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1Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Empty Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Thu Apr 24, 2014 4:18 am

Tsuyo

Tsuyo


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D rank:

C rank:

B rank:

A rank:



Last edited by Tsuyo on Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:46 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Empty Re: Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Thu Apr 24, 2014 10:40 pm

Daraku

Daraku


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Footwork - You're gonna need another drawback on this, it's a 2 tier boost that is maintainable for up to 10 posts and the drawback is not really substantial (a -1 for four posts after); something like damage to Tsuyo if he uses if for more than 5 posts or an additional -1 to the existing drawback.

Goliath Fist - Range says 30 meters, description says 45 meters. Change one of them to match the other.

All library jutsu are fine, just be sure to update them when their respective libraries are updated.

Everything else aside from the stuff I suggested edits for is passable.

Bump when you've made the edits.

3Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Empty Re: Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:46 pm

Tsuyo

Tsuyo


D-rank
bump

4Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Empty Re: Hyuga Tsuyo (Jutsu list update) Sat Apr 26, 2014 2:31 am

Daraku

Daraku


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Your jutsu list update is approved

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