1 Update. Thu Mar 22, 2018 5:43 am
Yōsei
S-rank
modding 2.0
EDITS MADE AT REQUEST OF AYAKASHI -
Removed ambient environment interaction from Emptiness.
Clarified wording on Authority seal. Removed item sealing capability.
Clarified wording on Existence Denial.
Clarified wording on Purification.
EDITS MADE AT REQUEST OF AYAKASHI -
Removed ambient environment interaction from Emptiness.
Clarified wording on Authority seal. Removed item sealing capability.
Clarified wording on Existence Denial.
Clarified wording on Purification.
- original modding by Sye:
- Syekren Uchiha wrote:
Emptiness Itself: For this to extend to hide from Senjutsu Sensory, you'd need Senjutsu as one of the specializations.
Added Senjutsu as an optional component that if used, adds the effect.
Unquestioned Authority: Does this work only on projectile jutsu or does it work on something like a barrier? Or even dojutsu and bukijutsu techniques?
Think of it like a giant sealing vortex, I suppose, that spends a post sucking in chakra to seal it. This is an S-rank tech with a 1 post duration that only defends, I better be able to nullify everything within the radius right?
Heartless Instinct: Am I to assume the user will remain in this stance until their death/it is deactivated as those are the only ways to break it?
Correct. Once you enter the stance you have to choose to deactivate it and it takes one post to do so. I'd consider adding a "if receive an amount of damage" type clause for breaking it too if you'd like. Just lemme know.
Hawk's Cry: This seems to be doing a lot, with blinding, breaking weapons below S-Rank immediately, and conjuring a giant thunderstorm. I'd ask for a stat check to resist blinding, and the turning to ash to be brought within the damage for A-Rank jutsu as the overkill jutsu are all S-Rank.
I have added a Perception check. It doesn't destroy weapons as an effect just to clarify, it destroys your own weapon if you try to perform this technique with a sword below S-rank so I suppose in the extremely rare case I steal someone else's A-rank sword and use Taka then yeah I guess. Bare in mind the range, speed and size are all below the maximum for its rank but either way I have reduced the damage descriptors. I've kept a section saying a direct hit will still rip you apart is that ok?
Cursed Seal of Sacrifice: This needs senjutsu in the specializations to perform it.
Done!
Existence Denial: how does a seal placed on the ground seek out a jutsu?
Go watch the scene where Jiraiya uses the Fire Sealing Method on Amaterasu. He paints the seal and it reaches out blue energy which sucks the Amaterasu back into the seal. It's the same effect. At least that's where I got the idea from.
Seal of Purification: Considering that the seal sticks around and must be destroyed, lower the effect on maintained techs to B-Rank
Done! As an additional effect I've also added it stops passive techniques.
Also I've added Namikaze clan requirements to my Technique formulas to express that they suffer from the global drawbacks of the clan's sealing style.
- S-rank:
- Name: 空虚自身 | Kūkyojishin (Emptiness Itself)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: S-rank.
Type: Stealth.
Element: None.
Range: Personal.
Specialty: Taijutsu or Ninjutsu, Senjutsu optional.
Duration: Maintained.
Cooldown: 4 posts + maintained.
Description: So named for its total obfuscation of a ninja, this technique is designed to hide the user from virtually any method of detection. It is said the only flaw in this technique's stealth capability is that the user still exists. The user must prepare this technique for one post. This jutsu requires chakra control so fine that forming chakra to perform any offensive technique or activate item abilities ends the effects immediately, as does A-rank or higher damage to the user. Once active, this technique provides a multitude of stealth effects through targeted chakra control which remove various phenomena a shinobi normally produces:
• Dampens the user's chakra signature so that it cannot be sensed or seen by S-rank or lower sensory techniques or visual prowess. If the user is a Sage (has an unlocked Sage mode) and chooses to pair this with Sage Arts, the effect extends to Senjutsu passive sensory and methods derived from its teachings.
• Controlled flow of chakra and light inside and on the skin renders the user and their clothes invisible and undetectable by the traditional senses, masking their scent and taste, sounds they make, air disturbance, bioelectrical impulses and body heat.
Name: 術式: 疑いなき権威 | Jutsushiki: Utagai Naki Ken'i (Technique Formula: Unquestioned Authority)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: S-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: 50m|15m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu|Namikaze.
