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Kurai

Kurai


D-rank
You can see everything, except for what is within...

Kurai often felt the only way to rectify this was to step out of himself and look at the grandiose of the Iwagakure. Even more effective for him, was engaging with another. In these times people were always in danger of being fatally annoyed by the story teller. His pen sought and would leech onto any story. He would strive to place himself where they were, and help them to express what he felt they could not... sounds overbearing, it is. A necessary flaw of a creative perfectionist. 

He stood atop the cliff, studying what was visible of Iwagakure, his home, his refugee. This place bore so many memories. So many adventures. This was not enough to quench the insatiable appetite of Kurai. He decided to come to this spot to pray, and to find an outlet to exercise his creativity. What would his next story be? Who would it feature? 

The people in Kurai's life were like the clouds that bubbled in the heavens. When they are present, he felt a shadow projected, but it was only after the sorrow brought by the scorching sun that he missed their fluffy and invasive presence. A cloud was rolling in now, was a sign of a visitor. He surely hoped so. Kurai knelt down, took out a round relic with a chain attached. He grasped it in both hands and bowed his head. 

He murmured indistinctly as the clouds cooled his head. Kurai began to wobble near the edge of the cliff. The forecast was so soothing, he felt himself falling asleep. Unbeknownst to Kurai, a scorpion was inching closer to him. Kurai was extremely afraid of just about any animal. The chuunin would hear the scratching of the earth, his eyes were pried open to find the scorpion to his side. Out of instinct he scurried in panic, and lost his balance over the cliff!

His shaking eyes stared up at his hands turning red. The scorpion peered over. Kurai squeezed his eyes  shut and the relic in his left hand in response. His mind was now racing, formulating multiple plans to escape the consequences of his untimely slip. The clouds were still hanging over his head.


WC: 370

Kuni

Kuni


D-rank
Iwagakure had few, if any, tourist attractions. Fortunately, Kuni found herself atop one such attraction, hailed as a Herculean landmark of nature with how it rose sharply from the ground – a result of millions of years of tectonic activity beneath the surface that legend claimed spurred the rise of the Kanetsu, inspiring their infamous mastery over lava.

Standing on one of the outcroppings, Kuni paid no heed to the torrent of trivia that battered her mind. The residents of Iwagakure, while patriotic, didn’t always amount to the company she confided in. The only noise in the village she tolerated were the grunts and cheery laughter that summed up the Rock Pit. Even then, Tokotomi was the only reason it was partly bearable. The patrons… not so much.

Out here in the wild though, surrounded by nothing but the designs of mother nature, Kuni felt freer. She wasn’t a local of Iwagakure; she didn’t understand the spirit that ran through most of the shinobi and kunoichi. She understood the training and even relished in it, but the ideology that burned in her peers’ heads… those were a mystery. It was something intrinsic, something one felt. It was something that would be foreign so long as your blood was to Iwagakure’s soil.

Kuni suspected the only reason she hadn’t been held back for her foreign blood was the grades that defended her worth during graduation.
Whatever. She would never understand Iwagakure, the same way she would never come to understand people. Not her parents, not her friends and not the village. Much simpler to just remain in the humble embrace of nature.

It was only out of sheer chance that Kuni’s neck craned up to inhale the sights of Iwagakure’s unusually clear skies. Her eyelids widened when she saw a speck of dark against the ocean of blue hanging over her head. His dropping vector would lead him straight over the edge of her own cliff, likely having slipped from his own several dozen meters up.

Idiot.

Kuni launched herself forward just as his figure accelerated past her, cursing the size of Iwagakure’s brains if they could accomplish something so phenomenal. Her right hand latched onto his wrist – whichever of them – as her body met the rocky surface with a thud.

Assuming the person didn’t have fantastical ideas of struggling, she would pull him over the edge where he could kiss the sturdy earth beneath for fear of his acquaintance with free falling. Kuni wouldn’t have cared; landing on her bottom she would simply take a moment to catch her breath, repeating the idiocy of the man before her in her head.  

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Kurai

Kurai


D-rank
The muscles in his arms began to flex to their capacity, it would become apparent that brute strength would not win the day. Kurai snapped his eyes shot again. Once he reopened them, just as he began to mold chakra in his left hand... he felt something coil around his wrist. The scorpion ... no... that is not it...

His eyes fought to penetrate the glare of the sun obscuring his view of what was snaking around his wrist. Once the glare deteriorated, it allowed Kurai to make the appearance of another shinobi. The girl was helping him up. Kurai immediately relaxed his body, and moved his body in sync with hers, maximizing the momentum in order to make it easier for her to pull him up. Finally, Kurai was back on stable ground, and he had this girl to thank... but for some reason Kurai could not speak. He could only lie on his side staring at the girl. His face turned red with embarrassment, a new feeling for Kurai indeed. The ninja love over the cliff and scooted further away, after turning his head he realized he was much closer to the girl now. Kurai pushed himself up and offered his hand to the girl. "Thank you. Please let me return the favor."

