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1Hebisho Clan Empty Hebisho Clan Thu Jan 30, 2014 5:30 pm

Akihiro Hebisho




D-rank
Symbol:

Hebisho Clan Snake-Clan-Mon


Clan: Hebisho

Kekkei Genkai: Hebi Kawa (Snakeskin)

Elements: N/A

Specialization: Taijutsu

Location: Konohagakure

Clan History: Before becoming Shinobi, the Hebisho worked as circus performers. Their flexibility and ease of movement made them beloved contortionists and acrobats. Some of the Hebisho, however, were displeased with their lifestyle.

One man in particular, by the name of Kazuo Hebisho, dreamed of a different life entirely; the life of a Shinobi. He was the man who created Hasai Hebi, the martial art that the Hebisho would one day master. Kazuo taught this martial art to his fellow clansmen, who seemed to take to it like fish to water. In just a few short years, Kazuo had convinced his clan to leave the entertainment business for good, and instead home their skills as Shinobi. He had also taken his place as the clan's leader, and was able to secure a permanent home for them in the Hidden Leaf Village.

As the generations rolled by, the Hebisho became more and more accustomed to their Shinobi lifestyle. Not only mentally, but physically. Their strange anatomy was now more suited to Hasai Hebi than their original occupations doing flips and crawling into tight spaces.

Today, the Hebisho are very adept Taijutsu specialists, and effective all around Shinobi. Their most desirable quality to some, and least to others, is their emotionality. They live within a small compound, which is more than adequate for a relatively small clan. The Shinobi don't consider themselves superior to anyone because of their bloodline, and the children are taught to trust more in their academy teachers and instructors than their fellow clansmen. There is no need for specialized training, since Hebi Kawa comes to the Hebisho as naturally as walking and breathing, and Hasai Hebi is taught like a recreational sport.

Kekkei Genkai Description:
Hebi Kawa:
Hasai Hebi:

Drawbacks: No member of the Hebisho clan may take 'Bulky' as a negative characteristic, because their clan's fighting style focuses on flexibility and maneuvering, and it is unusual for a Hebisho to have a bulky figure.  

Hebisho are required to take the 'Stamina' positive special characteristic, to simulate the naturally prominent slow twitch muscle fibers. They are also required to take 'Hesitant (Specialization)', because they are such a specialized clan, and feel uncomfortable with other methods.

As a final forced negative characteristic, Hebisho must take 'Pharmacophobia', due to their strange genetic makeup.

Hebisho must take Taijutsu as a primary specialization. While choosing grappling is not a requirement, it is what the clan's physical abilities are suited for, and is most commonly used.

Members:

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu:
Name: Sinking in of Fangs
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: Maintainable
Cooldown: 5
Description: The user focuses entirely on his/her slow twitch muscle fibers, which greatly increases his/her sustainable strength. For the first five posts, the user may exert 400 lbs of force. This number then halves every three posts. If done to a point where the force exerted is 25 lbs or less, the user feels intense muscle pain, giving them reduced strength for 2 posts.
    *One rank lower than their own at Genin and Chuunin
   *Two ranks lower than their own at Spec. Jounin +


Name: Cripple the Prey
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C-A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1
Cooldown: 2
Description: The user presses their thumb into very prominent tenketsu points, disabling the flow of chakra to the target limb for
    *Two posts at Genin
    *Three posts at Chuunin
    *Four posts at Spec. Jounin
    *Five posts at Jounin +
Additionally, at Jounin level, the user may precisely attack a large tenketsu point in the stomach, disabling chakra production in them entirely. However, this technique requires a 'Negation Surge', which also disables chakra usage in the user for the same number of posts. Note that these are not strikes. The user forces their thumb into the tenketsu points, temporarily crushing them.


Name: Strong & Frail
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: Maintainable
Cooldown: 3
Description: The user weakens their bone structure so that their bones are like rubber. After doing this, they achieve snake like flexibility and maneuverability.

2Hebisho Clan Empty Re: Hebisho Clan Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:27 am

Tame

Tame


D-rank
It looks in part of your Kekkei Genkai Description you describe a few of your KKG jutsu. This is unnecessary, and can be removed.

Custom Taijutsu subspec, looks fine.

Sinking In of Fangs: Detail what feats of strength this might entail (including damage done to the human body).

Cripple the Prey: This is dubious, as Taijutsu-only techniques that can seal the flow of chakra have been, and are, exclusively Juuken, the Hiden of the Hyuuga clan. However, Medical and Sealing techniques have the ability to suppress the use of chakra. In its current form, this is Denied.

Strong and Frail: This is Soft Body Modification, and is on the Banned list. Denied.

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