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1Shimura, Ting [Jutsu Update] Empty Shimura, Ting [Jutsu Update] Tue Jan 29, 2019 2:45 am

Ting

Ting


D-rank
Aerodynamics:

Agility:

Expose:

Poreification:

Sunder Spire:

Kiai:

Internal Colliding Wave:

Adhesion Fist:

Windhole:

Might:

Chakra Reverse Pulse:

Agezuki:

Crackle:

Leaf Uprooting:

Tiger Claw Strike:

Ends:

Trebuchet:



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2Shimura, Ting [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Shimura, Ting [Jutsu Update] Thu Feb 07, 2019 10:06 pm

Maikumaru

Maikumaru


A-rank
Ting wrote:
Aerodynamics:

Agility:

Expose:

Poreification:

Sunder Spire:

Kiai:

Internal Colliding Wave:

Adhesion Fist:

Windhole:

Might:

Chakra Reverse Pulse:

Agezuki:

Crackle:

Leaf Uprooting:

Tiger Claw Strike:

Ends:

Trebuchet:

Name: Wind Release: Aerodynamics
1/2 APPROVED

Flesh Weaving: Agility
The Range says 15m but the description says it can only cover 10m. Please match these accordingly to which

Expose
1/2 APPROVED

Name: Water Release: Poreification | 水遁・浄毛穴 Suiton - Jōkeana
1/2 APPROVED


Wind Release: Sunder Spire | 風遁・壊頂 Fūton - Kaichō

Firstly you would need to specify the extent of the bruising according to the damage table, and the slashing damage will also need to be something on the damage table. The range of the knockback will have to be lowered to 5 meters.


気合い [Kiai - Fighting Spirit Energy Shout]
Values can't be stacked on to one another. Cleansing counts as a defensive value, so you can either cleanse or block in one jutsu, not both.

内部衝波 [Naibu Shōha - Internal Colliding Wave]
You can either dissipate 1 jutsu of a rank higher or two Jutsu of equal rank. Not both.

付着拳 [Fuchaku-Ken - Adhesion Fist]
1/2 APPROVED

忍法・風穴 [Ninpō: Kazaana - Ninja Art: Windhole]
You can only go through Jutsu of D rank and lower.

筋塑 Sujisu: Might
1/2 Approved

Chakra Reverse Pulse (チャクラ逆脈 ~ Chakura Gyaku Myaku)
Dissipating jutsu counts as a defensive value. In order to be used with offensive ones, the defensive value would have to be lowered by rank or by number. Additionally the ability to cancel active jutsu on an opponent will need to be either be removed or add a drawback to balance it out.

Agezuki
1/2 APPROVED

Crackle
1/2 APPROVED

Leaf Uprooting | 木の葉根こそぎ Konoha Nekosogi
1/2 APPROVED


Tiger Claw Strike | 虎爪撃 Kōsōgeki
1/2 APPROVED

Flesh Weaving: Making Ends Meet | 筋塑・やりくり Sujisu - Yarikuri

Once you fix the Origin to Custom
1/2 APPROVED

Way of War: Wrapping Disrespectful Burial | 戦道・途例繆死穢  Sendō - Toreibyūshie
The speed and range together in order to grapple is a mid value, and the speed and rage at which to throw is a mid value. Together that is the jutsu's maximum value, and have maximum damage as well. Either lower the the previously stated values or add a drawback

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