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1Hattori, Kashiki Empty Hattori, Kashiki Fri Jan 25, 2019 4:10 pm

Kashiki

Kashiki


D-rank
Approved:

Locomotion Sight:

Lesser Hellfire Cloak:

Demon Claw:

Cleansing Winds:

Otherworld Blade:

Haunting Gash:



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2Hattori, Kashiki Empty Re: Hattori, Kashiki Sat Jan 26, 2019 11:46 am

Takao

Takao


S-rank
Kashiki wrote:
Still Wind Cloaking:

Locomotion Sight:

Lesser Hellfire Cloak:

Demon Claw:

Cleansing Winds:

Otherworld Blade:

Unseen Earthen Volcano:

Dragonfly Scar:

Haunting Gash:

Please don't completely rewrite the description of your techniques unless they no longer work under the new rules. You only need to update incorrect values or illegal effects and nothing else. This is not an opportunity to remake techniques.

Still Wind Cloaking is Approved.

Locomotion Sight:
- Too many max values. Range and post duration are both max.

Lesser Hellfire Cloak:
"(as long as the attacker doesn't have strength ss-3+),"
- Remove this.

Demon Claw:
"Every swing sends out a small 3m radius cluster of slicing wind,"
- This wasn't part of the original technique and it isn't compensating for something that no longer works under the new rules.

Cleansing Winds:
- Activation field is different from the original version.

Otherworld Blade:
"and interacting first under all circumstances."
- Remove this part. Ignoring the first interaction is fine.

Unseen Earthen Volcano is Approved.

Dragonfly Scar is Approved.

Haunting Gash:
- Too many effects/values. Full 'defensive' values against medical techniques healing a wound and ignoring the first interaction.

"the user has a -1 to endurance as their body fights away the chakra in their own body."
- This is no longer an applicable drawback to balance a technique's effects while it is active. A drawback must occur during the duration, not afterward. Additionally, for a technique to gain a mid or max value from a stat debuff, it must be equal to a mid/max value stat buff of the same rank.

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