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1Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Fri May 09, 2014 2:39 am

Binsu

Binsu


D-rank
- The Forbidden Locker -


Lightning Tattoo (tattooed on right shoulder):

Raiton Ring:

Hades the great (Pet):

ignore:



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2Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:02 am

Binsu

Binsu


D-rank
bump

3Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sun Dec 07, 2014 1:15 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Alrighty

-All catalogue items can be moved back to your locker

-Lightning Tattoo: +1's are no longer allowed. Substitute for something else like it allows the user to have additional affects to raiton techniques. Or grants the ability to use jutsu of one rank higher. Or something else that is not a +1.

-Location Tag and Home Tag: Are fine as they are.

-Cameleon Skin: Just make sure your armour fits under the Light Armour' guidelines and that your chakra ability is moved to under the ability heading.

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Hades:
Okie dokie. So one thing to just bare in mind of with the new system: is that all pets start off with the base stats of it's rank. Which determines the strength, speed etc of the animal and it's normal, non chakra based techniques. Now for the jutsu

Claw: C rank techniques can only go as far as to fracture bones and leave deep bruises. If you want the damage to remain the same, the jutsu will need to be of a higher rank. This is also a maintainable jutsu? I would like to specify how many times this can be used per post with an increased cool down.

Senbon Fur: Senbon can pierce half an inch in to skin. I would like you to add this in somewhere

Cocoon: Will get back to this one
Bear King: Is fine

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Enhancing Blade: Is fine the way it is and can be moved back to your locker

Daken:  You mention that the sword is the same as any other S rank sword. You need to say what that means. Use the guidelines description of an S rank

Static edge: I find this balanced enough and can be put back in to your locker.

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Anbu mask, Porcelain Mask: Are fine and go back to your locker

Anbu armour: Will get to this one later as well

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Finally, your Sharingan is a clan item so this can go back in to your locker until the Uchiha clan has been updated.

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Once you have fixed all of this and moved the items that have been given the 'ok'.
Bump for further modding.

4Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Tue Jan 27, 2015 9:23 pm

Binsu

Binsu


D-rank
Edits Made, Bump ~

5Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sat May 23, 2015 8:13 pm

Noriko

Noriko


D-rank
Lightning Tattoo must be S-rank.

15 chakra per post to defend against any jutsu is a bit under-cost.

Hades' Cocoon has an incorrect Duration (and by extension cooldown).

Daken: Isn't this essentially the same type of blade as the Serpent's Tongue Seven Sword?

S-rank ANBU Armour: Refer to the Item Guidelines on Armor. This looks Light to me, and is most likely upper-body armor (torso?). The ability needs an upper limit on what rank/tier of Perception and what rank of chakra-sensory it can fool.

6Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sun Jul 26, 2015 10:40 am

Binsu

Binsu


D-rank
Lightning Tattoo: not really. Based on the items rules and using the example for A rank items, this tattoo's ability is not mechanical, but nor does it require chakra to use. The Kiba swords' ability to conjure up lightning without chakra is far from a mechanical ability, yet i don't see why the rules don't also list them as S rank instead of A. Keep in mind that i cannot change the rank of any of the items on this list. Please re-look this ~

15 Chakra thing: you cherry picked my wording, it's 15 chakra for any ONE jutsu of equal rank to the armour or lower for that one post only. In any case i forgot to add in that ability will have a 2 post cooldown and if that isn't enough i'll also bump the chakra cost to 20 per use (per use as in one post use, wait 2 turns, then use again. Not 20 chakra to maintain, it's not a maintainable ability) and if that's not enough i'd like a second Admin to look at this before i start pointing fingers at other people's OP stuff that's similar to this.

Also i've noticed that the Chameleon is a fullbody suit and those are nolonger aloud (they were when this was created) so i take it i have the right to make it into not a full body suit and change it's entire function/ability ( as it wouldn't really work if the suit was not full body) ??

Daken: in principle, yes, however it's a step-down version of the SSM version. Namely, of the 4 abilities of its better cousin (change from whip to blade, represent the user's will in the form of a fluid chain of blades, reduce the target's speed by -1 tier when cut and have it's blades detach from the chain to track distant victims before homing back to the sword) it can only change between whip and sword and at the cost of a greater chakra donation (5 chakra more than that required of the SSM sword) it can vaugely represent the user's will in the form of a fluid snake-like whip. But if even that's too similar i'll be willing to re-do the entire sword as a new S rank Sword.

ANBU Armour: this was enchanted before the latest ANBU update. Edited ~

Hades Cocoon: Edited ~

7Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Thu Oct 22, 2015 11:46 pm

Binsu

Binsu


D-rank
Bump

8Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sat Oct 31, 2015 10:03 am

Katsuko

Katsuko


D-rank
Lighting Tattoo: This looks fine. 1/2 approved

Cameleon skin: There are a few things wrong with this.
1) as you pointed out, it's full body and full body suits are a no go. So if you want to update it into something else you can. But, this can't be full body armour

2) i'm not really sure how a skin tight suit is giving armour in the first place.

3) This is doing ALOT of things, protecting you from jutsu, having 2 elemental types, can appear like it's not there at all. I'd like to see you cut back on it's abilities some.

The bear: also seems fine 1/2 approved

Daiken: I don't mind having a blade similar but not quite the same as the SSM blade. Remove the part in the appearance about cutting and piercing depth, and we should be good.

ANBU Armour: This is fine, but we are editing how light armour works to make more sense, please change it so it fits this guideline

Light armor can block all basic attacks (kunai, swords, punches) and make them negligible if they are 3 ranks lower than the armor. Basic attacks of one rank higher or below do 1 rank less in damage. Any strikes of 2 ranks higher bypass the armor entirely.

9Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sat Oct 31, 2015 1:28 pm

Binsu

Binsu


D-rank
Cameleon Skin: Replaced with Raiton ring
ANBU armor: sorted

Daken: i didn't know it resembled the SSM sword when i first made this, and i really hate the idea of carrying around a third-rate look-a-like of a legendary sword, so if it is ok i'd like to replace it the proposed sword. However i'd understand completely if i can't.

If i can't replace it i'll just resell it and app Senpu later.

10Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sun Apr 24, 2016 6:09 pm

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Lightning Seal Tattoo: APPROVED
Raiton Ring: APPROVED


All your jutsu for Hades which includes Claw, Senbon fur, Cocoon, and Bear King are APPROVED

The only thing that I will need you to add here, is the damage that Hade's claws and maybe fangs can do on their own. You are going to be need to look at the item damage one rank lower. So A rank damage for his dangerous bits.

11Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Empty Re: Han Itagaki[Locker Update] Sun May 01, 2016 1:20 am

Tenmei

Tenmei


D-rank
Excellent. Hades is APPROVED

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