Kurai could not believe this shinobi happened to be here just in time. "I could not have picked a better time to fall it seems. I am Han Kurai, despite my clumsiness, I am a shinobi. What's your name?"

WC: 254/624

Kuni

Kuni


D-rank
Perhaps it was the daze of the moment or the pounding of blood like a pair of war drums beating at her temples but Kuni hadn’t realized exactly how close she was to the boy she’d saved. Her left middle finger was still slowly massaging the rush beyond her conscious mind when a shadow loomed over her, an arm outstretched with gratuitous intentions.

“Thank you. Please let me return the favour.”

Kuni looked to the side, defiantly refusing to accept his help even though her right hand clasped firmly onto his. With a small tug not uncommon for someone of her profession she dragged herself to her feet, eyes and head still averted to her left with not a look of shame but mild annoyance painted onto her features.

“I could not have picked a better time to fall, it seems. I am Han Kurai,” he introduced. “Despite my clumsiness, I am a shinobi. What’s your name?”

Nonchalantly, Kuni disentangled her hand from his. Her head righted itself as her eyes swept past his figure before they rose and stared into his, hazel brown meeting onyx black. “I’m Kuni,” she offered blandly. Her eyes shot off into the distance – whether breaking the stare or not – as she added, “I’m surprised you’re a shinobi, in spite of your clumsiness,” she mentioned, the words a bit unfriendly though the tone neutral. “What were you doing all the way up there that you nearly died?”

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Kurai

Kurai


D-rank
Kuni was her name... Kurai would laugh off her remarks and dusted himself off. Perhaps if Kuni had not just saved him, her sharp tongue might prick his skin. But as it stood, he could not form an unfavorable thought of her. Naturally, she wanted to know what was so important that he almost lost his life. My purpose Kurai thought to himself. 

He was excited to share his reason for being up here, but quelled his passion for spiritualism slightly. "I came up here to pray. I seek spiritual guidance to help me find a muse for my poetry." Kurai's eyes became softer, as his mind wondered if she could be a muse to him. He wondered where she was from, why they had not met. The net of her life that he wanted to weave, was complicated, and would take patience, which was not necessarily Kurai's strength. 

Towering over Kuni slightly, Kurai took in Kuni's appearance. She had long dark orange hair. Unfortunately he could not track her eyes down, as they frequently darted off into space, showing her annoyance with being pulled into pulling some one up. Kurai's mind tried to paint a more vivid picture of Kuni. On the surface, she took a disliking to having to help Kurai, giving Kurai the impression, that she herself did not like assistance and would be happy as long as she was independent.

So long as she could say, "I did it, without needing anyone else...", she might be content. 

The thought caused him to impulsively spurt out, "Where are you from?.... I have never seen you on this cliff before.

Kurai was aware of the slight tension. He wondered if he could break the ice calmly, or would the rifts prove disastrous.

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Kuni

Kuni


D-rank
Kuni’s eyes narrowed slightly with every laugh that came through his lips. It almost seemed as if he treated life as a game.

“I came up here to pray,” he responded when prompted. “I seek spiritual guidance to help me find a muse for my poetry.”

He seemed a bit more serious with his answer than when she was busy jabbing his profession. Or maybe she was imagining things. His voice did seem more spirited, pun unintended. The muscles loosening around his eyes showed familiarity and comfort with the hobby and outlook that accompanied this boy’s otherwise bloody present.

There were so many things wrong with his answer Kuni had no idea where to begin.

Deciding to avoid taking the turn into weird junction with him, Kuni ignored his answer. There was little good to be found from digging further into someone praying at the top of a cliff for inspiration to write poetry. Instead, she let an air of silence drift between them before he once again killed the peace.

“Where are you from? I have never seen you on this cliff before.”

“Nothing much. I’m from Iwagakure,” she shared. She didn’t see the immediate harm from divulging something so basic. As the words left her mouth, she turned to look at the village that sprawled just a stone’s throw away. The view reminded her of a similar scene she once saw in an Academy textbook. But, rather then the grounded village of Iwagakure, the pages printed the supposed magnificence of Konohagakure laid bare before the camera from atop the Hokage monument.

Like with most other things, Kuni didn’t really have much of an opinion for even that national treasure.

She inhaled noticeably, breathing in the mountain air. It didn’t suffer from the dust kicked up by thousands of pedestrians dragging their feet along the village streets, which was a welcome change to the kunoichi.

