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1Yamato Kimura [Pet] Empty Yamato Kimura [Pet] Fri Jun 17, 2016 4:25 pm

shihai

shihai


D-rank
Name: Yamato Kimura
Species: Nekomata
Rank: D (Standard Combat Pet)
Specializations: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
Elements: N/A
Appearance:

Animal Form:

Human Transformation:

Yamato is a medium size Nekomata, weighing around 7 to 10 lbs, and has short and dense fur, coated with tan and orange/redish color, with prominent black stripes and tiger like patterns on his fur and two tails. Yamato has purple feline eyes, that may appear to glow in red color under certain types of lighting. At its feline form, Yamato cannot speak in the human language. In its human form, he has long red hair, red eyes, and having black pattern tattoos around his body. He can often be seen as bare chested, and wearing black pants, combat boots, and some jewelries as accessories. (The tattoos are presumably to be the black stripes on the fur of his feline form.)


Personality: Yamato, overall has a pretty relaxed personality, who can get a little bit energetic if he wants to hunt or play by the pool. He is not afraid of the water and can go in for a swim or hunting for fishes. But on most of the days he is pretty lazy and has to be carried to go out to anywhere, otherwise he does not like to be on the outside. He views himself as a house cat and doesn't like to be walked. Yamato prefers to take his afternoon nap under the sun, and surveying his surroundings quietly; mostly he kept his thoughts to himself. He does not mew, like ever, and feels sort of ok to be petted on a good day, and will rarely scratch anyone. If he doesn't want to be petted he will just jump away and go elsewhere.

However, despite the lazy attitude, when encountering with a smaller animal, such as a rodent or a bird, his hunting instinct can kick in and he might try to catch it. As a standard combat pet, he will go into battle only if the owner specifically asked him to, and she would better get him snacks afterwards, otherwise he prefers to lay on the sidewalk and watches as his owner get killed and wouldn't even move a muscle.  

Techniques:

Transformation Jutsu:



Last edited by shihai on Sat Jun 18, 2016 12:11 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Yamato Kimura [Pet] Empty Re: Yamato Kimura [Pet] Sat Jun 18, 2016 6:20 am

Harue

Harue


D-rank
1. I will assume this is a Standard Combat Pet, as your lack of the Seijutsu specialisation bars you from obtaining Seijutsu Combat Pets. Please move the '(Combat Pet)' from Specialisations to Rank, and change it to '(Standard Combat Pet)'.

2. Unless I'm mistaken, Standard Combat Pets may only learn Ninjutsu and Taijutsu as specialisations. Please correct me if I'm wrong or change this accordingly.

3. Again, unless I'm mistaken, Standard Combat Pets cannot have elements.

4. Removed.

5. Under Personality, you stated the following:
shihai wrote:As a combat support pet
A pet can only be either a Standard Combat Pet, a Seijutsu Combat Pet, or a Seijutsu Support Pet. Please change this to 'As a Standard Combat Pet'. 

6. D-ranked Standard Combat Pets are only allowed 1 D-ranked jutsu or lower. These jutsu can also only be related to their biology, body structure, or natural abilities, such as enhanced clawing attacks. As such, your Standard Combat Pet may not learn the Transformation Jutsu, or the Futon: Stream jutsu. Sorry. 



This should be all for now.

3Yamato Kimura [Pet] Empty Re: Yamato Kimura [Pet] Sat Jun 18, 2016 12:16 pm

shihai

shihai


D-rank
alright thanks~

Edited everything ^^ But going to go out on a limb on the last one.

Spoiler:

4Yamato Kimura [Pet] Empty Re: Yamato Kimura [Pet] Mon Jun 20, 2016 6:21 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Okay so I have a bit of a conundrum with this one.

-There is a clan in existence called the Nekomata clan which kekkei genkai is that they are essentially the feline counterpart to the inuzuka. So in a way, having a cat like that and not being part of that clan specifically is like having a pet dog and not being an inuzuka. 

That being said, there has been someone else who has a pet like this (though it was approved before this clan came in to existence) and there is no rules to state that you can not have a nekomata pet and be in a different clan.

So, baring this in mind, I will be okay to approve this if I have your word that you dont venture too much towards this pre-existing clan as to not cross any boundaries.
I apologise for how difficult this is to get through.

5Yamato Kimura [Pet] Empty Re: Yamato Kimura [Pet] Mon Jun 20, 2016 7:34 am

shihai

shihai


D-rank
of course! I only wanted the transformation jutsu so it looks cool, i promise that it is just a normal cat in any other way. Thanks Tenmei. ^^

6Yamato Kimura [Pet] Empty Re: Yamato Kimura [Pet] Mon Jun 20, 2016 8:13 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Excellent, thank you for understanding.
This Nekomata is APPROVED for 2000 ryo


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