Clan: Kurohebi

Kekkei Genkai: Death's Aura

Elements: N/A

Specialization: N/A

Location: Scattered

ms were the prisoners' food, cannibalism, the smell of rotting flesh, and blood and rusting metal filled the air, as dead gazes froze all that was in their paths.

Another tragedy occurred, and so the prisoners escaped many of them died, but still few remained, those few created a village where their clan can reside, outsiders were instantly killed, no questions asked, the five great villages angered at the heinous acts of these murderers, the village of  black serpents, attacked by all five villages and none survived or so they thought. Few continue to roam the open world with the dreadful past of their dreadful clan.

Kekkei Genkai Description:  

A venomous aura surrounds the clan members whoever is in range of their aura feels its dread. The aura of these monsters makes whoever is in its range feel sluggish and uncomfortable, losing 1 tier in speed and reaction time. A Genin's aura spreads throughout an area of three meters radius, then improves as special Jounin becoming an area of six meters radius, and improves as an S-Rank shinobi spreading throughout nine meters radius.

Their aura however, has its weaknesses, but still no one knows that the clansmen's aura is affecting them and all victims think this is some incompetence on their behalf. 

Nothing about the clan's powers is known, all that is known about them is their monstrous vicious fighting style, and horror they cause by their gore.



Explanation:

The clansmen were never adept at controlling their bloodlust, and one can say bloodlust is the curse of this clan. Their chakra pathways are slightly different from normal shinobi, instead of keeping the chakra circulating within the body, few chakra paths lead the chakra outside the body, but the chakra remains slightly connected to its original owner, and floats around them fusing with the aura, and becoming  one with the aura of the clansmen, after so is done, a new aura is created, instead of being just radiation of the body's chakra, after fusing with the clansmen chakra, it becomes a solid aura with a semi-solid non-visible body, and thanks to their ancestors, their chakra is abnormally dark,only the clansmen can handle the stress of this dark chakra.

The density and the darkness infused with their chakra makes it crippling for normal people, and thanks to their unique chakra pathways, the fusion of their dark, and dense chakra with their aura, occurs, after the occurrence of this fusion, their dark aura is born, leading them into their fate of solitude, and their eternal shortage on chakra.

A healing technique temporarily fixes the flow in their chakra paths closing them and preventing them from creating their usual aura.  

Drawbacks: 

**It can be seen by Dojutsus that see chakra or sense chakra, it can also be seen or felt through sensory techniques, but said techniques can only sense it if they're above rank 'C'.

As powerful as it seems, their aura can easily be dissipated, and that can be done striking the clansmen with a medical Ninjutsu, or healing the clansmen, the aura will be down for three posts. Aside from that it can easily be avoided by remaining away from the clansmen. The aura can also be so useful to a clansman, it can only affect Shinobi whom are one rank higher or of the same rank or of lower ranks.


Clansmen are also somehow burdened by an eternal shortage on Chakra, they receive a permanent  minus twenty to their Chakra, and their Chakra may only increase by forty for each rank up.

Members: 

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Serpent's Poison:

Serpents Parade:

Snake's Requiem:

Can someone review these  Abilities ?

Much thanks.

Looking good so far, an aura which slows others rather than buffing yourself, the ranges seem fine, it has nice limitations, Might wanna give some more detail into how it works though. :)

and an interraction with those who have the 'strong will' SC would be cool

Thank you for your help Ayakashi.

I think my clan is now ready for a full review.

Okay, I would like the chakra reduction to be twenty instead of 10. 10 is really negligable, otherwise, i would like you to have another active drawback (a weakness to an element/ spec, or a tier reduction of some form)

Also, please add that techniques/ doujutsu which can see chakra are able to see your aura, i know that's common sense, but, some people are silly and need it spelled out to not think the clan is unfair :)

The rest of the KKG/ Drawbacks is okay very well done~

First jutsu... DONT abuse this, but im going to say its fine OTHER than the fact i would like it to be a medical technique. You're interfering with chakra pathways in a way which would require extreme control within their system, to me that screams medical.

second jutsu, I'd like you to reduce the armour pen to armour of lower rank, not equal or lower, and you can also remove the damage of what damage the skill does when you penetrate it, as the armour describes how much it reduces attacks~

Third jutsu: make it reduce the cool-down by 2.

I've edited serpents poison

"These techniques are similar to academy techniques they can be used by all members of this clan regardless of the members' specialties." - remove this please.

Serpents poison: Make it 2 turns, and you should be cool.

Parade: Edit the range to a MAX of 25m at C rank, how fast are the snakes? and killing at a touch at S rank is not something that is going to fly, please detail the damage physically.

Requiem: It's a bit odd but it's fine for now.

Edited everything

I'm approving this clan on a probationary basis, I don't want to see the things you have here abused. I see a little bit of room for that to happen, but not enough to make me worried or concerned. If I hear about issues with this clan I send you a PM and pull this for revamp. oki?