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Kakushi Arashi

Kakushi Arashi


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Started writing this a few days ago, finished the first part today. It tells the story of my character, Kakushi, as if he were in the original Naruto anime/manga. Since I intend to incorporate canon characters, this story is set in the original timeline. Please read and give constructive criticism!

By My Sword-Part I-The Fire Awakened:

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