Clan: Nagai

Kekkei Genkai: Ajin(亜人, Demi-Human)

Elements: N/A

Specialization: N/A

Location: Scattered; Primarily Kumogakure

Clan History: Having only appeared around the world recently, as a genetic mutation, Nagai clan members are rare and few between. Completely taking over what previous Kekkei Genkai a clan member might have had, and although they may appear and act just like any other member of their clan, they are most certainly a different breed of human all together. In recent years small gatherings of clan members have grouped up in each of the major villages, though the largest by far is in Kumogakure. Though the number in Kumogakure is around around 20 clan members.

Because of them being so rare, and some of the abilities they posses, clan members are seen by some to be divine beings sent from the heavens, but by others are seen as spawns of the underworld.

Kekkei Genkai Description:


The most notable thing about Nagai clan members is that when they are immortal. Or at least seeming so. When members from this clan are killed, they will "die" for one post, but after two posts they will revive in perfect condition (meaning the "revival" process takes one post). Although this has a few conditions, which is explained in the drawbacks. While reviving, clan members have visible black matter flowing off of them, as their wounds are repaired, as well as for a post after their revival.

Nagai clan members are often regarded as weaker in combat situations. this opinion has changed among clan members as they have recently discovered another one of their abilities. The Ajin. a manifestation of the user's inner primal spirit. These pure black creatures, stand at around 11 feet tall if they are standing straight up which they rarely ever do, and usually have sharp claws and teeth, though some have been known to take on a more brutish appearance, and just simply have big hands as well as a head more suited for head butting. They also always elude the black matter that the clan member does when they are reviving. these creatures typically appear like black mummies although with nothing on the inside, and as such many people attribute them to ghosts due to their monstrous appearance.

These creatures when manifested are manifested at a rank higher than the user using tier-2 stats of it's rank, and dealing jutsu damage of it's rank as well. These creatures are their own being and as such have their own senses and will. If the user wishes to control them, it requires a training thread of 5k words, and the same goes for if the user wishes to be able to utilize their fives senses. If the user has done both training threads (a total of 10k) the user can also project their own voice out of the Ajin. If the user has not done either of these, the Ajin will be extremely bloodthirsty, attacking the nearest person within 50 meters and attempting to kill them (this does not apply to the user). if there is no one within this range, the Ajin will simply stand near the user and protect the user. These creatures last until they are destroyed or absorbed back into the body of their owner. Reabsorbing the creature takes two posts. These creatures, not being any sort of alive, or chakra based cannot be sensed except by sight, sound (if they so chose to be heard), and touch, as they have a scent or a taste.

Finally, these creatures will only be fully destroyed if you crush their head (which requires damage of at least a rank lower than them)

Drawbacks:

Revival Conditions:

• If the user takes damage during one of the posts they are reviving/dead, then the revival time is extended by one post. Note: this is not the post is extended per source applied, just if the user has taken damage during one post, then it is extended by another post. And damage needs to be reapplied for this to work. for example; you can't just stick a stake in someone's hand and have them remain dead.
  
• If the user takes enough damage to die again, while they are reviving, then the entire process resets. meaning they are dead for the next post, and then the post after they begin reviving again.
  
• If the user is decapitated, or has their head completely destroyed they will die permanently (meaning no more revivals).
  
• if the user's Ajin has been manifested when they die, they cannot revive until it has been reabsorbed.
  
• Clan members do NOT restore chakra after reviving.
  
• If the user has no chakra when they die, they will not revive, and will permanently die.
  
• When the user dies, they are Revived at half of their current chakra, round down to the nearest 5.
  

Ajin

• These creatures cannot use any jutsu aside from the Screech technique listed in the clan Jutsu, however they can use this technique free of chakra cost.
  
• If the user ever falls unconscious or dies, these creatures will reabsorb into their owners.
  
• the same goes for if the creature its self get destroyed.
  
• The user can only summon an Ajin 1 time per thread + 1 for every rank above D
  

General Drawbacks:

• Members of this clan cannot use or learn any elements. (includes not being to take any negative or positive special characteristics relating too elements)
  
• Members of this clan must take hesitant specialization
  
• Members have a smaller chakra pool then most. (-20 chakra)
  
• Members of this clan can only use techniques of equal rank to them or lower. with the exception of clan techniques.
  

Note: Members of this clan are by no means immune to damage. simply because they revive after death, doesn't mean they can simply ignore any damage dealt to them. they simply are restored to a healthy state after reviving. meaning if you break all of the bones in their right arm, they won't be able to use that right arm until they die, or revive. as well as members of this clan still age.

Also to note: there have been a few cases with some Nagai where they have had long term injuries, or birth defects these can't be cured with revival no matter how many times one tries. (special characteristics and character flavor can fall under this. Not really a drawback, but thought it should be included.)

Members: (Members of the clan can be updated here)

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Ajin Manifestation:

Ajin's Scream:

Ajin Hidding Technique:

Kōzui (洪水):

Lots to do,

i want a HEAVY downside on the user while their Ajin is out. I want stats on the Ajin in the manifestation jutsu and i would not like them to be 2 tiers of the rank they're summoned, that's INSANE. Feel free to go 2 tiers 'under' the rank they're summoned though. I want your chakra to be halved on revival as a downside. (rounded down to nearest 5) I'd like a reason why it is uneffected by cut and pierce but concussive is fine. Also, these creatures 'are' chakra based, so, chakra sensory abilities 'would' be able to see them. Spiritual chakra is a thing. They just have no body chakra.

Once those big changes are done, i will look over it again. :)

drawbacks are fine.

KKG

Is fine

Drawbacks

Is Fine

Jutsu

1/ is fine
2/ Reduce to 1 post please. Or increase to A rank.
3/ This needs a check on it of some kind, can a perception stat of a rank higher see through it? Most stealth techniques B rank and lower don't give perfect stealth on 2 senses.
4/ 25 summons is quite a few, I'd like you to reduce it to 20. And how much chakra is this costing you? All of it? Cos you seem to elude to that. almost. Removing your entire soul Ie. spirit chakra, would make sense that you 1/2 it unless you're a sage.