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1Unmei no okō  Empty Unmei no okō Fri Jun 24, 2016 10:05 pm

Rippa

Rippa


D-rank
Symbol: Unmei no okō  Tribal_spider_by_gekko_design_zpsthbr2aly


Clan: Unmei no okō [Weavers of fate]

Kekkei Genkai: Spider-Nin

Elements: Open

Specialization: Ninjutsu primary

Location: Kirigakure no sato

Clan History: These are spiders from the Osada island that originated from a sentient spider that taught Sero Osada Sage mode. In return for doing such her and her children were allowed to reside on his island. However after being introduced to Sero's chakra her children grew to be sentient and one in every thousand of them gained chakra within their system and began to learn how to transform into human form for extended periods of time.

Now a sentient race of wolf spiders these spiders can join Kiri society and work as shinobi in order to gain power. Unlike the usual people however they grow to about the age of a teenager in a little over a year in both maturity and appearance in human form. After which they began to age normally. All members of this clan have the choice to have learned all academy techniques from the library or the academy or to start without them.

Kekkei Genkai Description:
The ancestors of the clan were originally normal wolf spiders but over the course of time their genetic code had changed. Their chakra pool grew along with their intelligence and ability to manipulate. They possess the ability to understand and speak in human languages as well as turn into them using a clan jutsu they developed. This human form can be maintained for as long as the jutsu is active allowing them to seamlessly blend with human society. However unlike normal humans, they are able to have the ability to walk across any solid surface without the use of chakra, a trait similar to the jutsu Supernatural Walking Practice.

While they start with Ninjutsu only they have the option to learn anything but Bukijutsu. However if they take Taijutsu not only do they get the bonuses as listed in the taijutsu spec to either speed or strength they also get a bonus +1 to reaction time.

Drawbacks: The Unmei no okō are not familiar with society and find it difficult to expand beyond their base ability and must learn all their elements and their second spec from scratch. They start with only ninjutsu and no elements and must find a teacher to become true shinobi.

On top of this they also must take a spider trait while in human form which terrifies normal people. Any direct purchases for them from shop keepers costs 10% more ryo.

Members of this clan can not learn Bukijutsu and have difficulty understanding weapons. They take a bonus rank in damage from any blows from Bukijutsu or weapons and if it is a ranged weapon such as a bow or crossbow they take a negative one to reaction time when defending against it.

Lastly while in spider form they can not form any hand seals or hold any weapons. So they are limited to using jutsu that don't require either.

Members: (Members of the clan can be updated here)

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Name: Henkan jinrui (Transformation humanity - 変換人類)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: until released (No upkeep cost)
Cooldown: 4 posts (After jutsu is released)
Description: Member of this clan focus five chakra into their own bodies and shift with clothes on into a human form of themselves. Each time they do this they look exactly how they would of as human forms of themselves with one exception. They must take some previous quality of a spider they had...an extra eye, fangs, something of their choosing.

Name: Oikomareta emono (Trapped prey - 追い込まれた獲物)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 25 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The spider nin can form chakra in their palm or mouth and mold the chakra into a solid web that they can then fire at 25 meters per second that is one meter tall by one meter wide. If a target is caught within the web they are bound to their surroundings for three posts. Any jutsu of equal rank can break out of this or a Katon jutsu of a rank lower can burn through it. Anyone with B rank strength can remove themselves from this instantly.

Name: U~ebu de kyatchi (Caught in the web - ウェブでキャッチ)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 30 meter radius
Specialty: Ninjutsu Sensory
Duration: Maintained
Cooldown: Double duration
Description: The Spider focuses chakra all around themselves before molding it into thin webs which shoot out randomly and attach to everything. These webs are easily broken when touched and will do nothing to actually slow an opponent however when broken they reform and the Spider feels the vibration knowing exactly where the target is. This can be avoided by flying above the surrounding terrain as the webbing won't have anything to attach to up there or traveling underground. Any jutsu of Equal rank or a katon jutsu of a rank lower can destroy these webs entirely.

Name: Kyōdai no buki (Arms of the Mighty - 強大の武器)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C - S
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Maintained
Cooldown: double duration
Description: When in human form the spider has the normal appendages of a person. Two legs, two arms and a head. However this jutsu forces the transformation further to produce more arms equal to their number of legs at max rank. Empowering them to jutsu levels. The user can choose to use less arms at will with the same power.

C rank - At C rank the individual doesn't grow any extra arms. Instead the two arms they currently have become empowered with energy flowing around their arms like a faint glow takin on the image of large clawed hands. On impact these hands can cause fractured bones.

B rank - At B rank the individual can utilize this technique on both their legs and arms as each limb gains a chakra glow around them like clawed hands of large size. On impact any of these hands/feet can cause broken bones and if they hit a vital spot can cause internal bleeding.

A rank - At A rank the individual can grow up to two more arms than before making a total of six limbs (Legs included). Each arm/leg coated in a nearly transparent chakra like large clawed hands. On impact any of these hands/feet can utterly shatter every bone in whatever body part they hit. If a direct hit is taken to the gut internal organs will rupture.

S rank - This is the final rank of the jutsu causing the final two arms to be able to be grown. Now with a total of eight arms/legs with three on either side of the torso each arm/leg glows dark with a clawed chakra over the hand/foot. Now direct blows from any hand/foot will tear completely through an enemy while glancing blows will turn bones to dust.

Note...large hands is just a descriptive. They may appear to be larger than normal but still within reasonable human hand sizes.



Last edited by Rippā on Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:03 pm; edited 2 times in total

2Unmei no okō  Empty Re: Unmei no okō Sat Jun 25, 2016 6:29 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
In General I'd like to know a lot more about the clan and their nature as spiders, a complete brief of that and how it works needs to be in the KKG section. Otherwise, these are just people with spider abilities, which, we have the asamorih clan for.

So in short, it needs more detail to seperate them from that clan. :)

3Unmei no okō  Empty Re: Unmei no okō Sat Jun 25, 2016 7:25 pm

Rippa

Rippa


D-rank
Edits made

4Unmei no okō  Empty Re: Unmei no okō Sun Jun 26, 2016 9:12 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
KKG

is ok

Drawbacks

are also ok

Jutsu

1/ is fine

2/ you could raise the strength req to C rank

3/ fine

4/ I'd like 6 arms a side max at S rank, you still have 2 legs remember?

5Unmei no okō  Empty Re: Unmei no okō Mon Jun 27, 2016 1:03 pm

Rippa

Rippa


D-rank
Edits made

6Unmei no okō  Empty Re: Unmei no okō Tue Jul 05, 2016 8:49 am

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
KKG

you're fine

Drawbacks

you're fine

Jutsu:

1/ is fine
2/ is fine
3/ is fine
4/ is fine

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