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Nil

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Clan Name: Senju
Location: Konohagakure
Specialization: Ninjutsu
Elements: Doton (Earth Release); Suiton (Water Release); Mokuton (Wood Release)


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Clan History:

Members:


  • Senju Butsuma
  • Senju Hashirama
  • Senju Tōka
  • Senju Tobirama
  • Senju Tsunade
  • Senju Sōsetsu



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Kekkei Genkai Name: Mokuton (Wood Release); Six Paths Body
Kekkei Genkai Description: Wood Release is a sort of symbolic name, more derived from the pre-chakra term for hiding in trees. The actual Wood Release Kekkei Genkai is an Advanced Nature that is based in Earth and Water Release. By utilizing Earth Release as a base for solid structure and Water Release is used as a means to accelerate growth, the Senju's naturally Yang-heavy chakra is used as a source of life. Thus, Mokuton can be used to create any type of plant life, such as, but not exclusively, flowers, vines, seeds, and, of course, trees or wood.

Wood Release techniques can be produced from the ground, as well as non-metal substances like rooftops. Organic mass, very often the Senju's own body, can be turned into a catalyst for Mokuton, as can existing plants. Like its constituent Earth Release, Wood Release commonly uses the Snake hand seal for its techniques.

Wood Release's element rank is always equal to that of its constituent elements. So, if a Senju's Suiton is S-rank and their Doton is C-rank, their Mokuton is C-rank. When they rank up their lowest element, their Mokuton automatically ranks up with it.

In it's normal state Mokuton is considered inherently advantageous against one or two of Suiton, Doton or Fuuton. This is determined on an individual basis of the Senju the Mokuton belongs to. However, should a Senju be born with their Mokuton strong against two of these elements then instead of being weak to either Katon or Raiton, which is also determined individually to each Senju, their Mokuton is considered weak to both.

Due to Mokuton's strong natural ties and the incredibly variety of plants, structures and forms it can be molded to this allows Mokuton to be adapted as the Senju's skill with the element increases and as their familiarity with other elements does as well. In addition, once a Senju has learned how to insulate their Mokuton against one of the following elements they can add an additional 10 chakra to the cost of any jutsu they possess in order to add an elemental advantage of their choosing to any their Mokuton already possess. The elements a Senju can adapt their Mokuton to combat, and requirements to do so, are as follows.



Boil Release:

Ice Release:

Rubber/Quick-Lime Lava Release:





Due to their Clan's focus on specializing in as many skills as possible, even defining their very name itself, the Senju start with the "Specialist" Positive SC without the need to balance it with a negative. This does not count towards their single Major Positive SC.

Specialist:



Six Paths Body

Infamous for having incredibly resilient bodies and DNA, the Senju inherited this mythical resilence from their ancestral ties to Asura and the Sage of the Six Paths. Allowing their bodies to heal, resist and recuperate from injuries other ninja simply lack the ability to shrug off. As the Senju increase in rank, and their own subsequent power grows, they may increase the effectiveness of this ability depending on their rank with a training post of a set Word Count threshold and Ryo cost.


  • Beginning at C-Rank a Senju may embark on a solo training thread consisting of no less than 2,500 words and a price of 500 Ryo the Senju gains the ability to recover from wounds equivalent to the Mid values for D-Rank Jutsu after every three posts the Senju makes. They can also recover from wounds equivalent to the damage caused by the Min values of D-Rank Jutsu after every two posts the Senju makes. Both of these abilities are dependent on the Senju receiving no further injuries from the moment they begin to recover.

  • Beginning at A-Rank a Senju may embark to further harness the recuperative capabilities of their bloodline. After completing a solo training thread consisting of no less than 4,000 words and costing 4,000 Ryo the Senju gains the ability to recover from wounds equivalent to the Min damage values for a C-Rank jutsu after every 3 posts the Senju makes. They can also recover from wounds equivalent to the damage caused by the Max values of D-Rank Jutsu every two posts the Senju makes. Both of these abilities are dependent on the Senju receiving no further injuries from the moment they begin to recover. In addition at this stage both the Min and Mid values of D-Rank Jutsu damage are now considered negligible enough to heal in the same post they are received.

  • Beginning at S-Rank a Senju may now endeavor to achieve the maximum potency of their bloodline. The Senju may attempt to unlock the most powerful regenerative capabilities of their inherited resilience in a solo training thread consisting of no less than 9,500 words and costing 6,000 Ryo. At this stage the Senju can recover from wounds equivalent to the Max values of a C-rank jutsu every 3 posts the Senju makes, and wounds equivalent to the Mid values of a C-Rank Jutsu every 2 posts they make. Both of these abilities are dependent on the Senju receiving no further injuries from the moment they begin to recover. In addition at this stage all of the damage values of D-Rank Jutsu, and the Min damage of C-Rank jutsu, are now considered negligible enough to heal in the same post they are received.




Drawbacks:


  • Due to their prestigious bloodline, laying the very literal framework for the entirety of Konohagakure, those of the Senju clan are known to only ever even consider retreat when things are truly hopeless. As such all members must take the "Foolhardy" Negative SC and cannot balance it with a positive.

  • Being so closely attuned to hard, unyielding wood and forests the Senju are not especially known for their speed. As such their Speed stat suffers a -1 tier penalty and their speed reduction after utilizing a burst of speed is 1 tier more severe.

  • Due to how heavily imbued the Senju are with the essence of their Mokuton chakra, even down to their very DNA, they are highly susceptible to damage from jutsu that cause burning damage. When a Senju is damaged by a burning jutsu they continue to receive damage from said jutsu in every subsequent post afterward, deteriorating at a rate of one rank for every post that passes afterward. As such if a Senju were subjected to a Mid damage B-Rank jutsu, their next post they would receive damage as if struck by a Mid damage C-Rank Jutsu, then a Mid damage D-Rank, before the damage would finally fade.



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2Senju Clan: Redux! Empty Re: Senju Clan: Redux! Mon Jun 17, 2019 8:12 pm

Fuyuko

Fuyuko


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This is going to require a lot more drawbacks then it currently has.
There are 4 drawbacks, 2 of which have an IC effect and 2 which are only hindered by your willingness to put in effort. You cannot use OOC drawbacks (not being able to benefit from any wc reduction and increase senjutsu training) to balance the IC benefits this clan offers.

Furthermore, the drawbacks that the clan has to offer are incredibly weak in comparison to what the clan offers. They're barely enough to cover the benefit of being able to have your element be strong against three other elements.

That still leaves your clan with a free major SC and regeneration, that both go without drawback.

An improvement point; Clarify how people should write down what elements their wood release is strong and weak to at creation.

Also run it through grammarly or something. There are a decent amount of words missing or sentences structured really weirdly which makes things hard to understand.

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