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1Ikimono Clan Empty Ikimono Clan Tue May 02, 2017 5:20 am

Jesus




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Symbol:Ikimono Clan Bull1_5
Clan Name: Ikimono
Location: Konoha
Specialization: Seijutsu
Elements: N/A

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Clan History: The Ikimono clan is a new clan trying to build a reputation for itself. The clan emerged when an Inuzuka clan member fell in love with a civilian pet owner. Generations later, the Inuzuka clan's techniques have faded from the resulting fledgling clan, but their focus on fighting alongside their pets has increased even beyond the Inuzuka. They're still very much a young clan focused on developing their own abilities and gaining power and respect.
Members: TBD

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Kekkei Genkai Name: One with the wild
Kekkei Genkai Description:
The Ikimono clan has taken from their ancestry the ability to fuse with pets, and perfected this aspect to a deadly precision. While they may lack the Inuzuka's fearsome ultimate man beast taijutsu, they make up for it by strengthening their bodies and the bodies of their own pets with their chakra and their ability to merge with their pets in a way inspired by the Inuzuka's own double headed wolf.

- Members of the clan may write 2000 word rp in which they go through a ritual and are chosen by a pet trained by the ikimono clan of their choosing. Pets that have chosen an ikimono clan member are half off on purchase.

Drawbacks:

- Members of this clan have spent all of their free time developing a close bond with their pet, because of this, members of the Ikimono clan choose to either only start with one element or one specialization. The second element/specialization can be learned at B-Rank and the third at A-rank. The ikimono clan member is restricted from ever learning a fourth element/specialization.



Last edited by Jesus on Sun May 21, 2017 5:02 am; edited 7 times in total

2Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Tue May 02, 2017 11:30 pm

Sol

Sol


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Taking a spec you're using anyhow is not a drawback.

When and how does an Ikimono learn their secondary element? Check the Element and Specialization Training Guidelines for a reference.

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This is a whole lot of free pets. This feature is easily 5000 Ryo's worth of savings in not having to buy any of these....I'll come back to this with word from a superior.

State that only summons comparable in size to standard pets can be used for the purposes of Seijutsu.

3Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Tue May 02, 2017 11:51 pm

Jesus




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Edited the post to fix those things, well except the pet cost.

4Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Wed May 17, 2017 11:23 pm

Jet

Jet


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this doesnt seem finish with the location tbd, there is no symbol, the inuzuka's abilities arent gone so i want that removed or at least say its inspiried from their abilities, summons and pets are vastly different so no go hun. and this is way to easy to get free pets, instead a reduced cost would be more fitting.

5Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Thu May 18, 2017 2:41 am

Jesus




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Edited once again to fix the location, the icon, clarify the kekkai genkai and change the free pets to a word count which allows for a discount.

6Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Fri May 19, 2017 5:31 pm

Mitsuo

Mitsuo


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I have one gripe with this.

The way you have described the drawback doesn't quite make sense. Having them not know their second element, and essentially giving them hesitant element is fine and good, but the way it is described you would think they would have it apply to specializations instead or as well. Potentially state that they spend all of their time focusing on their specialization, and neglect the training of elemental chakra because of that.

After that this seems like a simple basic clan so you should be good to go.

7Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Sat May 20, 2017 12:58 pm

Jet

Jet


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i need the wording cleaned up on drawback. It would be better to say they can learn their second element/specialization at B-rank and their third element/specialization at A-rank. Also relink when you request modding again instead of saying edited

8Ikimono Clan Empty Re: Ikimono Clan Mon May 22, 2017 9:07 pm

N'Jobu Aburame

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