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1The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Thu Sep 13, 2018 8:38 am

Sakamoto

Sakamoto


D-rank
Mission name: Approaching the Nightingale: The Veil of Mt. Meru
Mission rank: B
Objective: Pass the First Test
Location: Konoha
Reward: 500 Ryo + 1EP
Mission Description: With the scroll of seals in the possession of the team, the team is tasked with attempting to make their entrance into Mount Meru on the border of Konohagakure and Claw Country. The mission is to cross the mountainous path leading to their destination alive. Doing so alone is more than many have accomplished.
Development References: This is a follow on from the previous mission where the group got a hold of the forbidden scroll of the first Hokage found HERE. Now they move to the location where they intend to open it, establishing Mount Meru, a Mythical location rivalling that of Mount Myuboku hidden behind a dimensional veil and the beginning of the war between night and day.
Mission Details: En route to the mountain, there will be more than a couple obstacles in their way. The mountain peaks at the border of claw country are treacherous, and even more so with aggressors laying in wait. Flight any higher than a few meters is impossible at this altitude with the viciously high winds and saboteurs along the way will attempt to take the lives of the group, including avalanches, potent B-A rank Genjutsu sealed within traps and monuments along the way. Should these trials be passed, the party will reach a massive broken bridge bearing the gate to Mount Meru... using the scroll of seals here, it can be opened, and the REAL quest, begins! But there are scouts that guard the gate, A series of 4 C rank Owls, with C-1 Stats and fuuton techniques as well as C rank weapons will attack anyone seeking entry.

Completed so Far:



Last edited by Sakamoto on Sun Jan 06, 2019 7:06 am; edited 3 times in total

2The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty Re: The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Sat Sep 15, 2018 10:44 pm

Kirei

Kirei


B-rank
Sakamoto wrote:
Mission name: Finding the Nightingale: Singing Floors of Heaven
Mission rank: C
Objective: Discover the War of the Raptors
Location: Konoha
Reward: 300 Ryo + 1EP
Mission Description: After a fowl by the name of Xiao - 梟 was caught by one of the ninja of Konohagakure, it was discovered that the noble creature bore a crest signifying it as a member of a prodigious Organization of Raptors known to look over the ninja world from the heavens above. However, the talonous wounds across the birds' frame suggest foul play on the grandest scale. As the creature arose, it was discovered that danger looms on the zenith of the setting sun... but getting to the location is not something for the faint of heart. Due to its difficulty, ninja has been barred from the travel to the creatures dismay.
Development References: This will include a location I'd like to be canon and also spark the beginning of a long-standing plotline involving these birds, a war between Owl and Falcon, the sun and the moon for any who would like to begin. This serves as the initiation to a much longer plotline.
Mission Details: Ninja will be approached by the bird and will have to escape Konoha independently to undertake the mission, breaking the rules for the greater good. Once out of the village, they will have to attempt to earn Xiao's trust by infiltrating and stealing the Scroll of Seals from the village of heaven. A scroll which contains one of the jutsu required to enter the village.

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3The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty Re: The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Thu Dec 06, 2018 5:38 pm

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Sakamoto wrote:
Mission name: Approaching the Nightingale: The Veil of Mt. Meru
Mission rank: B
Objective: Pass the First Test
Location: Konoha
Reward: 500 Ryo + 1EP
Mission Description: With the scroll of seals in the possession of the team, the team are tasked with attempting to make their entrance into Mount Meru on the boarder of Konohagakure and Claw Country. The mission is to cross the mountainous path leading to their destination alive. Doing so alone is more than many have accomplished.
Development References: This is a follow on from the previous mission where the group got a hold of the forbidden scroll of the first Hokage.
Mission Details: En route to the mounain, there will be more than a couple obstacles in their way. The mountain peaks at the border of claw country are treacherous, and even more so with aggressors laying in wait. Flight any higher than a few meters is impossible at this altitude with the viciously high winds and saboteurs along the way will attempt to take the lives of the group, including avalanches, potent B-A rank genjutsu sealed within traps and monuments along the way. Should these trials be passed, the party will reach a massive broken bridge bearing the gate to Mount Meru... using the scroll of seals here, it can be opened, and the REAL quest, begins!

Completed so Far:

This does not "interact with the site's setting or story, and/or permanently alter aspects of a village, culture, group or another integral part of the world" like stealing the Scroll of Seals did - it is not a Quest Mission. Consider having to parlay with or beat away some more hostile avians for passage through this treacherous place, as an example; some sort of event that might have lasting impacts.

4The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty Re: The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Sun Jan 06, 2019 6:58 am

Sakamoto

Sakamoto


D-rank
Hika wrote:
Sakamoto wrote:
Mission name: Approaching the Nightingale: The Veil of Mt. Meru
Mission rank: B
Objective: Pass the First Test
Location: Konoha
Reward: 500 Ryo + 1EP
Mission Description: With the scroll of seals in the possession of the team, the team are tasked with attempting to make their entrance into Mount Meru on the boarder of Konohagakure and Claw Country. The mission is to cross the mountainous path leading to their destination alive. Doing so alone is more than many have accomplished.
Development References: This is a follow on from the previous mission where the group got a hold of the forbidden scroll of the first Hokage.
Mission Details: En route to the mounain, there will be more than a couple obstacles in their way. The mountain peaks at the border of claw country are treacherous, and even more so with aggressors laying in wait. Flight any higher than a few meters is impossible at this altitude with the viciously high winds and saboteurs along the way will attempt to take the lives of the group, including avalanches, potent B-A rank genjutsu sealed within traps and monuments along the way. Should these trials be passed, the party will reach a massive broken bridge bearing the gate to Mount Meru... using the scroll of seals here, it can be opened, and the REAL quest, begins!

