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1Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Yuzu, Ren Gear Wed Apr 09, 2014 9:13 am

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Armor and Gear:

Weapons:

Items:

All weapons armor and items approved and paid for

Starter Pack:



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2Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:52 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
Custom running shoes:

-Change the type of armor to say (Light) Footwear

-These will offer zero protection from techniques, only from basic taijutsu and weapon strikes. As per light armor rules, it will reduce that damage by one rank from E-C rank, and 50% of a rank from B-Rank strikes.

Tsubakiri:

-Edit the weapon to reflect new C-Rank values.

Tsunakiri

-Edit the weapon to reflect new B-Rank values.

Tsukiyo

-Edit the weapon to reflect new A-Rank values.

-Increase the cooldown of the ability.

Kunai

-New kunai coding
Code:
[b]Item:[/b] Kunai
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Quantity:[/b] -set-
[b]Price:[/b] 30 ryo per kunai, or a pack of 10 for 250 ryo.
[b]Description:[/b] This projectile, on impact with human flesh, pierces half an inch into the target.
[b]Appearance:[/b] This knife spans 6 inches, from the tip to the base of the blade, with 4 and a half inches of handle and a small loop on the base of the hilt, which can be used to hook wire or other items.

Explosive Tag

-New Explosive Tag coding
Code:
[b]Item:[/b] Explosive Tag
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Quantity:[/b] -set-
[b]Price:[/b] 1000 ryo per tag. 19000 ryo for a pack of 20 tags.
[b]Description:[/b] This tag is highly adhesive and can be stuck to individuals or objects such as projectiles. The adhesive does not bond until the tag is fed the most minute amount of chakra [no chakra cost involved] Once a second charge of chakra is applied [again, so minute that no chakra cost is involved] or when exposed to impact force such as the object it is attached to hitting another object, the seal will activate, and after three seconds, will explode. When an explosive Tag detonates, it delivers a explosive blast that covers roughly one cubic metre. This explosion, while small, is powerful, able to deal second and second degree burns. On direct contact with an individual, such as when stuck directly to a victim or when a projectile bearing a seal becomes embedded in the target, the seals can blow off limbs and inflict third degree burns. Note, you can only possess a maximum of twenty explosive tags at any one point in time. Your tag count refreshes at the end of a thread in the same way as Shuriken and Kunai.
[b]Appearance:[/b] This piece of paper spans 6 inches in length by 3 inches in width. The tag itself is an imbued piece of chakra paper which is white with a red border. The edge of the tag is laced with a strong adhesive and kanji seals cover the explosive tag's face.

Senbon

-New senbon coding
Code:
[b]Item:[/b] Senbon
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Quantity:[/b] -set-
[b]Price:[/b] 20 ryo per senbon, or a pack of 10 for 150 ryo.
[b]Description:[/b] This projectile, on impact with human flesh, pierces half an inch into the target.
[b]Appearance:[/b] A Senbon is a 5 inch long, pin head thin metal needle.

Kirigakure Headband

-Stickied in the armor shop, get the code from there.

3Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 11:57 am

Yuzu Ren

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Edited everything mentioned above

4Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:22 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
Custom Running Shoes

Did you just add that bit about falling from 8m? O_o

Tsukiyo

I'd prefer this not be able to affect A-Rank jutsu at all and have the limitations that are currently on A-Rank jutsu be put onto B-Rank jutsu.

5Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:56 pm

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no that bit was always in there for the shoes

I editted Tsukiyo leaving the B-rank counter as it is but removing the A-rank counter and boosted the C-rank counter a bit to make it more useful

6Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 2:24 pm

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
That's not what I asked you to do. In fact, the more I think about it, the more that ability needs to have a chakra cost and the sword needs to be S-Rank.

7Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 2:53 pm

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So you basically want the B-rank counter to only have 1m range and a 3post cooldown

And this weapon did basically have the near maximum A-Rank Weapon cost so if it does not border on nearly being S-Rank its a waste of Ryo

8Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Apr 15, 2014 3:01 pm

Hayato

Hayato


D-rank
I'm ruling that this ability is an S-Rank ability, not approaching it. It should have never been approved in its current form. Your options at this point are either to remake it as an S-Rank weapon and pay the ryo difference or redo the ability of the weapon altogether.

9Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:43 pm

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Can i please get a refund on ryo so that i pay the minimum cost for a A-Rank weapon since if the ability has to be S-rank i wasting ryo since i never used the weapons ability

Originally paid 3000ryo if i can get a refund of 1000ryo having it match the value of it being a normal A-Rank sword which is worth 2000ryo it would be appreciated

I am also now the new holder of the twin blades

10Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Sun Apr 20, 2014 2:51 pm

Hayato

Hayato


D-rank
1k ryo refunded for the difference of the A-Rank sword.

11Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:03 pm

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Can not wait for my approval, anyways just bumping this as is tradition or whatever you call it...

12Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Wed Jul 16, 2014 6:52 am

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Scythe:

Shiru Cloak:

Old Protection of Armor : Offers protection of B-Rank Taijutsu and Bukijutsu(Two hits),C-Rank Taijutsu and Bukijutsu(Three Hits), and E through D-Rank Taijutsu and Bukijutsu(Four Hits). As well as protection from C-Rank and lower projectiles. Slight Protection(Up to C-Rank[Two Hits], E and D-Rank [Three Hits]) from ninjutsu.

Syekren gave this to me and the items need to be updated, the items are from his alt Kamikira and i am busy editing the cloak so it fits with the new rules please approve the scythe and cloak please. Used ANBU armor as a reference since there are no armor catalogues to reference from.



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13Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Mon Aug 04, 2014 8:42 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
The scythe is fine, the cloak however needs a real mechanism for defense. What is it lined with that it provides protection?

14Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Mon Aug 04, 2014 9:00 am

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bump made edits and put in bold what you mentioned i should put it since it sort of already was in there

15Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Tue Aug 05, 2014 11:49 am

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fixed it again sorry for not noticing the difference of D for light and C for heavy
Boku

16Yuzu, Ren Gear Empty Re: Yuzu, Ren Gear Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:35 am

Bokuden

Bokuden


D-rank
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