Duration: 1 post.
Cooldown: 8 posts.
Description: This technique utilizes the Jutsu Formula to its ultimate defensive extreme. The user activates this technique by preparing with the correct hand seals (Snake → Boar → Ram → Dog → Boar → Monkey → Bird → Rabbit → Dog → Rat → Bird → Horse → Snake) then claps. Beneath the user's feet, a seal will formulate on the ground with a puff of white smoke. This seal is unique because the formula used in its construction has no intended method of release meaning sealed techniques are gone forever. At any time, the seal activates, projecting a 15 meter radius that seals desired techniques which come into contact with it (as well as chakra abilities of items, transformation techniques, any jutsu or chakra ability of any kind) for the duration of the post. Normally this technique will seal one SS-rank technique, two S-rank techniques or three A-rank techniques (etc) before dissipating. This seal can be infused with additional chakra to increase its defensive prowess; in addition to what it normally would defend against, by paying chakra equal to the cost of another technique minus ten (minimum five) that comes into contact with this jutsu, it is capable of sealing that away as well.
- A-rank:
- Name: 無情な本能 | Mujōna Hon'nō (Heartless Instinct)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: A-rank.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: None.
Range: Personal.
Specialty: Taijutsu or Ninjutsu.
Duration: Maintained.
Cooldown: 2 posts + maintained.
Description: A technique born from the mastery of body and mind. The user performs the snake hand seal and then closes their eyes, falling into a deep meditative trance. While active, this technique puts the user into a complete state of sensory deprivation, entirely suppressing conscious thought and perception. While in this stance, the user's body is hyper-aware, capable of sensing even the most minute changes in the environment or chakra within 50-meters. While the user's consciousness is completely suppressed, their body acts on instinct in its place, sacrificing certain aspects of the mind to allow the body's natural senses to surpass any known standards. While active, the user may not perform any non-Taijutsu techniques (and is limited to one per post). Because the user has no active thought and does not experience a sensation of any kind, the effects of Genjutsu are rendered invalid while this technique is active. This technique cannot be activated to remove Genjutsu already in effect. Leaving the trance takes one post.
Name: 封印術: 不許可 | Fūinjutsu: Motoka (Sealing Technique: Revoke Permission) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: A-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: 25m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu.
Duration: Instant + 4 posts.
Cooldown: 4 posts.
Description: First the required hand seals (Dragon → Tiger → Bird) and then the user places a seal through touch onto themselves, a desired object or surface, once placed, the seal can be activated provided the user is within 25-meters of it. When triggered, the seal functions as a moderate defensive tool; sealing a single A-rank technique, two B-rank techniques or three C-rank techniques. The seal's secondary effect is to unseal the stored techniques' chakra in controlled, elemental configurations. These emissions create a hazy white smoke around the seal with a 20-meter radius within which techniques possessing elemental natures matching the natures of techniques sealed by this jutsu may not be used.
Name: 泣く鷹 | Naku Taka (Hawk's Cry)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: A-rank.
Type: Offensive.
Element: Raiton.
Range: 60m|30m
Specialty: Bukijutsu.
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 6 posts.
Description: Once the signature technique of a ghost who lived in the Land of Fire, the Taka is so named for the sound it makes when it is unleashed; so much Raiton chakra is generated by this jutsu that when it is used it produces an unearthly sound which from a distance resembles a hawk's cry. This sound can be heard for miles. The user begins by focusing a supreme amount of chakra into a sheathed blade, collecting it until the chakra is at the point of overflowing. At this point, any sword below S-rank is completely destroyed by the chakra. When drawn, the chakra is released in a chosen direction as a blinding wave of roiling thunderbolts; it is so bright that another ninja with Perception below S-3 looking at the initial flash will be blinded for one post. The wave is 30 meters wide and 3 meters high, comprised of individual strands of super-compressed lightning capable of inflicting third-degree electrical burns and shattering bones with force on impact. At its full force, a direct hit from this technique will tear a person into pieces. The wave travels at 40 meters per second up to its maximum distance of 60 meters.
Name: 呪印犠牲 | Juingisei (Cursed Seal of Sacrifice)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: A-rank.
Type: Offensive.
Element: None.
Range: Touch.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu|Senjutsu.
Duration: 1 post + maintained.
Cooldown: Thread.
