra column. The damage of the rank is lowered to maximum values of a rank lower than the soaked up technique.

However at creation of the seal at the cost of spending 5 extra chakra (must be made clear upon creation) the user is able to hold the justu till the end of the post it was soaked up. During this time the user has free reign on when to send it back and in which direction. If the user fails to send it back it will just disappear along with the seal and column at the end of the post.

If this jutsu is used while in Sage Mode, it’s capable of capturing a jutsu from a rank higher.



Name: Major Counter Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 40m radius
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu | Ninjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: 2 posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Monkey → Snake → Rat)
Description: After performing the hand seals and expending (30) chakra, the user places their hands on a surface, creating a seal twenty-meters in radius. The seal triggers upon registering chakra, which is not of the user, coming in the range of the seal. Upon activation, the seal will create a chakra column 20-meters tall and soak up the first hostile jutsu of up to one rank higher. When the jutsu is being soaked up, it is done in a condensed form, shrinking it to be the size of half-meter radius sphere. Additionally, the damage, range, and speed are reduced to the max value of a rank lower. It is then sent back in the direction it came from at it's shrunken size until it clears the jutsu's radius at which point it will return to its original size, maintaining the aforementioned reduced values. (Non projectile jutsu merely get soaked up and not returned.)

If this jutsu is used while in Sage Mode, the redirected jutsu regains interaction potential.

Name: : Greater Chakra Signature Attachment - (大チャクラ粘記 - Dai Chakura-Nebaki)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 3 posts (of the receiver)
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: After weaving the signs Hare, Ox, Hare, Rat, Bird, Tiger, Dog, Snake the user than places their hand on another willing person. The receiving person than receives a bit of the giving person’s chakra (this is not added to their chakra pool). Whenever the receiver uses a jutsu now a bit of the added chakra latches onto it and giving it the chakra signature of the giver on top of their own chakra signature. This also works if the receiver would walk through a jutsu from the giver that has an activation zone, and not triggering it because of the added chakra signature. This effect lasts for 4 interactions.



Name: : Greater Chakra Signature Attachment - (大チャクラ粘記 - Dai Chakura-Nebaki)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Activation: Hand Seal (Hare → Ox → Hare → Rat → Bird → Tiger)
Description: After weaving the signs Hare, Ox, Hare, Rat, Bird, Tiger, Dog, Snake the user than places their hand on another willing person. The receiving person than receives a bit of the giving person’s chakra (this is not added to their chakra pool). Whenever the receiver uses a jutsu now a bit of the added chakra latches onto it and giving it the chakra signature of the giver on top of their own chakra signature. This also works if the receiver would walk through a jutsu from the giver that has an activation zone, and not triggering it because of the added chakra signature. This effect lasts for 4 interactions.

Name: Sage Art: Foreign Purging - (仙法・静外清 - Senpō: Seigaisei)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Senjutsu / Fuuinjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description: After weaving the signs Snake, Monkey, Snake, Rat the user places a seal on their body. Through the nature chakra in the seal it seeks out any invasive chakra signatures. Once the invasive signature has been found the seal soaks the invasive chakra signature up and seals it away, making the seal vanish when it's done. The chakra cost is slightly increased for every rank the invasive chakra is above B-rank. So for sealing E-B rank invasive signatures it costs 25 chakra, for A-rank it’s 30 chakra, for S-rank it’s 35 chakra.



Name: Sage Art: Foreign Purging - (仙法・静外清 - Senpō: Seigaisei)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Senjutsu / Fuuinjutsu
Duration: Instant
Activation: None
Description: Without requiring the use of hand seals, the user places a seal on their body. Through the nature chakra in the seal it seeks out any invasive chakra signatures. Once the invasive signature has been found the seal soaks the invasive chakra signature up and seals it away, making the seal vanish when it's done. This technique casts a full cleanse on the user, sealing hostile afflictions such as genjutsu, chakra-based poison, and other foreign chakra-based effects. Additionally, through the use of senjutsu, this technique cleanses the user of negative debuffs. It's capable of cleansing 2 A-rank, or 4 B-ranks or an indefinite amount of lower ranked techniques.

Name: Seal Destruction | 封滅 | Fūmetsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Range: 30m radius
Specialty: Fuinjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 3 posts
Description: After weaving the signs Hare, Snake, Dragon, Horse the user places their hand on a surface and a seal appears which instantly triggers this effect. Seals of A-rank or below within the radius are instantly destroyed and their effects stopped, this does not include body seals. If someone chooses to try and defend from this seal, the defending technique has to be of at least S-rank.

