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1Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Empty Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Fri Oct 31, 2014 7:52 am

Miho

Miho


D-rank
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Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Lunar_14


Clan: Kyouki (jap. きょうき ,  kanji  凶器,  meaning „dangerous weapon, deadly weapon“)

Kekkei Genkai: Seigyoka (jap. せいぎょか, meaning "under control")

Elements: Does not utilize a certain element

Specialization: Bukijutsu and Ninjutsu (no difference which is chosen to be the first, which - to be the second, however only this combination must be chosen)

Location: Kumogakure

Clan History:

Spoiler:

Kekkei Genkai Description:  Kyouki’s kekkei genkai is their natural ability to feel and manipulate their own chakra to the perfection. The most special thing is that they can split their chakra and place it into weapons in order to control them from afar without touching them, making any seals, chakra strings or without puppetry. Kyouki can control a weapon everywhere without a real limit other than chakra, One could also control it when it lays more than a mile away.  This is possible, because when chakra leaves the body of a Kyouki and settles down in a weapon, it still works as a part of body chakra. It still remains a living chakra just resides elsewhere and runs in a smaller circulation, thus can be controlled and manipulated by its owner. Once the weapon is infused with chakra, it obeys only to that member of the clan. And only that person can release it by releasing the chakra from it. If one would want to win the weapon over, the only way would be to kill its master or force him to release the weapon. The total control of weapon could be gained only by holding the weapon in own hands and performing secret clan jutsus that are handed down from generations to generations. The weapon obeys the master till the end of his life or that moment when the master decides to release the chakra from it.

Drawbacks: Every weapon that is infused takes chakra points from the chakra poll for good. The amount of taken points depends on the rank of a person and is taken only in lifetime, not per post or thread. Those points are not regained, because that chakra remains in the weapon. The more infused weapons the person owns (not infused with own chakra, just for basic use doesn't count), the less useful chakra he has, thus, the less jutsu he can perform until his limits and gets tired faster. Even if the weapon is released from the control, the chakra never comes back to the owner.

Infused weapons cannot be hidden, because the chakra is inside them and shinobi can sence that as all other chakra they can. That makes attacks more predictable and dodgeable.

Another thing, when applying a character, one must take inheritance as his special characteristic.

The weapons for Kyoki also cost 10% more than to members of other clans.

Members: Miho Kyouki

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Last edited by Miho on Mon Aug 03, 2015 3:14 pm; edited 5 times in total

2Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Empty Re: Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Fri Oct 31, 2014 7:55 am

Miho

Miho


D-rank
Dear Mods, I truly wish to continue using this charater of mine, so apply for my clan to be redone, just need some help from the side. Now all of the things here are same as was before, could someone point out the problematic things in this clan app, so that I could make the changes and make it valid again? Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Cute-a10

3Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Empty Re: Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Wed Nov 05, 2014 10:33 pm

Tame

Tame


D-rank
Moved to Clan Updates.

KKG Description wrote:One could also control it when it lays more than a mile away. At D-rank shinobi can control his weapon in the range of 40 metres and when the rank is going higher, additional 20 metres are added to that.

This above part of your KKG description ought to go into your Weapon Qonquer technique's Range. (You can simply put it in the Range: section as "40 meters, +20 meters per rank up".)

However, you should refer to the Jutsu Rules (here) for what the correct range for each rank is.

The speed of the sword should not exceed the speed that the wielder themselves could swing the sword at; I would recommend replacing the 'speed increase +1 with each rank' with 'The speed of the sword using this technique is as fast as the user would be able to normally'.

Just to clarify, the chakra one expends to use Weapon Quonquer is lost forever if the weapon is lost/destroyed, or if you use Weapon Release on it, yes?

4Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Empty Re: Kyoki Clan [rewamp wip] Fri Jul 31, 2015 10:35 am

Taede

Taede


D-rank
Weapon Qonquer: We don't have E-rank shinobi.

Also, the +1 speed doesn't make sense. As a comparison to the Puppet Technique, is there any lag in your will and the movement of the sword? Also, it would be wise to detail how fast the weapon can move under your control with this technique (refer to Jutsu Rules, go for low-end speeds).

The updated chakra pool deduction will depend largely on the new capabilities of this ability.

Weapon Release: Can it be done in the heat of battle?

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