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1Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Thu May 22, 2014 6:43 pm

Chisaki

Chisaki


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Sage Mode

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D-Rank

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C-Rank

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B-Rank

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2Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Mon May 26, 2014 11:43 pm

Keiko

Keiko


D-rank
Clan and library jutsu will be left alone for now, those will need to be replaced once the clan is edited / the new library revamps are released.

Sprigs Cutting Technique: Specify the damage that these branches can cause in their short range form, their projectile form (give this a speed as well), and their larger branch form.

Underground Roots: Decrease the speed according to the new jutsu guidelines.

Destructive Rising Rock Pillars: The breaking of bones needs to be limited to a certain area, not just full body injuries, and the number of shockwaves needs to be specified.

Embodiment of the Water Angel: Specify the maximum height that she can fly to. Decrease the damage of the projectiles to two inches, and remove the suiton buff.

Triad of the Ferocious Maw: Change anything (speed / range / damage) that doesn't fit with the new jutsu guidelines.

3Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Tue May 27, 2014 7:45 am

Chisaki

Chisaki


D-rank
Think I got it.
Bump~

4Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Sat May 31, 2014 11:17 pm

Keiko

Keiko


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Sprigs Cutting Technique: Damages have not yet been provided as requested. I want specific details, ie. 1 inch cuts.

Embodiment of the Water Angel: Projectiles that can be easily swept aside should be limited to B rank or below if not chakra enhanced, and C rank or below if chakra enhanced.

Triad of the Ferocious Maw: Remove the increase in speed by 5 m/s entirely.

5Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Sun Jun 01, 2014 7:44 am

Chisaki

Chisaki


D-rank
Sprigs Cutting Technique was originally a clan jutsu, so I've removed it for the time being as it will most likely get updated with the clan jutsu.

Decreased it to B-Rank on Embodiment of the Water Angel.

For Triad of the Ferocious Maw, I assumed you meant the S-Rank so I lowered it by five as requested.

6Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Sun Jun 01, 2014 1:40 pm

Keiko

Keiko


D-rank
Sprigs Cutting Technique: Ah, my apologies, I forgot that this was a clan jutsu.

Embodiment of the Water Angel: It still says A rank projectiles that can be swept aside. I'd also like the height to be decreased to 60 m.

Triad of the Ferocious Maw: Sorry, that was unclear. I mean for say, the B rank (and any other rank where it applies) tier, where it says "the speed increases by five each post, up until the third post when the dragon disperses". I want that to be removed.

7Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Sun Jun 01, 2014 2:09 pm

Chisaki

Chisaki


D-rank
I lowered everything you requested on Embodiment of the Water Angel.

Removed the speed increasing on Triad of the Ferocious Maw.

8Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Sun Jun 01, 2014 9:08 pm

Keiko

Keiko


D-rank
Triad of the Ferocious Maw: A couple other changes for the S Rank tier. Decrease the breath radius to 20 m. When splitting, explicate that in some form, when it's taking a post to prepare to split, it is quite obvious, meaning that it can give the opponent a chance to attack it before it fully splits. So it's not just a one-post prep with no actual action, and then an instantaneous splitting the next post.

9Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Mon Jun 02, 2014 10:30 am

Chisaki

Chisaki


D-rank
Changes made

10Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Tue Jun 03, 2014 7:47 pm

Mikage

Mikage


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Your jutsu list update is Approved.

11Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Sun Jan 04, 2015 1:04 am

Tame

Tame


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Satan Soul: Demonic Body Reversal - If this technique lets you use other jutsu that require it as a prerequisite as part of their power balance (which I see to be so on a few here), it shouldn't be doing nearly this much. You say it's more of a release than a jutsu, but it has quite a good deal of power for the type of jutsu it is (high speed movement/flight). Tone it down in both height and speed.

12Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Empty Re: Senju, Chisaki [Jutsu Update] Tue May 19, 2015 2:52 am

Noriko

Noriko


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Bumping for edits.

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