When used in Sage mode instead of interacting as if it were a rank higher, the radius is increased by 10 meters.




Name: Seal Destruction | 封滅 | Fūmetsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: -
Range: 80m radius
Specialty: Fuinjutsu | Senjutsu (optional)
Duration: Instant
Activation: Hand Seals (Hare → Snake → Dragon → Horse)
Description: After weaving the signs Hare, Snake, Dragon, Horse the user places their hand on a surface and a seal appears which instantly triggers this effect. One technique of S-rank or below within the radius are instantly destroyed and their effects stopped, not including body seals. If a seal is destroyed, this technique destroys all seals chained to the initially destroyed seal, provided they were produced by the same technique.

If this technique is used in Sage Mode, it does not require hand seals.

Name: Lightning Cutter | 雷切 - Raikiri
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu or Taijutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description:

  • Ability: Chidori: Chidori / Raikiri and its variant techniques are able to cut through, effectively ignoring the first Jutsu / armor they come into contact with of the technique's rank and lower.


After weaving the signs ox > hare > monkey the user draws raiton chakra in their body to the their hand and creating a deadly weapon out of it. The raiton chakra arcs violently around the users giving off a sense of danger of the technique. Further more the noise that it makes sounds like a thousand birds chirping.

With the electricity raging through the body it amplifies the speed at which the user is able to run while the technique is active, running at an additional speed of 35 m/s.

Upon impact with an opponent the raiton chakra is able to cut cleanly through. The area of the wound gets instantly cauterized by the heat of the lightning with moderate 3rd degree burns.



Name: Lightning Cutter | 雷切 - Raikiri
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A-rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu or Taijutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Activation: Hand Seals (Ox → Hare → Monkey)
Description:

  • Ability: Chidori: Chidori and its variant techniques are able to cut through, effectively ignoring the first Jutsu / armor they come into contact with of the technique's rank or lower. This ability is only expended when piercing a technique or armor equal to the technique's rank.

After weaving the signs ox > hare > monkey the user draws raiton chakra in their body to the their hand and creating a deadly weapon out of it. The raiton chakra arcs violently around the users giving off a sense of danger of the technique. Further more the noise that it makes sounds like a thousand birds chirping.

With the electricity raging through the body it amplifies the speed at which the user is able to run while the technique is active, running at an additional speed of 120 m/s.

Upon impact with an opponent the raiton chakra is able to cut cleanly through. The area of the wound gets instantly cauterized by the heat of the lightning with minor 4th degree burns.

Name: Electric Rejection | 電気拒絶 - Denki kyozetsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Hand Seals: N/A
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: Once a thread
Description: This jutsu is capable of defending from a single jutsu of equal rank. However because its capable of defending against less jutsu than that’s normal for this rank it does gain a different power. When the user doesn’t have a defensive technique active and they’re about to be physically harmed this jutsu will automatically trigger. If the technique has not used up its defensive capabilities after activation a small electric layer lays on top of the skin, which make her hairs stand up, making it appear as if she has goosebumps.



Name: Electric Rejection | 電気拒絶 - Denki kyozetsu
Origin: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: Once a thread
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This jutsu is capable of defending from a single jutsu of equal rank. However because its capable of defending against less jutsu than that’s normal for this rank it does gain a different power. When the user doesn’t have a defensive technique active and they’re about to be physically harmed this jutsu will automatically trigger. If the technique has not used up its defensive capabilities after activation a small electric layer lays on top of the skin, which make her hairs stand up, making it appear as if she has goosebumps.

Name: Water Release: Valve (水遁・バルブ – Suiton: Barubu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 35 meter / 25 meter radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description:
Can only be used if Lightning Style: Sixteen Pillar Trap is in place.
After forming the seals Dog, Snake, Ram, Horse, a liquid starts to come gushing out of the sides from the oven-like structure. The liquid is fairly similar to water, however it’s even less dense than water, making any object unable to float on it. The liquid is also highly conductive, increasing the damage dealt by Raiton techniques by 1 rank. It takes about 10 seconds to fill the entire structure with the liquid. If someone stays within the dome, when it's filled with the liquid, for the full duration they fall unconscious for a singular post. If the Sixteen Pillar Trap is undone, the water also instantly vanishes, leaving no traces.



