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1Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Empty Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Thu Sep 22, 2016 2:10 pm

Yurei

Yurei


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Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] 2w7l4yx

Name: Mii the Mummy
Species: Artifical Creature [Standard Combat Pet]
Rank: E
Specializations: Nin/ Tai
Elements: -

Appearance: Mii has large round white eyes and is wrapped in white linen cloth that acts like a second skin. Mii is currently only around four inches(10cm) tall and weighs two pounds (0.9kg). Underneath the cloth, Mii has a pitch black appearance that seems to absorb all light and when their mouth opens, they show off a snake like tongue and sharp little fangs that are only half an inch (1cm). On their small hands are retractable claws similar to those of felines which are half an inch (1cm) long.

Personality: Mii is a pure hearted creature who loves Yasuo dearly, their creator who made them in a makeshift lab. They enjoy trying to help Yasuo with whatever they could despite their small stature so they often trail behind Yasuo or sits on their shoulder. In the face of others, they grow quite scared and tried to hide however living on the manner forced them to face their fears so they grew to be somewhat comfortable around the spiders although Mama and Sero scare them a bit still even after this time though towards Sero it is a bit more towards jealousy as they are envious of the amount of care that Yasuo holds for Sero, feeling the man was unworthy of it and they could make Yasuo happy unlike the Osada. So every once in awhile they will try to stand up to Sero who still doesn’t take them seriously no matter what much to Mii’s dismay. Despite the resentment they hold towards Sero, Mii respects him to a certain degree for the strength he holds so they aspire to be just as strong, if not stronger one day to protect Yasuo and fight by their side therefore they grow a bit aggressive during battle due to their obsessive nature thus when they speak, it is not in the cute soft voice they use with Yasuo, but deep, guttural, and chilling like a demonic possession.
Spoiler:

Techniques:

*Claws and fangs are considered weapons that do one rank less damage than their current rank

Stats: STR +2, REA/PER/END -1, SPD +1



Last edited by Yasuo on Fri Sep 23, 2016 3:55 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Empty Re: Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Fri Sep 23, 2016 10:42 am

Harue

Harue


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1) I took a closer look at the Pet and Seijutsu rules, and it states that it has to be an animal companion. I'm sorry for bringing your hopes up regarding this.
Spoiler:
That being said, this is a wonderfully written piece, and I see no reason why a mummy created in a laboratory can logically not be applied for as a pet. As such, I'm allowing this on a probationary basis. On what conditions it may be rescinded is yet to be determined, but up till that point, as long as this pet doesn't act beyond what is normally permitted for a Standard Combat Pet, I see no reason why we cannot treat it as such.

2) I'll need you to edit Mii's height and weight so they're presented in metric. You can keep the imperial measurements if you want, but the metric measurements must be provided, and will be used as the basis of comparison rather than the imperial system, as it's a non-damage measurement.

3) If you could remove the History section, that would be greatly appreciated. I understand it's to go into depth about Mii's creation, but unfortunately we need to first prioritise the Pet Template over creative writing. As such, please move it into spoilers within Personality.

4) Oh my god he's just so cute xD



That should be all for now.

3Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Empty Re: Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Sat Sep 24, 2016 11:34 am

Harue

Harue


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Yasuo wrote:
Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] 2w7l4yx

Name: Mii the Mummy
Species: Artifical Creature [Standard Combat Pet]
Rank: E
Specializations: Nin/ Tai
Elements: -

Appearance: Mii has large round white eyes and is wrapped in white linen cloth that acts like a second skin. Mii is currently only around four inches(10cm) tall and weighs two pounds (0.9kg). Underneath the cloth, Mii has a pitch black appearance that seems to absorb all light and when their mouth opens, they show off a snake like tongue and sharp little fangs that are only half an inch (1cm). On their small hands are retractable claws similar to those of felines which are half an inch (1cm) long.

Personality: Mii is a pure hearted creature who loves Yasuo dearly, their creator who made them in a makeshift lab. They enjoy trying to help Yasuo with whatever they could despite their small stature so they often trail behind Yasuo or sits on their shoulder. In the face of others, they grow quite scared and tried to hide however living on the manner forced them to face their fears so they grew to be somewhat comfortable around the spiders although Mama and Sero scare them a bit still even after this time though towards Sero it is a bit more towards jealousy as they are envious of the amount of care that Yasuo holds for Sero, feeling the man was unworthy of it and they could make Yasuo happy unlike the Osada. So every once in awhile they will try to stand up to Sero who still doesn’t take them seriously no matter what much to Mii’s dismay. Despite the resentment they hold towards Sero, Mii respects him to a certain degree for the strength he holds so they aspire to be just as strong, if not stronger one day to protect Yasuo and fight by their side therefore they grow a bit aggressive during battle due to their obsessive nature thus when they speak, it is not in the cute soft voice they use with Yasuo, but deep, guttural, and chilling like a demonic possession.
Spoiler:

Techniques:


*Claws and fangs are considered weapons that do one rank less damage than their current rank


Stats: STR +2, REA/PER/END -1, SPD +1
Approved provisionally for 1500 ryo.

4Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Empty Re: Mii the Mummy [E-rank Pet] Mon Sep 26, 2016 9:56 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


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Frozen until further notice.

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