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1The Pet of Ayakashi Empty The Pet of Ayakashi Sat Jan 17, 2015 7:24 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Trading this out for a better pic later <3
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Name: Bai-Hu
Species: Byakko
Rank: D
Specializations: Nin/ Tai
Elements: Fuuton
Appearance: A powerful white tiger of superior size and strength, than others which would normally be found in the wild. Its snow white - silver fur pristine aside from the abyssal black lined stripes which streak across its body. Bai is 5m long from the tip of its head to the back of its legs, with a further 2.4m long tail. Bai-hu also has 3" claws on each foot and fangs with 3.5" Incisors which are weapons one rank lower than Bai-Hu.
Personality: Bai is a proud, skillful and large animal who's royal demeanor is a combination of a samurai's honor and a knight's chivalry molded into one. Easily insulted, but having a soft heart toward the innocent, Bai can be quick to anger, though he has an immense respect for Ayakashi as a leader, her voice the only one often able to pierce through his anger.
History: They say that the sacred white tiger reveals itself when the land has a just ruler. Why Bai-Hu chose to reveal himself to Aya could be considered a sign, though more likely it was Aya seeking him out. Having found Bai under attack in the mountains, charging down to join the fight against the humans as opposed to the tiger was something Aya did not think she would do so instantly, though her gut told her that something here was wrong. After her rescue, Aya had to fend off Bai-ho himself, unfortunately weakening him by the end of the battle, requiring him to retain in order to recover his full strength... After the rescue, Bai-ho decided to become Aya's companion, sworn to her for a debt of life.
Abilities:~ Bai-Hu has +3 tiers to strength and -1 to perception, speed and reaction time.

Claws & Teeth

D Rank: Cut and pierce 3/4 an inch Deep
C Rank: Cut and Pierce 1" Deep
B Rank: 1.5-inch cuts and piercing.
A Rank: Can fracture bone, 2.25-inch cuts and piercing.
S Rank: Cuts through bones, light internal bleeding, 3-inch cuts and piercing. Can cut partially through bone.



Last edited by Ayakashi on Mon Feb 02, 2015 4:24 am; edited 3 times in total

2The Pet of Ayakashi Empty Re: The Pet of Ayakashi Sat Jan 31, 2015 4:55 pm

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Just a few things

-Can the claws and incisors do any damage? How much can they do? You need to specify if it does or doesn't.

-For your +3 on strength. No. You can have no more than +2 ties on any stat and you must have -2 tiers on a different stat to balance it out.

Once you fix this, bump for further review.

3The Pet of Ayakashi Empty Re: The Pet of Ayakashi Sat Jan 31, 2015 5:20 pm

Ayakashi

Ayakashi


S-rank
Edits made~

4The Pet of Ayakashi Empty Re: The Pet of Ayakashi Fri Feb 20, 2015 4:51 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
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