Description: To prepare this technique, the user has a seal tattooed on their body to perform it. As an additional pre-requisite, the user must be a Sage with sage mode active. On the post that this technique is prepared, the user seals a generous fifty chakra (in addition to activation cost) within the Cursed Seal; on this post, the technique may not be activated. When activated, the seal expands to cover the user's body with intricate scripture while releasing the stored chakra from the seal all over the body as an amber aura. The aura projected takes the form of the user's Sage affinity. The aura provides a number of benefits; counting as a light armor of its rank as well as allowing the user to extend the effective reach of their basic strikes by extending the aura up to 5-meters at a rate of 25-meters-per-second and allowing the user to confer the effects of an A-rank offensive technique to a single basic strike per post for 10 chakra. This jutsu is maintained, and its costs paid using the stored chakra at their normal costs; however, once the stored chakra runs out, this technique costs double its normal cost to maintain. If this technique ends before the stored chakra is consumed, it is not refunded to the user.
- B-rank:
- Name: 予知の構え | Yochi no Kamae (Predictive Stance) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: B-rank.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: None.
Range: Personal.
Specialty: Taijutsu or Ninjutsu.
Duration: Maintained.
Cooldown: 2 posts + maintained.
Description: Derived from the principals of a legendary technique, this jutsu begins by the user closing their eyes and focusing chakra into them. When they open their eyes, they will take on a pale blue glow. This sensory technique enhances vision, granting +2 tiers to the user's reaction time as well as allowing them to see chakra natures within 30-meters, even through objects. While active, the user's eyes are especially vulnerable to chakra based techniques designed to blind or otherwise impair vision through brightness and they act as if they are one rank higher in effectiveness.
Name: 術式: 劇的な逆転 | Jutsushiki: Gekitekina Gyakuten (Technique Formula: Spirited Reversing) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: B-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: Touch|40m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu|Namikaze.
Duration: 1 post|Instant.
Cooldown: 2 posts.
Description: The seals that are used to perform this technique are placed on the users fingers and hands, after they have been placed they can be activated at will. By touching a technique with the seals on their hand, they can seal a single technique or item of B-rank or below and then unseal it from the seals on the opposite hand as a harmless flow of chakra. If the sealed object was a projectile, it will be released in the same state of motion as when it was sealed. Redirected techniques lose two ranks of offensive effectiveness. Releasing sealed techniques or items costs an additional five chakra.
Name: 抑圧意志の封 | Yokuatsu Ishi no Fū. (Will Oppressing Seal) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: B-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: 50m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu.
Duration: 1 post.
Cooldown: 3 posts.
Description: The user performs a series of prerequisite hand seals (Ram → Bird → Dragon) and then places a seal which releases chakra as bright blue lights. This raw chakra is used to hunt and snuff out other jutsu by surrounding them with the seal's chakra and carrying them back to the origin point to be sealed. It functions as a standard defensive technique; reducing a single A-rank technique's power by two ranks, stopping two B-rank or three C-rank techniques within 50-meters of its location.
Name: 記憶の消失 | Kioku no Shōshitsu (Vanish into Memory) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: B-rank.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: None.
Range: Personal.
Specialty: Taijutsu or Ninjutsu.
Duration: 1 post.
Cooldown: 3 posts.
Description: Kioku is a simple Taijutsu technique designed to briefly obscure the user and their chakra from sight while moving them to a new location. The user performs this technique in conjunction with another movement, enhancing their speed by 20-meters per second up to a distance of 20-meters and flowing chakra into their body. This chakra cloaks the user, rendering them invisible for the duration of the post. This technique also briefly suppresses the user's chakra signature, though this effect ends after the initial enhanced movement, after which chakra sensory techniques will continue to detect the user normally. The invisibility effect is broken by performing a technique of any kind.
Name: 火遁: 猛火斉射 | Katon: Mōka Seisha (Fire Style: Onslaught of Flames) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: B-rank.
Type: Offensive.
Element: Katon.
Range: 50m.
Specialty: Bukijutsu.
Duration: 2 posts + maintained.
Cooldown: 5 posts + maintained.