Completed so Far:

This does not "interact with the site's setting or story, and/or permanently alter aspects of a village, culture, group or another integral part of the world" like stealing the Scroll of Seals did - it is not a Quest Mission. Consider having to parlay with or beat away some more hostile avians for passage through this treacherous place, as an example; some sort of event that might have lasting impacts.

Its a second part of a longer spanning plotline that does, it's part 2 of the part prior, so, as far as it should be concerned, it already has affected the plot. We're still carrying the scroll of seals, so it should still be part of that plotline as a direct continuation. Not to mention we're establishing an entire pocket dimension/area being Mt. Meru and a war. So I would say it does "interact with the site's setting or story, and/or."

Made some edits though.

5The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty Re: The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Mon Jan 07, 2019 1:29 am

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Sakamoto wrote:
Hika wrote:
Sakamoto wrote:
Mission name: Approaching the Nightingale: The Veil of Mt. Meru
Mission rank: B
Objective: Pass the First Test
Location: Konoha
Reward: 500 Ryo + 1EP
Mission Description: With the scroll of seals in the possession of the team, the team are tasked with attempting to make their entrance into Mount Meru on the boarder of Konohagakure and Claw Country. The mission is to cross the mountainous path leading to their destination alive. Doing so alone is more than many have accomplished.
Development References: This is a follow on from the previous mission where the group got a hold of the forbidden scroll of the first Hokage.
Mission Details: En route to the mounain, there will be more than a couple obstacles in their way. The mountain peaks at the border of claw country are treacherous, and even more so with aggressors laying in wait. Flight any higher than a few meters is impossible at this altitude with the viciously high winds and saboteurs along the way will attempt to take the lives of the group, including avalanches, potent B-A rank genjutsu sealed within traps and monuments along the way. Should these trials be passed, the party will reach a massive broken bridge bearing the gate to Mount Meru... using the scroll of seals here, it can be opened, and the REAL quest, begins!

Completed so Far:

This does not "interact with the site's setting or story, and/or permanently alter aspects of a village, culture, group or another integral part of the world" like stealing the Scroll of Seals did - it is not a Quest Mission. Consider having to parlay with or beat away some more hostile avians for passage through this treacherous place, as an example; some sort of event that might have lasting impacts.

Its a second part of a longer spanning plotline that does, it's part 2 of the part prior, so, as far as it should be concerned, it already has affected the plot. We're still carrying the scroll of seals, so it should still be part of that plotline as a direct continuation. Not to mention we're establishing an entire pocket dimension/area being Mt. Meru and a war. So I would say it does "interact with the site's setting or story, and/or."

Made some edits though.
Seeing as how no link or exposition concerning the creation of a pocket dimension is given in your Development References, the Mission Description, or Mission Details, nothing of the sort could be inferred. Please add that and/or include the implications of the mission in the description/details - then this is more admissable as Quest Mission material.

I understand this is part of a larger plot, but that alone oughtn't qualify it for being a Quest Mission. It should have significance in its own right, and simple travel (however dangerous) simply doesn't when lacking context. Please remember this concept when creating future Quest Missions.

6The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty Re: The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Mon Jan 07, 2019 2:37 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
sure, things are added

7The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Empty Re: The Nightingale [QUESTLINE] Tue Jan 08, 2019 7:34 am

Hika

Hika


D-rank
Sakamoto wrote:
Mission name: Approaching the Nightingale: The Veil of Mt. Meru
Mission rank: B
Objective: Pass the First Test
Location: Konoha
Reward: 500 Ryo + 1EP
Mission Description: With the scroll of seals in the possession of the team, the team is tasked with attempting to make their entrance into Mount Meru on the border of Konohagakure and Claw Country. The mission is to cross the mountainous path leading to their destination alive. Doing so alone is more than many have accomplished.
Development References: This is a follow on from the previous mission where the group got a hold of the forbidden scroll of the first Hokage found HERE. Now they move to the location where they intend to open it, establishing Mount Meru, a Mythical location rivalling that of Mount Myuboku hidden behind a dimensional veil and the beginning of the war between night and day.
Mission Details: En route to the mountain, there will be more than a couple obstacles in their way. The mountain peaks at the border of claw country are treacherous, and even more so with aggressors laying in wait. Flight any higher than a few meters is impossible at this altitude with the viciously high winds and saboteurs along the way will attempt to take the lives of the group, including avalanches, potent B-A rank Genjutsu sealed within traps and monuments along the way. Should these trials be passed, the party will reach a massive broken bridge bearing the gate to Mount Meru... using the scroll of seals here, it can be opened, and the REAL quest, begins! But there are scouts that guard the gate, A series of 4 C rank Owls, with C-1 Stats and fuuton techniques as well as C rank weapons will attack anyone seeking entry.

Completed so Far:
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