Mitsuo Sarutobi Locker Revamp

*note* I will edit the Karisuma eye whenever the clan is revamped.

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APPAREL

Left Eye

Karisuma Eye Doujutsu:

Clothing:

Aoi Bara:

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WEAPONS

Justice and Retribution:

Fumetsu no honōnoken

Fumetsu no honōnoken:

Chita no Kiba

Chita no Kiba:

20 Kunai:

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ARMOUR

ANBU

Shadow Armour:

Mask of the Sword Saint:

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OTHER



USEFUL ITEMS

50ft of Wire:

UKIYO'S STUFF

1 Sharingan 2 Tomio Ama path

I see we're not supposed to post these in the request threads, so I shall bump it~

I don't like doing this, but as this is a significant amount of custom content, I'll have to tackle this five items at a time. I won't count the E-ranks that have no protection within this number. Sorry for the inconvenience caused.

Karisuma Eye Dojutsu

1. As you suggested, we'll tackle this after the Karisuma clan revamp.

Shroud of Shadows

1. Under Protection, you mention very vaguely that "the cloak always masks the wearer's exact location so that they are protected from fine targeting abilities".

I'll need you to give a Perception whereby, even when you're wearing this cloak, others are able to view you, with a blurred image or clearly without distortion. I'm assuming this is what you mean by 'fine targeting abilities'. If you instead mean jutsu, then no, it'll have to be changed.

2. Under Ability/Function, change "hides the wearer and their effects" to "hides the wearer and their items". Furthermore, you'll need a chakra cost per turn to hide your items and yourself from S-rank sensory jutsu.

3. So, let me get this straight. Essentially, anyone with a Dojutsu has its effects negated when they're looking at your character? If this isn't the case, please feel free to correct me. However, if this is indeed the case, it seems far too powerful for an S-rank item to disrupt all Dojutsu and sight-based sensory jutsu of all ranks when looking at you, especially without a chakra cost.

4. Your item seems to have three abilities. You're able to mask your position, hide yourself from S-rank sensory, and negate Dojutsu/sensory. S-rank items are, to my knowledge, only able to have two abilities - one passive and one active.

5. This is likely just me, bu I find the Appearance slightly confusing. When it's worn, it dissolves into a shadow shroud around the wearer. Wouldn't this allow others to see your position, as it's a three-dimensional blob of shadows moving about? Furthermore, I believe you mean 'brooch' instead of 'broach'.

6. Under Type of Armor, you need to state 'Light' or 'Heavy'. You can keep that it's a cloak, if you like. Also, keep in mind that if you don't add that it can protect against physical attacks, reducing the damage from basic attacks, your cloak is unable to do that.

Clothing and Aoi Bara

Spoiler:

Twin Blades: Justice and Retribution

1. The quantity for this would be ‘2 (1 pair)’, as you’re buying two longswords.

2. For the Appearance, I will need you to provide the measurements of both Justice and Retribution in metric. Generally, I’ll need the length of the blade, the length of the handle, and the width of the hilt. Any additional details you feel like adding would be greatly appreciated.

Messiah

1. The abilities seem a bit too powerful for my liking.

For one thing, the passive ability seems to be that this interacts with other items and people as if it were 1 rank higher. This is a bit too powerful, even for an S-rank. I’d like for you to tone this down. If you do insist on this, I’ll have to direct you to Tenmei or Bokuden, as I don’t feel comfortable allowing this.

For another thing, the active ability seems to be that you can pay 20 chakra to cut through any S-rank Doton jutsu. This is… also a bit too powerful. Change it such that it can cut through A-rank Doton defensive jutsu, and it should be good.

2. Once more with the Appearance, I’ll need you to add in the dimensions of your weapon.

Fumetsu no honōnoken

1. I would like you to reword your ability, so that paying 20 chakra intensifies the heat along the blade, allowing it to cleave through armor and cause third degree burns.

2. Please change the wording on this weapon’s damage such that limbs can be severed or ripped off with a correctly-angled/aimed attack. With the way it’s written, it seems too much like it resembles the SS-rank variant of cutting damage.

3. Again, add dimensions to the Appearance. Please remember these have to be in metric.

Chita no Kiba

1. Dimensions of the tanto under Appearance, please.

This is a lot of stuff, and I may have to look at the fixed versions again to better ensure that your items are in line with the guidelines. Also, I would prefer if you could provide the links to where you acquired Ukiyo’s stuff.

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That should be all for now.

Ukiyo's death thread http://www.narutosaga.com/t10000p50-following-his-footsteps-to-find-matsurodefectionkirigakure-no-sato

Okay, so lets start with this. The thread where I killed Ukiyo, I was awarded her locker after she died, such are the death rules. I don't remember if this was the case or not but I believe she deleted her locker when she rage quit the site. If not the link to her locker is here http://www.narutosaga.com/t6776-senju-ukiyo-locker#76273 I sold of most of her stuff before, and in my locker is all that's left. The 3 Tomio was Syekren's which Ukiyo had taken in that thread. Ask Ayakashi if you want more clarification on her stuff, or Strafe. They were two of the admins who were calling that thread and what happened with her.

I fixed the Sword of the Immortal Blaze, Justice and Retribution, and the Chita no Kiba, I will be selling The Shroud of Shadow and The Messiah because I didn't create them and have no interest in nerfing them like that when they've both gone through this already. I'll also be selling the cheetah pet.

