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Illarion

Illarion


D-rank
Mission name: Obtain a Gryphon Egg.
Mission rank: C
Objective: Venture forth into the mountains to claim this rare prize.
Location: A far away land  several years ago.(Flashback thread)
Reward: 220 Ryo
Mission description: Few prizes are considered so valuable as the egg of a Gyphon. However as they tend to live in remote and dangerous aeries such a mission can be dangerous.
Mission details: A harrowing trek up an unforgiving mountain capped off with a mother gryphon who does not want her pride and joy taken from her. Hazards include rockfalls and packs of opportunistic predators.

Mission name: Wood and Iron.
Mission rank: C
Objective: Rescue local children from a Spriggan.
Location: A far away land several years ago.(Flashback thread)
Reward: 220 Ryo
Mission description: Peasant children have gone missing from a local village. Something has clearly been preying on them which needs to be stopped with all haste.
Mission details: Spriggans are a breed of nature aligned fey that hold a deep connection with forests and wild places. Human children feature heavily in their diets and thus they often come into conflict with mankind. The spriggan in this thread possesses C rank strength and woody claws as c rank natural weapons. Trees and vines around the fiend can also be brought to life by its magic.

Mission name: Consult the Oracle
Mission rank: C
Objective: Consult the Oracle regarding a great voyage about to take place.
Location: A far away land Six months prior to the current date.(Flashback thread)
Reward: 220 Ryo
Mission description: Hired by the Admiral of a naval expedition Illarion must consult the famous Oracle in order to receive a divination of the future.
Mission details: Consulting an oracle is rarely a pleasant experience and indeed one may discover things that they were better off not knowing. An oracles prediction can be both troubling and damning in equal measure and thus even going to such a figure carries long term risks.

Mission name: Ogres toll
Mission rank: C
Objective: Best the ogre demanding unlawful tolls on a bridge.
Location: A land far away several years ago.(Flashback thread)
Reward: 220 Ryo
Mission description: An ogre decided to take up a life of banditry and is using his size in order to intimidate travelers and pilgrims into paying an unlawful toll to cross one of the kings bridges
Mission details: The ogre does not know any jutsu and while it possess B rank strength it's speed is rather sub par being of D rank. The vagabond uses a great log as a weapon which can cause broken bones if it manages to connect with unarmored flesh.

Mission name: Hunt down the necromancer.
Mission rank: C
Objective: Slay a novice necromancer before his unwholesome art spreads ruin across the lands.
Location: A faraway land several years ago. (Flashback thread)
Reward: 220 ryo
Mission description: A student of the necromantic artes has set up shop in a local graveyard. Several walking cadavers have already caused casualties among those who have come to visit loved ones and pay respects. Since this sort of threat has a nasty habit of growing with time drastic measures need to be carried out.
Mission details: A C ranked sorcerer wielding both fuin and ninjutsu and his horde of ravenous C ranked undead what could possibly go wrong?

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
Denied
These missions are too fantasy related to be associated with the Naruto Universe. There are no necromancers, grphyons or Ogres. Please edit this and resubmit.

Illarion

Illarion


D-rank
Sano -  gryphons aside two of those things three things are actually in Naruto. 

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Doki <- Ogres.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning:_Impure_World_Reincarnation / http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release_Resurrection_Technique:_Corpse_Soil  <- Necromancy (We also have a clan of necromancers on the site rather humorously named clan Nekuro)

What I imagine you mean is that its too Western for what you want to see on saga. My character hails from a Western country (Inspired by the Legend of the Stone of Gelel movie which is about a bunch of foreign knights turning up in Suna) and I wanted to flesh out his history a bit before I submerged him in the culture shock that is the ninja world. I think the idea of a foreigner experiencing the oddities of the East is a fun concept which is why I decided to do it in the first place. If It causes too much trouble I can simply leave that aspect of his story left alone and do only things relating to Kirigakure and the surrounding areas but I feel its something of a missed opportunity.

Looking back at these they probably wouldn't have been approved anyway as I somewhat rushed them and the quality isn't exactly excellent. So either way there's probably going to be a re-write somewhere down the track.

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


D-rank
Well ogres are more like summonings, so if you would to add that they are summonings then you may do so but you cannot call them ogres since that is not what they are called. And also the Impure Resurrection technique is banned in saga as it is not able to be used in any way, shape or form. Your concept does sounds interesting, but try and keep things in the realm of what is already established in the series with little to no tampering of the rules established on this site.

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