Name: Kyōfu
Species: Akuma no Kenjutsu (Standard Combat Pet), requires Bukijutsu (Swordsmanship)
Rank: E-Rank
Specializations: Bukijutsu (Swordsmanship)
Elements: N/A
Appearance: All in all, the blade is 140cm from pommel to tip. The hilt itself is 30cm to the base of the weapon, with the pommel making up roughly 5cm of that number. Rough, makedo bandaging twirl up along the hilt to allow for more grip. The 'blade', which is the tooth of a rather impressive shark found a moderate distance from Kirigakure in the waters, fashioned primarily in the ritual for usage by Taro. Naturally, the tooth stretches out the rest of the 105cm to lend the appearance of a great sword. The tooth is around two inches thick, often allowing for the weight itself to aid in it's cleaving.

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Personality: The tooth itself seems to have taken after Taro, being primarily stoic on their journeys. However, after their initial meeting and training, Kyōfu took to the Hoshigaki, most likely because he was the only one dumb enough to try wield such an encumbersome blade, even if it wasn't currently to a good standard. Some say that during combat, instead of the scraping of metal as is usual during clashes, a faint, hollow laughter replaces it.
Techniques: Kyōfu is considered to do one rank less damage than his own, to a minimum of E-rank:

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Hoshigaki weapons need to be apped using the pet template. do that and i'll look this over.

I believe I used the pet template or is there another one?

1) Under Species, please change 'Akuma no Kenjutsu' to 'Akuma no Kenjutsu (Standard Combat Pet), requires Bukijutsu (Kenjutsu)'. On the chance that he's used with a different sub-specialisation other than Kenjutsu (e.g. Swordsmanship), make the necessary changes.

2) Under Specialisations, please remove '(Standard)'. As a note, I'm stating here that I don't feel as if Kyōfu needs a sub-specialisation for Bukijutsu, as the sub-specialisations normally dictate what type of weapon you can wield, not what kind of jutsu you can learn. You're free to add one, though.

3) Please remove what damages it does from its Appearance section. Your pet will automatically gain stronger damaging abilities as it grows to higher ranks; this is to remove the need to edit this application each time your pet ranks up.

4) Under Techniques, please add the following, which details what damage he can do at each rank:

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Kyōfu is considered to do one rank less damage than his own, to a minimum of E-rank:
[spoiler]E-Rank: 3/4-inch cuts; very light bruises and scrapes.
D-Rank: Light bruises, scrapes, 1-inch cuts and piercing.
C-Rank: Moderate bruises, 1.5-inch cuts and piercing.
B-Rank: Can fracture bone, 2.25-inch cuts and piercing.
A-Rank: Broken bones, light internal bleeding, 3-inch cuts and piercing. Can cut partially through bone.
S-Rank: Shattered bones, damage to organ structures/moderate internal bleeding, straight-through cuts and piercing; blades at this rank can cut through bone With a correctly angled/aimed attack, limbs can be severed or ripped off.
SS-Rank: Bones crushed to a coarse powder, internal structures could be pounded to a paste, severe internal bleeding. Able to cleanly slice off limbs, and deal 5-inch cuts that can cut through multiple bones.[/spoiler]


To clarify, this means that Kyōfu will deal E-rank damage while he is either E-rank or D-rank, while he will deal D-rank damage once he hits C-rank.

5) In the future, if you wish for your item looked at, please post a link in the Item Modding Requests thread. Bumping your thread alone will be ignored by staff in the future.

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That should be all for now. Really very sorry for the wait and the confusion.

Xyxer wrote:Name: Kyōfu
Species: Akuma no Kenjutsu (Standard Combat Pet), requires Bukijutsu (Swordsmanship)
Rank: E-Rank
Specializations: Bukijutsu (Swordsmanship)
Elements: N/A
Appearance: All in all, the blade is 140cm from pommel to tip. The hilt itself is 30cm to the base of the weapon, with the pommel making up roughly 5cm of that number. Rough, makedo bandaging twirl up along the hilt to allow for more grip. The 'blade', which is the tooth of a rather impressive shark found a moderate distance from Kirigakure in the waters, fashioned primarily in the ritual for usage by Taro. Naturally, the tooth stretches out the rest of the 105cm to lend the appearance of a great sword. The tooth is around two inches thick, often allowing for the weight itself to aid in it's cleaving.

Spoiler:

Personality: The tooth itself seems to have taken after Taro, being primarily stoic on their journeys. However, after their initial meeting and training, Kyōfu took to the Hoshigaki, most likely because he was the only one dumb enough to try wield such an encumbersome blade, even if it wasn't currently to a good standard. Some say that during combat, instead of the scraping of metal as is usual during clashes, a faint, hollow laughter replaces it.
Techniques: Kyōfu is considered to do one rank less damage than his own, to a minimum of E-rank:

Spoiler:

Approved.