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1Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Empty Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:58 pm

Satoshi

Satoshi


D-rank
Name: Shiroimono
Species: Grey Wolf [Canis lupus]
Rank: D [Seijutsu Combat Pet]
Specializations: Seijutsu | Taijutsu
Elements: Katon | Doton
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Born to the Inuzuka dog packs, Shiroimono is a rather different specimen none the less, as she is massive in all senses of the word; very nearly the size of the average pony and easily one of the largest dogs in the clan's packs. This size comes from her lineage, her parts are both massive and carry the genes to beget massive offspring, so it wasn't all that surprising that she was always very nearly off the charts in terms of size and growth. Very nearly solid white in color, she has very small streaks of blood red scattered throughout her fur, as well as splotches of the dark red around her feet that give her almost the appearance of wearing red boots. She stands easily 1.4m (4.6ft) at the shoulder, and is 1.5m (5ft) from chest to the base of her tail, which is an additional 1m (3ft) long. Her canines are easily 3in long, and she has claws that are 4in long.
Personality: Shiroimono is a spitfire, forceful in temperament and not one to back down from her convictions and ideas. Difficult to train, and even more so to teach, she has a set idea of what her world is, and sticks to it with an unwavering belief. This is a corruption of the loyalty that runs deep within the Inuzuka ninken; taken to an extreme and changed by the influences of the wild wolf that still lingers within her bloodline. That being said, the loyalty of the Inuzuka ninken does still manifest as it should, and she will deeply bond to her partner in a way that all ninken would; protecting them with every aspect of her being, even if she doesn't always agree with, or get along, with her partner.
Techniques:
To be apped at a later rank.



Last edited by Satoshi on Tue Jul 12, 2016 7:23 pm; edited 1 time in total

2Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Empty Re: Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Tue Jul 12, 2016 6:16 pm

Harue

Harue


D-rank
For clarity's sake, under Rank, please specify if this is a 'Standard Combat Pet' or a 'Seijutsu Combat Pet'. Having Seijutsu doesn't automatically make your pet a Seijutsu Combat Pet, since you may have wanted a standard one for RP purposes.

Other than that, this seems to be in order. Fix that one nitpicking detail and it should be good to go.

3Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Empty Re: Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Tue Jul 12, 2016 7:24 pm

Satoshi

Satoshi


D-rank
Updated

4Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Empty Re: Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Wed Jul 13, 2016 6:56 pm

Harue

Harue


D-rank
Satoshi wrote:Name: Shiroimono
Species: Grey Wolf [Canis lupus]
Rank: D [Seijutsu Combat Pet]
Specializations: Seijutsu | Taijutsu
Elements: Katon | Doton
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Born to the Inuzuka dog packs, Shiroimono is a rather different specimen none the less, as she is massive in all senses of the word; very nearly the size of the average pony and easily one of the largest dogs in the clan's packs. This size comes from her lineage, her parts are both massive and carry the genes to beget massive offspring, so it wasn't all that surprising that she was always very nearly off the charts in terms of size and growth. Very nearly solid white in color, she has very small streaks of blood red scattered throughout her fur, as well as splotches of the dark red around her feet that give her almost the appearance of wearing red boots. She stands easily 1.4m (4.6ft) at the shoulder, and is 1.5m (5ft) from chest to the base of her tail, which is an additional 1m (3ft) long. Her canines are easily 3in long, and she has claws that are 4in long.
Personality: Shiroimono is a spitfire, forceful in temperament and not one to back down from her convictions and ideas. Difficult to train, and even more so to teach, she has a set idea of what her world is, and sticks to it with an unwavering belief. This is a corruption of the loyalty that runs deep within the Inuzuka ninken; taken to an extreme and changed by the influences of the wild wolf that still lingers within her bloodline. That being said, the loyalty of the Inuzuka ninken does still manifest as it should, and she will deeply bond to her partner in a way that all ninken would; protecting them with every aspect of her being, even if she doesn't always agree with, or get along, with her partner.
Techniques:
To be apped at a later rank.
Sorry about that. But I don't see any other issue with this, so this is 1/2 Approved for 2000 ryo.

5Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Empty Re: Shiroimono [Seijutsu Combat Pet] Wed Jul 13, 2016 7:35 pm

Ryoka

Ryoka


D-rank
Satoshi wrote:Name: Shiroimono
Species: Grey Wolf [Canis lupus]
Rank: D [Seijutsu Combat Pet]
Specializations: Seijutsu | Taijutsu
Elements: Katon | Doton
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Born to the Inuzuka dog packs, Shiroimono is a rather different specimen none the less, as she is massive in all senses of the word; very nearly the size of the average pony and easily one of the largest dogs in the clan's packs. This size comes from her lineage, her parts are both massive and carry the genes to beget massive offspring, so it wasn't all that surprising that she was always very nearly off the charts in terms of size and growth. Very nearly solid white in color, she has very small streaks of blood red scattered throughout her fur, as well as splotches of the dark red around her feet that give her almost the appearance of wearing red boots. She stands easily 1.4m (4.6ft) at the shoulder, and is 1.5m (5ft) from chest to the base of her tail, which is an additional 1m (3ft) long. Her canines are easily 3in long, and she has claws that are 4in long.
Personality: Shiroimono is a spitfire, forceful in temperament and not one to back down from her convictions and ideas. Difficult to train, and even more so to teach, she has a set idea of what her world is, and sticks to it with an unwavering belief. This is a corruption of the loyalty that runs deep within the Inuzuka ninken; taken to an extreme and changed by the influences of the wild wolf that still lingers within her bloodline. That being said, the loyalty of the Inuzuka ninken does still manifest as it should, and she will deeply bond to her partner in a way that all ninken would; protecting them with every aspect of her being, even if she doesn't always agree with, or get along, with her partner.
Techniques:
To be apped at a later rank.

Approved for 2000 Ryo

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