Name: Water Release: Valve (水遁・バルブ – Suiton: Barubu)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A-rank
Type: Supplementary
Element: Suiton
Range: 80 meter / 40 meter radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Activation: Hand Seals (Dog → Snake → Ram → Horse)
Description:
Can only be used if Lightning Style: Sixteen Pillar Trap is in place.
After forming the seals Dog, Snake, Ram, Horse, a liquid starts to come gushing out of the sides at 50 m/s from the oven-like structure, filling the thing almost instantaneously. The liquid is fairly similar to water, however it’s even less dense than water, making any object unable to float on it. The liquid is also highly conductive, increasing the damage dealt by Raiton techniques by 1 rank. If someone stays within the dome, when it's filled with the liquid, for the full duration, they will be placed in Lethal Damage Threshold. If the Sixteen Pillar Trap is undone, the water also instantly vanishes, leaving no traces.

Name: Lightning Release: Railgun (雷遁・超電磁砲 ~ Raiton: Rērugan)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D - S
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: D: 12,5m – C: 20m – B: 30m – A: 40m – S: 50m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Instantaneous
Cooldown: 2 + 1 post per rank (See table below)
Description: By running lightning chakra through the arm the user creates a positive and negative current on either side of the arm. In order to discharge the energy a special designed coin is put on top of the hand, flicking the coin will discharge the energy and send the object flying in the direction of the arm. The coin is also rendered useless after use.

Damage:

Range, Speed, Chakra Cost, Cooldown:



Name: Lightning Release: Railgun (雷遁・超電磁砲 ~ Raiton: Rērugan)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S-Heroic
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 100m
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: Once per thread
Activation: Flicking of a coin
Description:

  • Ability: Chidori: Chidori and its variant techniques are able to cut through, effectively ignoring the first Jutsu / armor they come into contact with of the technique's rank or lower. This ability is only expended when piercing a technique or armor equal to the technique's rank.

By running lightning chakra through the arm the user creates a positive and negative current on either side of the arm. In order to discharge the energy, a special designed coin is put on top of the hand, flicking the coin will discharge the energy and send the object flying in the direction of the arm. The coin is also rendered useless after use. This coin travels at 300m/s and is capable of ripping whatever it comes into contact with in two. The coin travels unhindered through unenhanced environments.



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2Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Sat Jun 15, 2019 11:54 pm

Daremo




S-rank
½ approved on everything except the following

Lightning Release: Spider web - Need clarification on size of web.

Lightning Release: Electric net - Denied. Maintainables are no longer a thing. Please set a duration.

Lightning Release: Static Armor  - Denied. You have a max effect(damage) and a mid effect(duration), furthermore, 'can't be hurt by basis strikes' needs to follow defensive jutsu rules. Make the technique supplementary, if it doesn't use defensive jutsu rules.

Note: Chigetsu is counting 'can't be hurt by basic strikes' as a mid effect

Water Release: Drizzle Rain - How high does the user shoot the water in the air? What radius does the downpour cover? This need to be A-rank due to “-1 to jutsu interaction” is the same as “+1 to jutsu interaction” which is an A-rank effect.

Identity Crisis - Please change up the wording, currently seems like the user can change their chakra signature appearance, clan, and element, for three posts.

Sage Art: Foreign Purging - Cleanses use defensive values. Please fix this.

Moderate Restriction dome - ½ approved though ‘minimum’ needs to be changed to ‘maximum’

Minor Counter Seal - Coding error. Not sure if this is meant to be a B-rank or C-rank.

Water Release: Valve - Did you mean ‘more dense than water’, instead of ‘less dense than water’? Remove the mention of time.

3Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Mon Jun 17, 2019 11:31 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Daremo wrote:½ approved on everything except the following

Lightning Release: Spider web - Need clarification on size of web.

Lightning Release: Electric net - Denied. Maintainables are no longer a thing. Please set a duration.

Lightning Release: Static Armor - Denied. You have a max effect(damage) and a mid effect(duration), furthermore, 'can't be hurt by basis strikes' needs to follow defensive jutsu rules. Make the technique supplementary, if it doesn't use defensive jutsu rules.

Note: Chigetsu is counting 'can't be hurt by basic strikes' as a mid effect

Water Release: Drizzle Rain - How high does the user shoot the water in the air? What radius does the downpour cover? This need to be A-rank due to “-1 to jutsu interaction” is the same as “+1 to jutsu interaction” which is an A-rank effect.

Identity Crisis - Please change up the wording, currently seems like the user can change their chakra signature appearance, clan, and element, for three posts.

Sage Art: Foreign Purging - Cleanses use defensive values. Please fix this.

Moderate Restriction dome - ½ approved though ‘minimum’ needs to be changed to ‘maximum’

Minor Counter Seal - Coding error. Not sure if this is meant to be a B-rank or C-rank.

Water Release: Valve - Did you mean ‘more dense than water’, instead of ‘less dense than water’? Remove the mention of time.

