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1Katonrai clan Empty Katonrai clan Mon Sep 12, 2016 8:51 pm

Lin

Lin


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Symbol: Katonrai clan Img-thing?


Clan: Katonrai

Kekkei Genkai: Explosive Lightning

Elements: Primary: Raiton. Secondary: Katon

Specialization: Ninjutsu

Location: Kumogakure

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Members: (Members of the clan can be updated here)

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Addendum: the abilities of the Katonrai clan that are kekkei genkai have this detriment: if the weather is: rainy, their effects are lessened by one damage rank to a minimum of no damage dealt to the enemy. The Katonrai kekkei genkai cannot be used underwater, if used underwater, they deal the damaging effects to the caster, and if an area of effect is on the spell, they are affected by the blast. When it is raining their abilities move 5m/s slower per tier of the jutsu. This cannot make the jutsu move slower than 1m/s

2Katonrai clan Empty Re: Katonrai clan Wed Sep 14, 2016 8:14 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


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I don't mean to offend you, but i would spend some time looking at some other clans and seeing how they are constructed and take another attempt at looking at how your kekkei genkai is worded. You've given very little specifics throughout the entire app.

Though I 'can' see what you're trying to do, and here is my suggestion, as a friend. Make your character a member of the Natake Clan, and use your beginning jutsu to formulate an 'alternate' raiton colour, which fuses the element with heat (katon) which your character will also have. Which causes the raiton to 'charge' what it hits with heat and causing it to explode after a short delay. (thus, anything you electrocute blows up). The symbiotic relationship with the lightning as well as your characters appearance / the clan history you have here you can tie into your own families' history / personal fluff and appearance.

I think that is your best option as a new player here for now until you learn the roped.

Just my suggestion.

Though, if you are dead set on this, i am more than happy to go through this with you until it is up to par. I just thought to give you the option. :)

(cos that's what i would do.)

3Katonrai clan Empty Re: Katonrai clan Wed Sep 14, 2016 10:36 am

Lin

Lin


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I would really like the long range jutsu of having explosive lightning and being a mid-backline supporter with offensive and medical ninjutsu. So I would enjoy making the effort to bring this up to par if it's not too much trouble for you! I looked at the Natake clan and thought about it, but there wasn't anything about a long-mid range in there that I could see.

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