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1Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Mon May 05, 2014 8:44 pm

Takeshi

Takeshi

Retired
Kekkei Genkai Jutsu



Uzumaki Sealing Style:

Chakra Chains:



E-Rank



Transformation Technique (変化の術 ~ Henge no Jutsu):

Doppelganger Technique (影分身の術 ~ Bunshin no Jutsu):

Subtitution Technique (変わり身の術 ~ Kawarimi no Jutsu)
:

Genjutsu Dissipation (幻術解 ~ Genjutsu Kai):

Supernatural Walking Practice (不自然歩く型 ~ Fushizen Aruk'kata):


D-Rank



Wind Release:

Wind Release:

Fire Style:


C-Rank



Wind Release:

Wind Release:

Fire Style:

Fire Release:

Fire Release:


B-Rank



Shadow Doppelganger Technique (影分身の術 ~ Kage Bunshin no Jutsu):

Wind Release:

Fire Style:


A-Rank



Wind Release:

Wind Release:

Fire Style:

Total Concentration:



Last edited by Takeshi on Sat May 17, 2014 9:56 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Mon May 05, 2014 9:34 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Clan jutsu and academy jutsu are fine, the former will be dealt with in a clan update, if necessary. Just be sure to update them when needed.

All library jutsu are fine, just be sure to update them when their respective libraries are updated.

Wind Haze is fine.

Flaming Tiger - Put in a speed, in meters per second, that the tiger travels. See the jutsu rules for speeds per rank. Also, increase the cooldown to 4 posts.

Wind Cloak - Change the word "rank" to "tier" to be in accordance with the new jutsu rules, and increase the cooldown to "Duration + 2".

Total Concentration - Change the word "rank" to "tier", increase the cooldown to "Duration + 2", and add a drawback to Takeshi himself after using this for more than 4 posts so that you can't just be immune to Genjutsu under B-Rank for as long as you want without consequence aside from chakra cost.

3Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Tue May 06, 2014 8:43 pm

Takeshi

Takeshi

Retired
Fixed everything. (I think)

4Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Wed May 07, 2014 9:11 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Wind Cloak - I said increase the cooldown to Duration +2, not the duration itself. As in, the cooldown would be the same as the length of the duration + 2 additional posts. Change the duration back to whatever it was prior.

Total Concentration - Same thing as Wind Cloak, but also, that drawback isn't going to cut it. I meant like a stat debuff that affects the user directly rather than their use of the technique, such as a one tier decrease in speed or perception or reaction time. Take out the part about the user being unable to withstand S-Rank genjutsu, if you wish.

Bump when you've made edits.

5Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Mon May 12, 2014 4:57 pm

Takeshi

Takeshi

Retired
Bump~

6Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Mon May 12, 2014 9:33 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
For wind cloak and total concentration, actually put in the specific words "Duration +2". Do this and I'll approve.

7Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Sat May 17, 2014 9:57 pm

Takeshi

Takeshi

Retired
Bump~

8Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Empty Re: Uzumaki, Takeshi [Jutsu List] Sat May 17, 2014 11:29 pm

Daraku

Daraku


D-rank
Your jutsu list update is approved~

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