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1The Yuzu Clan Empty The Yuzu Clan Sat Jun 07, 2014 1:46 pm

Yuzu Ren

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Clan: Yuzu
Kekkei Genkai: Suijinou ( water god king )
Elements: Primary Suiton , Secondary any besides Katon
Specialization: Primary Ninjutsu|Bukijutsu(kenjutsu) , Secondary Bukijutsu(kenjutsu)|Ninjutsu
Location: Kirigakure
Clan History:

"Story of Yuzu"
Deep within forests hidden among the trees of the water country the Yuzu clan was a peaceful clan who had aimed to grow and collect fruit. They were citrus farmers however in the times of the first war they lived relatively peacefully and even the second, but in the third great ninja war while many shinobi had been away from Mizu no Kuni, the peaceful clan of Yuzu who had concidentally stayed in their own small village of Yuzugakure were invaded.
All the fruit and herbs were taken leaving nothing for the villagers and the clan itself began to die out. In an act of desperation the leader at the time Yuzu Shiatra took all the children along with her to find refuge as the war came to an end they met with the Mizukage seeking aid.

It was then that the Mizukage made a deal in exchange for them taking the Yuzu clan into their ranks the Yuzu clan must allow atleast one to two children to be trained as shinobi. Shiatra was suspicious but having no choice agreed to the deal and moved on.

Several years passed and the clan grew once more however the Yuzu clan never became large with many members becoming shinobi but Shiatra's eldest daughter one of the children who grew up decided at the age of twenty when she took over from her mother that they should change their terms.

It was unclear what was offered but the Yuzu clan had a talent for finding and collecting plants but the truth was that they had a very strong link to water which resided in all plants.

In exchange for allowing every member of the Yuzu clan to become a shinobi, they asked for the secrets of the seven shinobi swordsman and after years of training and practice they had developed ways to craft special weapons.

From gatherers and farmers to crafters and swordsman. However their true strength was in their ability to manipulate water developing one unique ninjutsu along with one secret kenjutsu as well as one mixed ninkenjutsu. It is unclear the structure of the clan as they seem to be scattered all over Mizu no Kuni however...

Their main home is currently a small citrus fruit forest beneath a lake, the entrance hidden from everyone besides the Mizukage and Yuzu clan members as well as those who receive a special seal provided by the Mizukage herself . While their numbers are small the forest beneath the lake is large. Their home beneath the lake also shows off their ability to use Fuuinjutsu sealing off areas to prevent the water from collapsing down on their home. The seals are waterproof as well as resistant to most breaks due to the seals being multiple seals upon seals.

Also as is custom shinobi have a seal placed on them at birth which is done through carefully skilled medical jutsu performed by several members of the Yuzu clan and the Mizukage. This seal is permanent due to its location with its removal resulting in death if done incorrectly

Kekkei Genkai Description: Suijinou

This unique technique allows an exceptional amount of water control allowing the members of the Yuzu clan to utilize water from the air itself fairly easily. The kekkei genkai has three distinct abilities that exemplify their dominance with Suiton. The main ability is known as the Suijinou Arts and in order to handle the intensified use of their arts they have a seal placed on them at birth.

The Suijinou Arts allow every suiton jutsu to have an extended or altered form that follows on from the original technique. The enhancement must follow the rules of the art and when adding this to jutsu requires a word count that is equal to 50% of the jutsu's training words required. These extensions also have chakra costs and a cooldown to refresh.

Suijinou First Art:

Suijinou Second Art:

Suijinou Third Art:

Drawbacks: Due to their excessive affinity for water they can not learn any Katon abilities as well as take an extra -1 from Katon abilities that hit them.
Members of this clan may not have a third or forth element.
May not take the specialist characteristic as Yuzu clan members are primarily focused on using swords.
Due to their unique blood that flows through their veins they are more difficult to heal or be treated than normal Pharmacophobia

Members: Yuzu Ren

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:


Depending on whether their primary is Ninjutsu or Bukijutsu:Kenjutsu they may start with one of the two beginning techniques.

Work in Progress until main abilities of clan have been modded , currently only using Kiri Shiryoku since it is not in danger of being affected by the new build:



Last edited by Yuzu Ren on Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:08 pm; edited 3 times in total

2The Yuzu Clan Empty Re: The Yuzu Clan Wed Jul 09, 2014 1:27 pm

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


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Please Fix these...

  • The code of this clan is a bit broken at the moment, so please fix this
  • I would like to see an image on the top of this app
  • This clan has way too many benefits, and a lot of disadvantages that seems to benefit only one kind of person. Take down the list of benefits(ideally the one regarding the situation +20 chakra pool) and also remove some of the disadvantages as well
  • Clan History shouldn't be in a spoiler, it should be seen in the open

3The Yuzu Clan Empty Re: The Yuzu Clan Wed Jul 09, 2014 1:50 pm

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

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Took Clan History out of spoilers

Can you get the link to the image i used originally please or must i find and repost it myself?

I removed some disadvantages so would like to see if its okay now

4The Yuzu Clan Empty Re: The Yuzu Clan Wed Jul 09, 2014 2:01 pm

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


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You will have to get the image on your own. Also fix your broken code before I look a this app any further

5The Yuzu Clan Empty Re: The Yuzu Clan Wed Jul 09, 2014 2:30 pm

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

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oh you meant the broken spoilers... sorry about that, i fixed them up and found the image again

6The Yuzu Clan Empty Re: The Yuzu Clan Wed Jul 09, 2014 2:49 pm

Sanosuke

Sanosuke


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I can't help but notice that the disadvantages of the technique seem to be a lot more limiting on what a clan member can do. I don't understand why they have to only take fuuinjutsu as a 3rd specialty from your history. Limiting nearly all of a character's choice of specializations, more importantly the 3rd and 4th specialties, is kind of tabooed. So please fix that. Also fix the coding on the disadvantages part of the clan, it's scattered and doesn't seem to make too much sense.

7The Yuzu Clan Empty Re: The Yuzu Clan Wed Jul 09, 2014 3:07 pm

Yuzu Ren

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was not sure what you meant by scattered and took the fuuinjutsu restriction out of the clan, is this what you wanted or is there something else you meant by scattered and sense?

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