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1Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Empty Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Thu Mar 15, 2018 12:29 am

Maikumaru

Maikumaru


A-rank
Symbol: Nekuro Clan (Revamp) EtPMMnP


Clan Name: Nekuro
Location: Scattered (Based in Mizu no Kuni)
Specialization: Ninjutsu and Fuinjutsu
Elements: N/A


Clan History: The Nekuro clan originated as a cult of people who worshipped the Shinigami. They were nomadic, and moved around where ever death was, to witness the Shinigami at work. Their activities would include watching animals die from their prey, going to medical sites to watch people die of injury or sickness, or even go to post-battle sites to witness the bodies laying around. As their number's grew, it became harder to move around, in so they decided to be stationed in Kirigakure, building a temple, and establishing themselves as a clan. Many of them have remained nomadic throughout the Shinobi World.

As the newly formed clan went on for some time, they became obsessed with becoming closer and closer to the Shinigami. They urged to communicate with it, to worship them in all its glory. Many members would use the Dead Demon Consuming Seal to see the Shinigami, even knowing what happens when they do. During the final days of the founding member of the Cult, he was to use the Dead Demon Consuming Soul on a willing participant. When summoning the Shinigami, all members of the clan who were present were able to see the Shinigami. After the technique complete something strange happened. Instead of leaving the Shinigami remained. Every member of the Nekuro Clan throughout the world felt a surge of power within their souls. The Shinigami had linked all their Chakra to him, blessing them Reaper's Gift. The details and origins of this new Kekkei Genkai is kept secret for many years only allowing the elite members of the clan to learn of it. After finally obtaining the closeness they had yearned for with the Shinigami, the clan had continued it's teachings and activities throughout history.

Members:

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Kekkei Genkai Name: Reaper's Gift
Kekkei Genkai Description:
-Reaper's gift is a kekkei genkai that is has the user's Chakra connected directly to the Shinigami, serving as a summoning contract. If the Shingami allows it, it will add the requested soul to their Chakra, allowing them being able to summon them with the Kuchiyose no Jutsu. When they rise from the dead, their skin is paler, their hair white, and their glowing red eyes emitting a crimson mist. The summoner can choose to give back their full minds, or, in contrast,  make them virtually mindless drones doing whatever the summoner demands. Once their new body dies from external causes (Injuries, drowning, burning etc.), their souls are taken back to the afterlife until being summoned again .
-All apped Undead Summons function the same as a normal summon. Deceased Player Characters loose their  Kekkei Genkai
-May Summon Undead Companions of 1 Rank higher than an averaged ninja would be aloud.
-May Start With 1 Apped Summoned Companion.
Drawbacks:
-Being that they are not physically adept, members of the Nekuro may not learn Taijutsu or Bukijutsu. They may also not be able to obtain Senjutsu.
-They are unable to receive any other contract.
-They have both Specialization and Element Hesitant.
-Kuchiyose no Jutsu is required to be a beginning Jutsu.
-May not take Necrophobia.
-Summonings cannot be Giant, due to being able to only summon normal humans.
Exception being if using a Jutsu.



Last edited by Maikeru Otsuka on Tue Apr 03, 2018 11:16 pm; edited 18 times in total

2Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Empty Re: Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Thu Mar 15, 2018 5:22 am

Hanbei~

Hanbei~


D-rank
You're going to need to go into a little more detail into the hows and why's of what you're doing with bringing the dead back to life, I'm guessing they are for the most part mindless or at least controlled by you? Are they alive now? do their bodies function and die normally? There's a lot that needs to be added here.

Also, what free contract do they get? The dead?

and what do you mean may use 1 summoning of a higher rank, as in, rather than being able to use summoning of 1 rank higher, they may app a SINGLE summoning technique of 1 rank higher?

Are summoned dead the same ranks they were in life?

lots to do here.

3Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Empty Re: Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Sat Mar 24, 2018 7:30 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
So as much as I'm interested in this clan there are still some problems with it.

  • For one these summons would still need to follow the rules for summon's specializations. Additionally the way they can straight up use other clan's KKG.


So unless the clan is significantly changed mechanically this clan is denied.

4Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Empty Re: Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Sun Mar 25, 2018 3:07 pm

Izumi

Izumi


A-rank
Alright so we are pretty adamant here that these summons need to follow summon guidelines, this is certainly different than what you were attempting with this KKG being similar to human puppets, however we cannot approve a clan that grants a power equivalent to S rank items for free starting at D rank. We are instead suggesting that this clan is balanced around the ability to summon a rank higher than normal and keep the undead contract as an auxillary function of the KKG.

5Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Empty Re: Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Wed Mar 28, 2018 7:20 pm

Kisei

Kisei


B-rank
A random Angelic Kisei descends from the Heavens with your modding notes.



KKG:

  • once their new body dies from external causes (Injuries, drowning, burning etc.), their souls are permanently taken back to the afterlife.

    - Does this mean that once a summon is defeated the summoner can no longer summon them and loses the ability to use them?

  • All apped Undead Summons function the same as a normal summon. Deceased Player Characters loose their Kekkei Genkai-

    Also please add that, 'clansmem cannot access the jutsu known to them in life.'

  • May Summon Undead Companions of 1 Rank higher than the lowest rank between Fuinjutsu and Ninjutsu.

    - We wouldn't mind you changing this to simply one rank above one's ninja rank. Not that is isn't acceptable but its restricting where it doesn't have to be.



Drawbacks:

  • So a few notes here. Some broken coding on the last drawback. Also, your second, third, and last drawback are all you need to keep. The others you can drop.



6Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Empty Re: Nekuro Clan (Revamp) Wed Apr 04, 2018 12:30 am

Izumi

Izumi


A-rank
Spoiler:

Approved!

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