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Izanagi

Izanagi


D-rank
Mission name:  Dead men tell no tales
Mission rank:  C
Objective: Assassinate the target and investigate for information.
Location: Sunagakure (Strip Club/Dragon's Tongue/ Tsumi Sand Grounds.)
Reward: 450 Ryo
Mission Description: Yuuki Tenmei has assigned a special mission. The Menace wants to capture a certain piece of information resting within the hands of a simple Chunin. The vice-chief has assigned in secret a simple yet dangerous task to his son. In complete secrecy with the knowledge of no one he assigned his son to deliver a journal to one of his father's contacts. Within the journal are a list of all Jounin, Chuunin, and Chunin Shinobi within Sunagakure. However, what makes this list dangerous is it also contains a list of soft targets, which are in other words, family of each and every shinobi including extended family. The task is to follow the Vice Chief's son and wait for the right moment to make the kill. Once the boy is killed the delivery will fail. The final task in this mission is to obtain the dangerous Journal and deliver it to Yuuki Tenmei. As that information will be insanely vital in his plan to destroy villages opposing Sunagakure and make the village of the golden sands rise on top of all other villages. This follows his motto in warfare: "Before knowing thy enemy, know thy self."
Mission Details:  Yuuki Tenmei has prepared for the assassination of a Chunin and the retrieval of a Journal that contains dangerous information. This mission will prevent the meeting between the boy and the Mafia seeking out the information. The Ninja is tasked with the elimination of the boy and hiding the corpse as well as retrieving the journal from the corpse which will grant Yuuki Tenmei highly confidential and important information which will aid his quest to make Sunagakure the greatest village.


Condition: This is an assassination, the target will not follow the Shinobi to "settle things" in an empty area, and attacking the victim in public is not valid. The assassination must be done in secret and the body must be hidden or taken back to Dr. Yuki Tenmei.




Name: Tatsuya Shimizu
Age: 17
General Appearance: Blue hair and green eyes standing on a height of 5'8". The boy is a Chunin and wears his headband around his waist. 
Personality: Show off, cocky, very obedient to his father's commands. Will do anything to prove he is worthy.
Goals: To gain money, power, and fame.
Abilities: The Chunin has all stats at C2. Can use water and fire library jutsus up to B-Rank. The target also has a B-Ranked blade that can deal three inches cuts.
Items: N/A



Last edited by Zenos on Mon Aug 14, 2017 10:09 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Crime Mission in Sunagakure (Plot) Empty Re: Crime Mission in Sunagakure (Plot) Sun Aug 13, 2017 5:18 pm

Sayuri

Sayuri


D-rank
This mission is well written. My main concern though is that a Genin as a main opponent for a C-Rank mission, especially a crime one does not seem to be challenging enough. While you could certainly keep that target, I feel that there needs to be some other element of danger introduced for this to qualify as both a C-Rank Mission and a Crime mission. Under the new Mission Guidelines; as a Genin you are required to have another Genin or someone of higher rank accompany you on missions above your rank. With that rule in mind a single D-Rank opponent is not a challenge. Otherwise though, this is very well thought out.

3Crime Mission in Sunagakure (Plot) Empty Re: Crime Mission in Sunagakure (Plot) Mon Aug 14, 2017 10:10 pm

Izanagi

Izanagi


D-rank
Edited, and thank you for your quick nice response. 

Added the completion condition, strengthened the NPC several times than the original version. Thank you for your hard work Sayuri.

4Crime Mission in Sunagakure (Plot) Empty Re: Crime Mission in Sunagakure (Plot) Tue Aug 15, 2017 6:22 am

Sayuri

Sayuri


D-rank
Izanagi wrote:Mission name:  Dead men tell no tales
Mission rank:  C
Objective: Assassinate the target and investigate for information.
Location: Sunagakure (Strip Club/Dragon's Tongue/ Tsumi Sand Grounds.)
Reward: 450 Ryo
Mission Description: Yuuki Tenmei has assigned a special mission. The Menace wants to capture a certain piece of information resting within the hands of a simple Chunin. The vice-chief has assigned in secret a simple yet dangerous task to his son. In complete secrecy with the knowledge of no one he assigned his son to deliver a journal to one of his father's contacts. Within the journal are a list of all Jounin, Chuunin, and Chunin Shinobi within Sunagakure. However, what makes this list dangerous is it also contains a list of soft targets, which are in other words, family of each and every shinobi including extended family. The task is to follow the Vice Chief's son and wait for the right moment to make the kill. Once the boy is killed the delivery will fail. The final task in this mission is to obtain the dangerous Journal and deliver it to Yuuki Tenmei. As that information will be insanely vital in his plan to destroy villages opposing Sunagakure and make the village of the golden sands rise on top of all other villages. This follows his motto in warfare: "Before knowing thy enemy, know thy self."
Mission Details:  Yuuki Tenmei has prepared for the assassination of a Chunin and the retrieval of a Journal that contains dangerous information. This mission will prevent the meeting between the boy and the Mafia seeking out the information. The Ninja is tasked with the elimination of the boy and hiding the corpse as well as retrieving the journal from the corpse which will grant Yuuki Tenmei highly confidential and important information which will aid his quest to make Sunagakure the greatest village.


Condition: This is an assassination, the target will not follow the Shinobi to "settle things" in an empty area, and attacking the victim in public is not valid. The assassination must be done in secret and the body must be hidden or taken back to Dr. Yuki Tenmei.




Name: Tatsuya Shimizu
Age: 17
General Appearance: Blue hair and green eyes standing on a height of 5'8". The boy is a Chunin and wears his headband around his waist. 
Personality: Show off, cocky, very obedient to his father's commands. Will do anything to prove he is worthy.
Goals: To gain money, power, and fame.
Abilities: The Chunin has all stats at C2. Can use water and fire library jutsus up to B-Rank. The target also has a B-Ranked blade that can deal three inches cuts.
Items: N/A

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