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1Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:49 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
OLD
A rank - Kagura Shingan:


NEW
Rules indicate A-rank sensory can have two types, or 1 type + a max value.
max value: duration, stealth (A+, 1st sensory max), range (A+, 2nd sensory max)
A rank - Kagura Shingan:



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2Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Sat Apr 20, 2019 7:52 am

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
Recovered:

A-rank: Closer to the Stars
C-rank: Moonlight Bow
C-rank: Starlight Katana
D-rank (Lightning Redirection)



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3Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Thu May 02, 2019 5:25 pm

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS POST BELOW

Max value: 1st sensory
Mid value: half hand seals, range
A rank - Kagura Shingan:

Max values: Paralysis, no hand seals
Max drawback: values one rank lower, +5 chakra
B rank - Paralysing Shout:

Max values: defence, no hand seals (A-rank)
A rank - Voice of Susanoo:

Max value: damage, piercing (Chidori)
B rank - Chidori:




DISINTEGRATE, former scaling jutsu. Principle/template is the same for all new versions
Mid values: hand seals, damage
C rank - Disintegrate:
B rank - Disintegrate:

High value: damage
mid values: hand seals, speed
A rank -  Disintegrate:




L. REDIRECTION, former scaling jutsu. Principle/template is the same for all new versions
Max value: none specific
C rank - Lightning Redirection:
B rank - Lightning Redirection:
A rank - Lightning Redirection:




Polarity Shield series: all three follow the same concept/template.
Max value: defence
Mid value: duration, elemental cycle
Mid drawback: cooldown, +5 cost
C rank - Polarity Shield, Lesser:
B rank - Polarity Shield:
A rank - Polarity Shield, Greater:


Oceanic Current series: all three follow the same concept/template.
Max value: defence
Mid value: duration, elemental cycle
Mid drawback: cooldown, +5 cost
C rank - Oceanic Current, Minor:
B rank - Oceanic Current:
A rank - Oceanic Current, Great:




Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)

Mind's Eye of the Kagura is approved.

Paralyzing Shout is approved.

Kiaidō: Voice of Susano'o needs some sort of size for the voice to travel in. Is it meant to be a cone? A radius around the user?

Chidori is approved.

Disintegrate is approved at all ranks.

Lightning Redirection has the Max Value of Defensive/Offensive, and has the drawback of self-harm to keep the damage from the redirected jutsu intact. Approved.

Polarity Shield yet has cooldowns. Otherwise approved at all ranks.

Ditto for Oceanic Current.


My nature as a human somehow led me to miss these two. Cooldowns currently don't count as a drawback, and they need proper ones for their 2-post durations.

4Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Thu May 02, 2019 5:58 pm

Raiu Mizuki

Raiu Mizuki

Retired
Was updated as I spoke with Fuyuko.
Voice of Susanoo update included

5Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Fri May 03, 2019 12:59 am

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS POST BELOW

Max values: defence, no hand seals (A-rank)
A rank - Voice of Susanoo:


max value: defence
mid value: duration
mid drawback: stat debuff
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ C rank - Oceanic Current, Minor:
☯ B rank - Oceanic Current:

Max value: defence, duration
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Oceanic Current, Great:

max value: defence
mid value: duration
mid drawback: stat debuff
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ C rank - Polarity Shield, Lesser:
☯ B rank - Polarity Shield:

Max value: defence, duration
Trade: mid-elemental channel, +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Polarity Shield, Greater:


















Recovering:
1 B-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 C-rank (Voice of Susanoo)
1 D-rank (Lightning Redirection)
All jutsu here are approved!

6Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Wed Jun 05, 2019 6:17 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS [x]


Max value: -, homing (KKG, free max)
Mid values: damage, speed
Max benefit: negative SC
Max drawback: jutsu dependency (self, 20 chakra equivalent)
☯ B rank - Laser Circus:

Max values: multiple projectiles, duration (A+), homing (KKG, free max)
Max value: multi-target (4+)
Max drawback: +10 chakra
☯ A rank - Thunder Cloud Inner Wave:

Max value: duration, +/- 1 rank interaction (A+)
Mid value: stat debuff
Mid drawback: +5 chakra
☯ A rank - Weathering the Storms:

Max value: stat check, duration (drawback)
Max drawback: stat check (against user)
☯ C rank - Bubblegum:

Mid value: stat, duration
☯ C rank - Adrenaline Senbon:

Max value: defensive
☯ C rank - Shielding Senbon:








OLD VERSIONS [x]


max value: duration
☯ E rank - Celestial Empowerment:

Max values: homing (KKG, free)
Mid values: damage, multiple projectiles (3)
☯ B rank - Shooting Stars:

Max values: damage (2 types), multiple projectiles (A+), homing (KKG, free)
☯ A rank - Shooting Stars:

Max values: damage
☯ C rank - Starlight Extinction:

mid value: speed, range
☯ D rank - Celestial Step, Blur of the Milky Way:

Max value: stat debuff
☯ D rank - Hazy Moon:




Trading:
S-rank: Shooting Stars -> S-rank Hummingbird [approved jutsu]

Recovering:
C-rank: Moonlight Bow
C-rank: Starlight Katana
A-rank: Closer to the Stars

All: Approved!

7Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Sat Jun 08, 2019 1:46 am

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Raiu Mizuki wrote:OLD VERSIONS: [x]
- Sparrow's Song, post below


Max value: damage
☯ C rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Decree:

Max values: 'defence' (shield razing)
☯ B rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Event Horizon:

Max value: duration
☯ B rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Reflected:

max value damage, duration
☯ A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Torn Asunder:

max value: duration
☯ C rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Yielding:

max value: duration, stats (drawback)
max drawback: stats
☯ C rank - Heaven Sword Style, Tenchi no kamae:

max value: duration, stats
☯ A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Tenchu no kamae:







OLD VERSIONS: [x]


max value: duration
☯ B rank - Suzume Seishin, Sparrow's Flight:

max: multiple projectiles
☯ B rank - Suzume Seishin, Sparrow's Shadow:

max: damage, piercing (chidori, free)
☯ B rank - Suzume Seishin, Sparrow's Song:

max: duration, multi-target (4+), no hand seals (senjutsu)
☯ A rank - Songbird's Allure:




Trading:
Recovered B-rank Voice of Susanoo for B-rank Sparrow's Song
Recovered C-rank Voice of Susanoo in compensation for forced rank-up of C-rank Heaven Reflected.

All: Approved, except...

Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: The ability to channel two separate elements through a jutsu like this is considered a mid effect. Given you have two max effects and a mid effect here, you'll need to either balance this by adding a drawback or something or something else like t hat.

8Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Wed Jun 12, 2019 2:46 pm

Daremo




S-rank
Raiu Mizuki wrote:
OLD VERSIONS: [x]

max value damage, duration
mid value: element channel
mix drawback: cost
☯ A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Torn Asunder:









Old Version
C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:


New Version

max values: duration, stat check
max drawback: stat check (user)
☯ C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:
Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: 1/2 approved
Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique - Not approved. Stat check should be removed, and a drawback added.

9Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp]  Empty Re: Raiu Mizuki [Jutsu Revamp] Thu Jun 13, 2019 6:31 pm

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Chigetsu Hōzuki

Dead
Daremo wrote:
Raiu Mizuki wrote:
OLD VERSIONS: [x]

max value damage, duration
mid value: element channel
mix drawback: cost
:yin_yang: A rank - Heaven Sword Style, Heaven Torn Asunder:









Old Version
C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:


New Version

max values: duration, stat check
max drawback: stat check (user)
:yin_yang: C Rank - Hidden Mist Technique:
Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: 1/2 approved
Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique - Not approved. Stat check should be removed, and a drawback added.

Heaven Sword Style - Heaven Torn Asunder: Approved

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