Description: A simple technique to add additional range to a swordsman's arsenal, this jutsu coats the user's weapons in a potent flame aura which on its own, enhances a weapon's damage by adding second degree burns to wounds inflicted by it. While this technique is active, the user can, twice per post, launch the roaring fire from their blade as a projectile of slicing flame. The projectiles travel at 30-meters per second and cause major 2nd-degree burns on impact as well as setting flammable objects on fire. The concussive force behind these projectiles also causes major bruising. Each blast counts as a C-rank jutsu for interacting with defensive techniques. A skilled user (Bukijutsu spec A-rank or higher) can throw these blasts with a curve of up to 30 degrees.
Name: 本質の散乱封 | Honshitsu no Sanran-fū (Scattering Nature Seal) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: B-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: 30m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu.
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 3 posts.
Description: This seal's formula is designed only to target techniques with advanced elemental natures. After placing the seal, it can be activated to unravel the parent chakra natures of advanced elements, sealing them separately. As such, this technique can only be used against techniques with advanced elemental natures that have two or more constituent elements; against so, it is doubly effective. This technique is capable of reducing the power of a single S-rank technique by two ranks, sealing two A-rank techniques or three B-rank techniques provided all techniques sealed meet this jutsu's criteria.
- C-rank:
- Name: 雷遁: 残忍な稲妻 | Raiton: Zan'nin'na Inazuma (Lightning Style: Vicious Lightning) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: C-rank.
Type: Offensive.
Element: Raiton.
Range: Personal.
Specialty: Bukijutsu or Taijutsu.
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 3 posts.
Description: This technique requires no preparation or hand seals to perform, as it is designed to be seamlessly woven into combat. The user sends a chaotic bolt of charged Raiton chakra from their arm into a held weapon, increasing the speed of the next basic strike by 20-meters per second by allowing their sword and arm to weave through the air where the lightning strikes. This technique creates a loud electrical discharge noise and flash of light.
Name: 封印術: 存在否定 | Fūinjutsu: Sonzai Hitei (Sealing Technique: Existence Denial)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: C-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: 30m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu.
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 3 posts.
Description: A simple defensive seal designed to deal with problematic techniques in a precise manner. By performing the Snake hand seal, the user places a seal beneath their feet which emits a blue vapor capable of traveling at 20-meters per second which envelops the chosen tehcnique and seals a single technique of B-rank or below within 30-meters. If this technique is prepared for a post before it is used, the seal can be attuned to seal a specific technique the user has seen; if it is, then its sealing capability is increased by one rank (seals one A-rank or lower).
Name: 浄化の印章 | Jōka no Inshō (Seal of Purification)
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: C-rank.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: None.
Range: 30m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu.
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 4 posts.
Description: The user gathers chakra in their hands or in a held item or weapon in order to craft the seal used in this technique. When activated, the chakra lurches out at a speed of 20-meters per second to create the seal on an intended target within 30-meters. If successful, the 6x6" seal is created on the victim's stomach. This seal renders fine chakra control impossible by the affected shinobi, ceasing the effects of any maintainable techniques (as well as passives) of B-rank or lower and making the ninja unable to activate maintainable or passive techniques as long as the seal remains. The seal can be destroyed by 2nd-degree tissue damage to at least half the area, or C-rank or higher defensive Fūinjutsu or Medical Ninjutsu.
- D-rank:
- Name: 術式: 失跡 | Jutsushiki: Shisseki (Technique Formula: Vanishing) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: D-rank.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: None.
Range: 20m.
Specialty: Fūinjutsu|Namikaze.
Duration: 1 post.
Cooldown: 2 posts.
Description: Primarily used as a way to transport or sneak items across short distances undetected. This formula requires two seals to be placed before it can be activated, touch on any solid surface places seals. Once placed, one of the seals may be activated to seal a chosen item. Then, as long as the seals are within 20-meters of one another, the user may activate the second seal at any time to release the sealed item at its location.
Name: 剣術: 巧みな放逐 | Kenjutsu: Takumina Hōchiku (Sword Technique: Deft Parry) APPROVED
Canon/Custom: Custom.
Rank: D-rank.
Type: Defensive.
Element: None.
Range: Personal.
Specialty: Bukijutsu.
Duration: Instant.
Cooldown: 2 posts.
Description: This simple sword fighting technique is one of the most basic uses of Bukijutsu. By empowering a defensive maneuver with chakra, the user enhances their blade's speed by 15-meters per second to parry with surprising quickness. This technique also functions as a defensive technique when interacting with jutsu, but only blocks a single C-rank or lower technique.
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