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1Tegami Clan Empty Tegami Clan Sat May 03, 2014 5:08 am

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
Symbol: Tegami Clan NrOYOvZ

Clan: Tegami Clan "Letter"
Kekkei Genkai: Haitatsugan "Delivery Eye"
Elements:  Any element... Doujutsu is neutral
Specialization: Fuuinjutsu|Taijutsu

Location: Sunagakure

Clan History: The Tegami Clan has existed for a long time, however their true purpose will always ly in delivering the message that has been passed down with each generation.

Birth of the Clan:

Sunagakure Messengers of Sand:

Kekkei Genkai Description:

The Tegami Clan are not well known or legendary and the one great drawback is that when first using the eyes the users suffer a large reduction to their strength. The eyes drain the users physical abilities rather than draining excessive amounts of chakra. However to use their full power a price is always paid while being a small price in battle that small price may prove to bring about the users death. However with training this drawback becomes less painful and becomes almost negligable but to reach the full power of these eyes the price goes up and it comes down to not using them unless absolutely necessary.
Shiryoku Fuuin is a defensive ability that was developed when it was found that storing information or techniques in scrolls was not always the safest way. In reply to this the eyes were later trained in order to store techniques inside them with the limit of not being able to store more than the user can handle as well as having an inability to store items and specific jutsus. Each sealing ability they developed came with drawbacks however the art of sealing things in their eyes remained. Their memory is also very good due to the nature of the missions they undertake as well as the amount of knowledge needed to master fuuinjutsu. Clan members are taught fuuinjutsu and trained to run at a young age as a result of them relying on their speed and the ability to gather information as much as possible. In order to maximise there abilities they employed taijutsu as well and sadly even with multiple attempts they were never able to attain senjutsu as the eyes would keep taking the chakra and feeding off it rendering the senjutsu useless to gather chakra and useless to use as well.

This doujutsu collects charges which are used for doujutsu techniques. Threads always started with maximum charges.

Charge Gathering : Certain items can be used to refresh charges but in general the doujutsu needs to be deactivated to charge at 1 charge per post. At B-Rank the user gains 2 charges per post. S-Rank Eyes gain 3 charges per posts. Once deactivated the user may not reactivate eyes until atleast 3 posts have passed.

Haitatsugan

The appearance varies greatly depending on whether it is merely active and when it is using or not using techniques.

Initial Form Active
Tegami Clan LKnGgv5

Complete Form Active
Tegami Clan UvCnQf1

Clan Passive : Allows the user to use clan jutsu up until the rank of their doujutsu. Each eye stores 1 charge per rank of the eye.
While inactive 1 charge is gained per post this increases to 2 at B- Rank and 3 at S-Rank.
While active the user is able to use charges and has its range of insight increased
C-Rank Gains the ability to use the fuuinjutsu of his clan
Active state has 5 post cooldown when deactivated
D-Rank

Requires 1000 words to train and 100 ryo
Passive Stat Alteration : Strength -3 tiers

Insight Passive : The user is able to passively see the nature of elements within 5m of sight

Active : Increases the range of insight by 5m and allows the use of charges
-5 Chakra Per turn.

C Rank

Requires 2000 words to train and 200 ryo
Passive Stat Alteration : Speed +1 tier, Strength -2 tiers

Insight Passive : The user is able to see the nature of elements and read motion within 10m of sight

Active : Increase the range of insight by 10m and allows the use of charges
-5 Chakra per turn

B Rank

Requires 3000 words and 500 ryo + Chuunin Rank
Passive Stat Alteration : Speed +1 tier, Strength -1 tier

Insight Passive : The user is able to see the nature of elements and read motion within 15m. The user may learn the rank and nature of jutsus used within 5m

Active : Increase the range of insight by 15m and and allows the use of charges
-10 Chakra per turn

A Rank

Requires 5000 words and 1000 ryo + Special Jounin Rank
Passive Stat Alteration : Speed +1 tier, Strength -1 tier

Insight Passive : The user is able to see the nature of elements and read motion within 15m. The user may read the emotions of other people within 10m as long as he makes eye contact. The user may learn the rank and nature of jutsus used within 5m. Can see through genjutsu of A-Rank and lower within a range of 5m, this effect does not cancel or break out of genjutsu.

Active : Increase the range of insight by 15m and allows the use of charges
-15 Chakra per turn

S Rank

Requires 10000 words and 2000 ryo + Jounin Rank
Passive Stat Alteration : Speed +2 tier, Strength -2 tier

Insight Passive : The user is able to see the nature of elements, read motion and emotion within 20m. The user may learn the rank and nature of jutsus used within 10m. The user may also analyze ranks of items, armor or weapons within 5m. Can see through genjutsu of A-Rank and lower within a range of 10m, this effect does not cancel or break out of genjutsu

Active : Increase the range of insight by 20m and allows the use of charges
-15 Chakra per turn

Drawbacks: Tegami clan members may not learn any other elements and may not take the Hesitant(Element)

Members of the Tegami clan are unable to learn Senjutsu

Due to the large focus of chakra in the eyes the members of this clan take +1 rank extra damage from all taijutsu and bukijutsu.

Those who steal the Haitatsugan require fuuinjutsu to use the eyes as well as are unable to use charges necessary for clan jutsu.

Members: Tegami ....

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:

Sight Footsteps:

Shiryoku Fuuiin:

Otoshi Fuuin:

Catenaccio Counter:

2Tegami Clan Empty Re: Tegami Clan Sat May 10, 2014 4:30 pm

Ryuusei

Ryuusei


D-rank
This clan needs WAYYYYY more drawbacks before I even consider handing it to the jutsu mod to nerf the clan jutsu.

3Tegami Clan Empty Re: Tegami Clan Sun May 11, 2014 5:34 am

Yuzu Ren

Yuzu Ren

Dead
I would like to ask the reasons it needs more drawbacks please and any suggestions on potential drawbacks that are available...

Unless doujutsu in general are getting nerfed the eyes are not stronger than the sharingan or the byakugan except for a close range passive application that requires melee range. So would be nice if there was an actual Doujutsu template to work from to begin with...

going to go to suggestions now

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