All that leaves is the Twin Blades, the Immortal Blaze, Chita no Kiba, and my armor, which is 1 rank upgraded ANBU armour. Also the Kunai and wire are from the catalogs.

Twin Blades: Justice and Retribution

1) Increase the chakra cost from ten chakra per blade to fifteen chakra per blade.

Fumetsu no honōnoken

Mitsuo wrote:

Fumetsu no honōnoken:

Approved.

Chita no Kiba

Mitsuo wrote:

Chita no Kiba:

Approved.

Mitsuo wrote:

20 Kunai:

Approved.

Shadow Armour of the Sword Saint

1) Under Protection, adjust its values to reflect the following passage:
"Light armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are 3 ranks lower than the armor. Basic attacks of one rank higher or below do 1 rank less in damage. Any strikes of 2 ranks or higher bypass the armor entirely."

2) Give the Ability/Function of hiding yourself from A-rank chakra sensory a chakra cost, e.g. 5.

Mask of the Sword Saint

1) As with your Shadow Armor, adjust the values under Protection to reflect the following:
"Light armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are 3 ranks lower than the armor. Basic attacks of one rank higher or below do 1 rank less in damage. Any strikes of 2 ranks or higher bypass the armor entirely."

2) You may remove the item's durability values under Protection. All durability values are standardised unless otherwise mentioned, and yours is below the site default.

3) Edit your coding for Ability/Function. The bolding is missing.

Mitsuo wrote:

50ft of Wire:

Approved.

Ukiyo's Stuff

In this post, Syekren's eye was removed before he trained it to the three-tomoe. As such, it remains a two-tomoe.

As there was no mention by Ukiyo as to how many Sharingan she had prior to her death, and as her item locker has been deleted, I'll consult others as to the approval of four two-tomoe Sharingan before continuing with this.

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That should be all for now.

After discussing the matter with Bokuden, I am unable to approve your Sharingan unless there is hard proof of her being in possession of those Sharingan at the time.

As such, I will only be able to approve Syekren's two-tomoe Sharingan, which was taken from him within the thread itself. The other four Sharingan will not be approved until further notice.

Alrighty, lets do this.

Fixed the chakra cost on my twin blades, but I don't know why you didn't ask this last time. Would have been easier.

My Armour of the Sword Saint is one rank upgraded ANBU armour, so one rank bump to everything. I reforged my original armour into this. I therefore don't see a reason to have a chakra cost on it, unless you are also updating the original ANBU armour, which you should probably do. Until that happens though, I don't see why this is an issue. If you do that I will add it in, though as it is something passive I don't see why it should drain chakra for the user wearing the item. Mitsuo was an ANBU Captain and had these items as they were originally.

ANBU Armour:

Fixed the mask.

As for the eyes, which I'm not going to be upset about losing a couple, but more for the frustration of having to go through this a second time years after the first time I had to do it, which stressed me out enough and, mixed with many other things, was a contributing factor to me leaving the site, I cannot prove what she had in her locker because in an act of rage when she quite literally rage quit the site, she deleted her locker, and Star, Tame, Ayakashi and I had to piece back together her items. I have a link to another thread where she stole 2 sharingan, but have not been able to find another thread. So I do not have 5, and I do apologize for being incorrect on that.

http://www.narutosaga.com/t8413-reading-and-meeting-perhaps-open-no-kill

While this thread was frozen, that occured after Ukiyo took Izanami's eyes. He had given her permission to take both because he wanted to make a blind Uchiha. I have talked to him about this recently and he confirmed as much to me. Izanami is Tsuneo so if you wish to ask him you can feel free to message him. While Ayakashi may hold to the fact that he should have killed Ukiyo in that thread, it never had a chance to resolve so only what had happened remained and she was killed later on. Ukiyo did not state what she had on her, though she kept referencing how she had just taken Izanami's eyes in the thread, therefore making it seem as though she would still have them. During this time Ukiyo was not living anywhere and had nowhere to store her items but on herself, as she had left her home behind long ago. A killer's spoils are the all of the items of their opponent, and since that is the case there were 3 Sharingan that can be proved, so therefore 3 that I have. I am aware that this is apparently a lot, but it is also fair after what I had to go through between fighting Ukiyo, waiting for a month for a ruling while dealing with admins and backlash from Ukiyo, a friend of mine, the entire time, and then having to go piece together her things after that. I would also have 2 Byakugan were it not for the ruling that those eyes were destroyed. I hope that this is enough for you.

I asked Ayakashi to give me a hand because he was one of the people who were helping me the first time I went through this, so there is no need to give him crap for trying to help me. He is simply a friend trying to keep another friend from leaving the site again.

Twin Blades: Justice and Retribution

Mitsuo wrote:

Justice and Retribution:

Approved.

Shadow Armour of the Sword Saint

Mitsuo wrote:

Shadow Armour:

Approved.

Mask of the Sword Saint

Mitsuo wrote:

Mask of the Sword Saint:

Approved.

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I apologise, but I'm still unable to approve any but Syekren's two-tomoe Sharingan.

I would like you to correct me if my facts are wrong, but while it may be true that she had multiple Sharingan, there is no definite proof that she had any more than one Sharingan - Syekren's two-tomoe Sharingan - with her in the thread upon the time of her death. After bringing the matter to staff, the decision from Bokuden is that only one Sharingan, Syekren's two-tomoe, will be counted.

Very well, I can't argue that. Thank you for your patience, and for helping me get through that. Since all of my items are now approved, I will move the updated versions into my locker.