Clan Name: Hojouro
Location: Scattered
Specialization: Ninjutsu
Elements: N/A



Clan History: The Hojouro clan was founded during the Era of the Warring States by Seina Hojouro, a samurai trained in ninjutsu from the Land of Iron who was renowned not only for her swordsmanship but her impressive visual prowess, the Kouingan, which she had passed on to her later descendants. Seina Hojouro's kekkai genkai, the Kouingan enabled her to negate and suppress her opponent's elemental chakra as well as see what element(s) her opponent possessed as well as the dojutsu enabling her to become an even more proficient swordswoman then compared to her peers' men and women alike. This clan gained a notable reputation for themselves while fighting amongst various ninja clansmen of this chaotic period, of which they created a plethora of enemies and rivals alike some of whom remain to this day.
When the Warring States period ended with founding of the first ninja villages the Hojouro clan gained, despite receiving a number invitations to join various villages, they stubbornly refused having been somewhat hostile towards outsiders and secretive with their clans techniques and traditions as such they took refuge across Fire Country and into the Land of Marsh near Sky Country, at this point is where the power of the clan began its rapid decline. The clan during post-Warring States was isolated and disorganized which gave those who wished to gain the eyes that see nature as it must the opportunity to prey upon them thus thinning the clan's numbers considerably.
Members: Seina Hojouro-(Founder)



Kekkei Genkai Name:Kouingan
Kekkei Genkai Description:  

The Kouingan while powerful in its own right was never truly seen as an equal to the three great dojutsus. The Kouingan would never manifest unless the right amount of combat stress/trauma and chakra levels were met. The Kouingan grants the user incredible eyesight and larger visual field which enables them to see fast-moving objects allowing them to dodge and anticipate an opponent's movement, in addition, allows the user to see what element(s) the opposition is in possession of allowing them to counter with an appropriate response.

Fire = Red
Wind = Green
Earth = Brown
Water = Blue
Lightning = Yellow

C-rank: Requires 3000 WC and 500 ryo to unlock (can be learned as a D-rank). After activating the eyes power surges throughout the body of the wielder granting them a +1 boost to their reaction time and speed while active. Furthermore, their vision is improved, granting them the ability to perceive the primary element of a person. This level requires 5 chakra per post to maintain.

B-rank: Requires 5000 wc and 1000 ryo to unlock (can be learned as a C-rank). The empowered version of the eye, bestowing more powers to the user, increasing their passive boosts to +2 in reaction time and speed while active. Furthermore, their elemental affinity is boosted even further allowing them to see the primary and secondary element of a person. This level requires 5 chakra per post to maintain.

A-rank: Requires 7500 wc and 2000 ryo to unlock (can be learned as a B-rank). This is the final version of the eye. Granting the user the ultimate strength it holds. Granting the user +3 in reaction time and speed while active. Furthermore, their elemental recognition has developed to such a point that they can see all elements a person holds, furthermore they can tell what element is being used when a jutsu is channeled. Finally upon reaching this level to eye unlocks its true power, the ability to negate other jutsu it can see within a 25-meter radius. However, these techniques may not be higher than the users own ninja rank and come at the cost of the negated jutsu cost and an additional +10. This effect can only be used once every other post.  


Drawbacks:

Genjutsu Frailty: The major flaw of the Kouingan is its inability to distinguish reality with genjutsu. The majority of the Hojouro clan are quite weak against genjutsu users and while some may be able to dispel it, its cost is great. Hojouro clan members are unable to use genjutsu and genjutsu inflicted upon members of this clan receive +2 ranks in power.

Elemental Genius: Due to each clan member possessing a varying in elemental affinities the user must have prior knowledge of the element (User must have the element as primary, secondary, or tertiary) for it not to strain their eyes, for each jutsu negation of an element the user doesn't possess the chakra cost is that of the jutsu being negated and the additional chakra cost being bumped up to -20.