Spider web; Size of the technique is said in "Range". But I'll add it in regardless.

Electric net; Woops, my bad.

Static Armor; Lowered the damage, my bad. I disagree with "can't be hurt by basic strikes" as a mid effect. It's something that's achievable by an E-rank technique, hence it's a minimum effect on a C-rank technique.

Drizzle Rain; Nevermind, read it wrong from the guide, I'll just be scrapping this entirely.

Identity Crisis; Yes, that's exactly what it does. Not sure how I could possibly write this more clear. All this stuff can be read from someone's chakra signature. It's effectively an alternative version to completely hiding once chakra signature.

Pick one:

Can hide from three of the five major natural senses. (Excludes invisibility)
OR
Can hide from sight + one other sense.
That's what a B-rank stealth technique is capable of doing. I decided to just ignore the hiding from sight part and instead only used the "one other sense".

Foreign Purging; Fixed.

Moderate Restriction; changed to maximum.

Moderate Counter Seal; Supposed to be B-rank. (Fixed coding)

Water release valve; No meant, less dense because if it was denser it be easier to walk on it and have things float on the water, which is not the intention. Time mention removed.

4Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Thu Jul 18, 2019 10:33 am

Jurou

Jurou


S-rank
Raikiri:
- I honestly don't see how this is different from Chidori since technically it's a special name given by Kakashi
- If you're using Kakashi's version where he splits the Lightning Bolt in half and uses it in both hands then that I can agree with.
- Specialization is Ninjutsu
- I would honestly change the rank to S-rank to up the Damage (Major 4th-Degree Tissue Damage) and Speed (200 m/s) but if you want to keep it at A-rank to match Chidori then it can stay that way

Railgun:
- Change Duration to Once Per Thread

Electric Rejection:
- Change the format to current jutsu format
- Change Duration to Once Per Thread
- Follow Defensive Guidelines for Jutsu
The defense blocks or otherwise defends against only one jutsu of equal rank, one rank lower, or one rank higher.
The defense blocks two jutsu of equal rank; two jutsu of one rank lower count as one jutsu of equal rank.
(For example, two jutsu of B-rank would count as one A-rank.) However, it can’t defend against jutsu of a higher rank than itself.

Everything else outside of Daremo's 1/2 approval, I give my 1/2 approval as well

5Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Fri Jul 19, 2019 5:53 am

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


A-rank
Jurou wrote:Raikiri:
- I honestly don't see how this is different from Chidori since technically it's a special name given by Kakashi
- If you're using Kakashi's version where he splits the Lightning Bolt in half and uses it in both hands then that I can agree with.
- Specialization is Ninjutsu
- I would honestly change the rank to S-rank to up the Damage (Major 4th-Degree Tissue Damage) and Speed (200 m/s) but if you want to keep it at A-rank to match Chidori then it can stay that way

Railgun:
- Change Duration to Once Per Thread

Electric Rejection:
- Change the format to current jutsu format
- Change Duration to Once Per Thread
- Follow Defensive Guidelines for Jutsu
The defense blocks or otherwise defends against only one jutsu of equal rank, one rank lower, or one rank higher.
The defense blocks two jutsu of equal rank; two jutsu of one rank lower count as one jutsu of equal rank.
(For example, two jutsu of B-rank would count as one A-rank.) However, it can’t defend against jutsu of a higher rank than itself.

Everything else outside of Daremo's 1/2 approval, I give my 1/2 approval as well

Railgun - my bad, forgot.

Electric Rejection - Updated format, although everything was in there already, hand seals was just in the wrong spot. Not sure why the duration would be once per thread, seeing as that's not a duration, the cooldown already states it can only be used once per thread.

From the guidelines as well, a sentence down;
Either of the above options, when used as listed for its rank, counts as a Max Effect. Lowering these values either in rank or number can allow for an auxiliary or offensive ability on the defense.
I opted into lowering the defensive values to go for an auxiliary effect on the technique and to make the technique less annoying to play against. (Which is also why it's once per thread).

Raikiri - How it's different from Chidori? By having higher values and an additional effect in which you move faster.
Cannon doesn't dictate what a technique should be. I could make a technique that isn't like Raikiri at all and still name it that, it's just a name.
Just like the technique it's derived from (Chidori), this jutsu can be activated using Ninjutsu or Taijutsu.
And thank you for your advice, but I'd like to keep this at A-rank.

6Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Empty Re: Miki, Fuyuko [Jutsu Revamp] Fri Jul 19, 2019 1:53 pm

Jurou

Jurou


S-rank
Well then, everything is 1/2 approved on my end

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