Assuming he hadn’t already interrupted her at this point, she would return a question, more so out of necessity than interest: “What poetry do you work on?”

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Kurai

Kurai


D-rank
Kurai pondered the girl's response.

So she is from Iwagakure... hmmm. 

Kurai thought about pressing deeper, but she flung a question back at him. One pertaining to the content of his poetry. Kurai stared out over the cliff. The sight of Iwagakure was prevalent in so much of his prose. 

"The content can be summed up as adventurous, but my goal is to do more than entertain."

Kurai peaked back over the cliff, he could hear the indistinct chatter and rustling of the village below. "Like any story teller, I draw on my experience and the experience of others."

"So Kuni, do you have any hobbies?"

What activities could possibly captivate Kuni? Other than being from Iwagakure, what shaped her views? Other than knowing a person's family history, their hobbies might be the next best indicator. So far, she was very blunt and serious, so much he could not picture any layers to her. 

She is a closed book.


This, to an avid reader was highly intriguing. It was equivalent to having to wait weeks before moving on to the next page. The mysterious Kuni had Kurai hooked. Perhaps, if they had something in common, he could secure another meeting in a different place. At the very least, fate would have them meet again.

Kuni

Kuni


D-rank
“The content can be summed up as adventurous, but my goal is to do more than entertain.”

Maybe his words were meant to be informative, in that cryptic, fittingly poetic way reminiscent of classical literature that Kuni used to stumble on back in the Imaeda mansion, but each syllable rang hollow in her ears. Adventure and entertainment were foreign in her vocabulary; the only adventure she tasted was the occasional courier mission to the border and the entertainment… Iwa’s underground offered some consolation in that direction.

Then again, it was likely more entertaining for Yachi than it was for her. Mafia were such perverts.

From where they stood, Kurai noticeably looked over the cliff, taking in the sensations of the village that even at this height was impossible to drown out, a testament to the life within each citizen of the Village Hidden in the Stone. Idly Kuni drew a distinction with how it must’ve felt like watching one’s city sprawl out from beneath your feet; perhaps most Iwagakure-born shinobi contained no shortage of pride when presented with such a view.

For her though, it was simply another city.

“Like any story teller, I draw on my experience and the experience of others.”

Again, words that rang hollow to the girl who couldn’t relate to his idealistic worldview. Perhaps idealistic was overexaggerating his behavior. Yet faced with such a statement, ‘like any storyteller’, as Kurai had so freely put it, as if such a comparison should’ve enlightened her or spoken volumes, Kuni couldn’t bring herself to relate.

“So Kuni, do you have any hobbies?”

Her lips stretched thin for a fraction of a moment. Hobbies were another contentious topic. Did training count as a hobby? It was all she found herself doing but even closed off as she was, the Koyanagi wasn’t delusional; the rush, the satisfaction of pulling no punches against the clay and straw replicas erected for their training wasn’t the gratification of a hobby. It ran more along the lines of knowing should her father want her back in his little mansion, she could run the **** away again.

“Not really, no,” she answered with honesty. “I don’t have time for those things. What about you? Anything else apart from… well…” Kuni eyed him with slight uncertainty, again the unfamiliarity with poetry as a passion getting to the antisocial girl. That?”

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Kurai

Kurai


D-rank
Information was slow to be pulled from Kuni, to be expected. Most shinobi Kurai encountered were this way. However, there was always one means of extracted information from a shinobi, and that was fighting. Typically, the pride of a shinobi would enable them to express their inner feelings in battle. Most were skilled at concealing information in battle, but eventually their fist would tell the tale. Kuni asked if Kurai had any other hobbies besides... 'that'.

Kurai clenched his fist, causing the leather on the gloves to emit a tightening sound. "I have many things I pursue, but if we are strictly talking about hobbies, there is only one thing that comes to mind. Training and fighting. My passion is ..." Kurai paused, as even he was uncomfortable revealing such idealistic beliefs... "My passion is to bring peace to the world. Help everyone resolve issues by using their words, and work to understand differing beliefs. However, in order to do that, you must know people. Till this day, I have not found a better method to understanding another person, than by engaging in physical combat. It is spiritual if you ask me." 

Kurai smiled, with a tinge of embarrassment invading his smile. Not just shinobi, but people in general were jaded, and often would laugh at these ideologies. It was clearly naive to some, and Kurai could not fault them for their perspective. However, he was confident he had a deeper source of wisdom. When the world's heart is softened, he would penetrate their harsh and archaic perspective. 

"I know you have more to say, Kuni. So what do you say to a friendly spar? "

Kurai relaxed his hand. His loose shirt was not buttoned all the way, and fluttered in the gentle breeze. His pouch was secured on his backside. If she accepted, "Follow me, there is a clearer patch of earth, more fitting for a spar."