Occular Tunnel: For the cost of seeing in so much detail and the speed granted by the clans doujustu they become rather linear in some instances of combat or training to the point of tunnel vision. Causing a -1 tier to perception from non-visual cues to anything not in the user's field of view while the doujutsu is activated.

Clan Scarceness: The clan's numbers have dwindled to near extinction, as the previous generation usually trains the next this is no longer the case. As such due to members not being able to train with previous users once they are able to activate their eyes they receive a permanent -1 to endurance.

In addition, any members of the clan must take the Hesitant Element sc, which cannot be balanced with a postive one.

The entire clan needs a lot more concrete numbers. As an example, you can't say "The user receives reaction time and speed while active and chakra each post" instead it should be more something like "The user receives +2 reaction time and speed while the eyes are active". Also I'm quite unsure what you mean by the bit "chakra each post".

So in general, give more concrete numbers and then re-submit this in the clan modding request thread, found here: http://www.narutosaga.com/t26837-clan-modding-requests

If you have any questions, feel free to pm me.

Wow, thats a lot of bold.

KKG
my only issue with the kkg itself is the final ability. A nullification every other turn within vague line of sight is a little too much. I would like you to add sensory ranges to your eyesight ability. limitless range on a cancellation is a little too much. Otherwise your Dojutsu seems ok by me. It stems a little close to a couple of others in effect, but not so much as to transgress on what they do as it seems to be purely about element sight.

Drawbacks:

" Hojouro clan members are unable to use genjutsu and receive +2 damage from genjutsu." genjutsu don't often do damage. I think you would mean: genjutsu inflicted upon members of this clan gain +2 ranks in power.

"the chakra cost is that of the jutsu being negated +20" I'd just like you to specify whether this is in place of the +10 or in addition to the +10

"Hesitant" you'd normally just say members of the clan must take the hesitant negative SC, which cannot be balanced with an additional positive. :) feel free to spoiler the SC if you'd like.

Sorry for the wait on modding! if you have any questions let me know :)

A-rank: Requires 7500 wc and 2000 ryo to unlock (can be learned as a B-rank). This is the final version of the eye. Granting the user the ultimate strength it holds. Granting the user +3 in reaction time and speed while active. Furthermore, their elemental recognition has developed to such a point that they can see all elements a person holds, furthermore they can tell what element is being used when a jutsu is channeled. Finally upon reaching this level to eye unlocks its true power, the ability to negate other jutsu it can see within a 25-meter radius. However, these techniques may not be higher than the users own ninja rank and come at the cost of the negated jutsu cost and an additional +10. This effect can only be used once every other post.

How is this Jutsu able to “negate” other jutsu, IE does it stop the chakra from being formed or does it stop the jutsu in motion. Also, increase the cooldown.

Genjutsu Frailty: The major flaw of the Kouingan is its inability to distinguish reality with genjutsu. The majority of the Hojouro clan are quite weak against genjutsu users and while some may be able to dispel it, its cost is great. Hojouro clan members are unable to use genjutsu and genjutsu inflicted upon members of this clan receive +2 ranks in power.

Replace “unable to use genjutsu” with “unable to take Genjutsu as a specialization”

Elemental Genius: Due to each clan member possessing a varying in elemental affinities the user must have prior knowledge of the element (User must have the element as primary, secondary, or tertiary) for it not to strain their eyes, for each jutsu negation of an element the user doesn't possess the chakra cost is that of the jutsu being negated and the additional chakra cost being bumped up to -20.

rephrase “bumped up to -20” to “increased from +10 chakra cost to +20 chakra cost.” for clarity

Occular Tunnel: For the cost of seeing in so much detail and the speed granted by the clans doujustu they become rather linear in some instances of combat or training to the point of tunnel vision. Causing a -1 tier to perception from non-visual cues to anything not in the user's field of view while the doujutsu is activated.

change this to just -1 in perception while doujustou is active overall for clarity.