The two would quickly arrive to a clearing, it was undulating with gravel but it was still good land to fight on. It was not a perfect circle, but it was approximately 15 meters in diameter. On the outskirts was an audience of wilting trees that were very skinny. In the midst were a few strong wide trees that could provide sufficient cover. Kurai moved to the middle to the middle. He widened his stance making a mark in the gravel. He would observe what was to transpire next keenly, but he was willing to strike first if his comrade was not of that cloth. 

However, would Kuni accept this challenge or would she prove even more mysterious and deprive Kurai of seeing what she is like in combat. Or would Kurai finally see a new side of her, or would her fighting style merely be an extension of her aloof and frank demeanor.

Kuni

Kuni


D-rank
Had Kurai expected her to miss the subtle clench of his fist, he had miscalculated. Perhaps her words cut greater than she’d expected, but detached as she was his words were imperceptible to her, just as how one who’d never lost a parent would fail to sympathise with those around him grieving over a recent – or not so recent – loss.

“I have many things I pursue,” Kurai said, with malice suspiciously absent from his tone. “But if we are strictly talking about hobbies, there is only one thing that comes to mind. Training and fighting.”

Their similarities didn’t come as a surprise to Kuni, having kept open the possibility that Kurai, too, indulged in the rigorous training that had earned him his career. Of course, there was a small part of her that admitted to the surprise of embracing training, but it wasn’t one she would entertain. Rather than inform her, this information seemed to follow the general rule of their meeting, confusing her even more. For someone who was so stereotypically peaceful, Kuni had not expected fighting to fall under his past time.

“My passion…” he continued. “My passion is to bring peace to the world.”

That brought an eye roll.

“Help everyone resolve issues by using their words, and work to understand differing beliefs. However, in order to do that, you must know people. Till this day, I have not found a better method to understanding another person, than by engaging in physical combat. It is spiritual, if you ask me.”

Kuni realized she really didn’t understand spirituality then.

The Koyanagi found his rhetoric idealistic. Optimistic. Maybe even naïve. To fight for her own survival, to fend for herself and make sure she could secure her future as a Koyanagi instead of an Imaeda – that was why she dulled dozens of shuriken on any one of Iwagakure’s training fields every week. It wasn’t to understand someone and help them reach a utopia where words were enough to defuse tempers and humble prides.

“I know you have more to say, Kuni.” Had she been that easy to read? “So what do you say to a friendly spar?”  

She eyed him out of the corner of her eye, a distrusting look but also one presenting a challenge. It was commonplace for ninja to invite each other to friendly spars, particularly if they both wore the same headband, but Kuni’s concern lay more in Kurai’s intentions than his suggestion. She would be the last to admit she didn’t find his character interestingly enigmatic, but the thrill of mysteries could be accompanied by lurking dangers.

No, she was not paranoid.

Regardless, she saw little harm in exchanging blows with Kurai, giving a visible, but slowed, controlled and possibly also hesitant, nod.

“Follow me, there is a clearer patch of earth, more fitting for a spar.”

The area he led them to was a patch of gravel, fifteen meters in diameter, surrounded by wilting trees while housing several within it. Kurai moved to the middle and slipped into his stance. Kuni watched from the edge, eyes drinking in her surroundings as a small smile – anxiety for the upcoming spar no doubt – made its way onto her lips. Even without her rapier close by, she wouldn’t turn up the opportunity to test Kurai’s waters.

It quickly faded into a focused frown as the girl dropped into her own stance, before rushing straight towards her opponent. If he didn’t react, she’d begin their bout with a raised right leg, knee aimed for his left rib.

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Kurai

Kurai


D-rank
Kurai got his wish. He was anxious to see her style. They walked to the clearing to test each other's ability. As they faced off, she wasted little time before rushing forward. It was bold but calculating at the same time. Kuni raised her right leg, and aimed at a knee at his ribs. It was a solid attack. Kurai absorbed the contact and used it to initiate a pseudo cartwheel over her right leg and to his left. Once his left hand slammed on the ground, he used his coordination to draw a kunai quickly and throw it at the back of her left calf.

If the kunai struck her leg, he would come out of a crouched stance to uncoil a quick right cross for her face. If the kunai strike was unsuccessful, he would go into a somersault and quickly hopped backwards a few feet. He would throw 3 senbon at Kuni's chest as he skipped back simultaneously.

From Kurai extensive taijutsu training, he had a feeling, hand to hand combat was not her specialty. She is holding back, let's she how she reacts now.

If Kurai continued with the right cross, he could further analyze her taijutsu. If not, he could the senbon as a distraction perhaps. He was still not completely sure how to continue, or what type of plan to forumulate.

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